:o Wowie. You're REALLY good. You've got a cute style. :3
AsiaBunny: Really? Seriously? No crit? And I draw hands better than you???? o.O I thought you were like THE professional on this site. Hahahaha. ^_^ Thanks though. I appreciate it. And my story prowess? With words like *waaahhh waaah* in the script I thought it was little more than elementary. Guess I'm better than I thought. *blash*I'm no artistic expert. I'm the last person you want criticising you on art. Also, don't go thinking I dont have anything to criticize, but I only criticise what I think the person can fix quite quickly. The only way you yourself can improve this stuff is through hard graft.
AsiaBunny: Really? Seriously? No crit? And I draw hands better than you???? o.O I thought you were like THE professional on this site. Hahahaha. ^_^ Thanks though. I appreciate it. And my story prowess? With words like *waaahhh waaah* in the script I thought it was little more than elementary. Guess I'm better than I thought. *blash*I'm no artistic expert. I'm the last person you want criticising you on art. Also, don't go thinking I dont have anything to criticize, but I only criticise what I think the person can fix quite quickly. The only way you yourself can improve this stuff is through hard graft.
As for your story, there's not much to make a solid opinion on, but you have some good ideas on character and you have quite a cinematic view and pace to the work. As for the waah waah, I didnt really notice that much on the page. It's negligible. Though that said, if I will nitpick, the last page is a bit clumsy, especially the emphaticness of the shrug, it's too big with those wavy lines. Also "Too slow" is a cliché.
but these are small things.
you're good at what you're doing.
And, to Kitt, I TRIED to go heavy with my pencils. I TRIED I tell you.
Kay! Thanks for pointing those things out to me. The story (called "Suicide Lollipop" for obvious reasons later) is intended to be darkly comedic in an insane way, that is, normally sad things are portrayed humorously and with lots of chibis----> *points at last page* My inent was to show that Courtney didn't really CARE that she was seated in front of a perv by her shrugging so dramatically with big eyes. Lolz. But, yes, I admit I don't have a knack for effects, as I lack tone sheets and other professional media thereof. Do you think it would be better if I took out the wavy lines and left the background blank? Or something?
... drawing with a tablet is freaking hard! It's sooo hard I don't get it I don't get it...this isn't like drawing on paper cause I can't look at my hand! So hard! ...
Here is Vee's request....it is very very sad that it took me so long....hopefully the next in line won't take so long!Already replied to your PM to me, but I'll reply here to.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5539782/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5539782/)
nice work you should try and do some commotions
With these coloring skillz, do you think I could sucessfully color my own manga?Go for it! ^_^
btw what program did you use to put down your line art
Here we go. I painted the cute one. I'm doing some color work for my mate as well, so will post when I finish!
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5798708