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Title: Tiger Valley, Baric's Story (For Noey)
Post by: scarypuppy on August 30, 2007, 04:46:56 AM
No specifics, this is a story for my Ama Noey, about her Future Son Baric Auden Burns, She is a Football Fan and loves my writing skills, so, This story is dedicated to Her and in the Future, Him.

So Far All I have to go By is that he is a Receiver for My High School (Noey Said To put him der) and is about 6'2, 220 Pounds, Fast, built, His Personality is Good Hearted, Strong, Brave, Worryfull about his Mom (Noeh) and Loyal To hish Freinds.

Brawley Union High School has one of the best Football Records, Gear, Programs in Most of California, with plays and Equipment to rival any JR College or Upper California School.

BUHS's Biggest Rivals are the El Centro Spartans and The San Diego Teams that sometimes play them.

He is on the Varsity Team.

More to Come as I have time to work on it, same with Universal Distress, Passing Through, Whispers of War and BUHS, sorry to readers of those stories for the long waits
Title: Re: Tiger Valley, Baric's Story (For Noey)
Post by: Dr. Strange on August 30, 2007, 11:18:46 PM
looks good eric.
Title: Re: Tiger Valley, Baric's Story (For Noey)
Post by: scarypuppy on September 03, 2007, 10:02:07 PM
"alright, if you guys dont pick it up were going to enjoy the wonders of Up-Downs, Come on, move your asses!" Baric pulled his helmet on tightly as he ran up to the 7 man sled, getting down in a 3 point stance, "Hurry up, im not doing up-downs because of you guys." Baric looked back at the rest of the line, he was training with the linemen for the moment. Bishop pulled up in his golfcart and put his whistle into action, "come on, move it, move it, move it." the rest of the line arrived and got into position, "left foot right shoulder on one ready?" the entire line moved the sled across the 100 yard football field, which was also the high school's rec-area.

(......Not in the mood to write anymore, ill finish this one up when I can.)
Title: Re: Tiger Valley, Baric's Story (For Noey)
Post by: Dr. Strange on September 12, 2007, 12:59:44 PM
its still beautiful. keep it up.!
Title: Re: Tiger Valley, Baric's Story (For Noey)
Post by: scarypuppy on October 01, 2007, 01:38:38 AM
New Posts Coming soon, Postponed till then