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Title: Darkness
Post by: Nintai Tamashii on August 20, 2007, 05:48:43 AM

Meh, I was bord and venting some fustration out on a certain lying bastard, enjoy

DARKNESS
I'm lost in the darkness of my soul
in the tears of sorrow I've cried
this pain is takin' it's toll
cuz you said I never tried
but I've been tryin' so hard
to make this work
and all you've done is bring me down

I can't take you cryin' anymore
can't take you whinin' anymore
I've reached my end
I'm over the edge
and lost in the darkness of my soul

Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: Rayne Blood Rose on August 23, 2007, 04:04:31 PM

i like it.it's real good and if you get angry just write poems  :upupdi3:

Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: ★Kuro★ on August 26, 2007, 03:30:00 PM

That's deep. O.O
But it gives me the feeling you're tired of his actions.
I love the style you use.  =3

Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: Nintai Tamashii on August 26, 2007, 06:36:45 PM

 :P thanks, and I am tired of his actions. I made this poem to vent all my anger and now I feel better :upupdi3:

Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: ★Kuro★ on August 26, 2007, 06:43:27 PM

Good.  :upupdi3:
Writing poetry really helps, I know exactly what you mean. :]

Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: Dr. Strange on August 28, 2007, 12:13:33 AM

O.o wow...{jus that word sus it up nicely} great poem nin, keep itt up *gives two thumbs up*