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Title: Chiroptikitty's Introductions
Post by: Chiroptikitty on May 12, 2010, 09:03:06 PM

:P Page 10 : Update is live! NSFW MATURE CONTENT :P

Uhm... Hello. I'm Chiroptikitty! *wave* I been lurking about. I started a comic at the furry forum, give it a look? It's called Juxtaposition. View it here at http://comic.thefurryforum.com/juxtaposition

I'm no good at html m n o p-s but I try hard. (Why won't my [first] [last] [next] buttons work!?)

Edit: All Hail Tweak, HTML master! Woohoo! And a pat on the head for me, because I got first/next buttons!! ^_^

Feel free to post comments on it here or on the comic itself, I can't wait to hear the community response. *nervous giggles*

Title: Re: Chiroptikitty's Introductions
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 12, 2010, 09:34:43 PM

Its hard to figure out what's going on, partly because of the rather chaotic lack of definition between elements.
Also the constantly changing font which are all complex and hard to read.

Title: Re: Chiroptikitty's Introductions
Post by: Chiroptikitty on May 14, 2010, 03:31:59 AM

Excellent! I was worried about using the different fonts. I was trying to mark the distinction between the types of speech, but maybe if I change the dialog I can make it come across better? So following this, I'm having one font for all spoken dialog, and wild fonts for sound effects. I updated today, so give it a look?

Title: Re: Chiroptikitty's Introductions
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 14, 2010, 11:01:15 AM

Ok, this is better, I can kind of understand things now, though mostly the reason i couldn't understand the first time was that i went straight from the first page to the last, thinking there was only one page. You need a "Next page" "Previous page" thing because almost nobody would look through the calendar on first glance.

As for the story itself... well my creative writing teachers told us that we shouldn't write vampire stories for our assignment. They've been done to death in recent years, BUT you have already committed yourself so you need to complete it. I would be interested to see where this goes, i'm just warning you that you stray into oversaturated territory.

so far though, kind of interesting, need to see more to have a more complete opinion.

Title: Re: Chiroptikitty's Introductions
Post by: Chiroptikitty on June 03, 2010, 06:13:07 AM

All right then. Now that I figured out the next/last buttons, I need to advertise. So I'm holding a poll for a banner. What an original idea!