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Title: Pride of the Queen (for Xleena)
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on October 31, 2009, 08:50:16 PM
Hey all! I wrote this for my good friend Xleena and would have posted it about ummmm 5 months ago but then the computer problems started... anyways, without further ado, here is Pride of the Queen
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The Queen sits in her forest home
drinking banana juice and admiring her jewels
"None can tell my what to do."

Xleena fancies a stroll
And wanders through her land
"If only there were others..."

She hears a sound coming from behind
And gives a proper
"Hello? Who goes there?"

They stop and reveal themselves
Arms outstretched
"We do. And we search for a home."

She stops and considers
and gives a large smile
"You are welcome here."

They sit next to the Queen
and inquire her
"Why do you wander so?"

The lioness looks at them
with a sparkle of hope in her eye
"I search for friends in these woods."

The visitors look at each other
and give her a grin
"We think you have found them."

"I am Kindran."
"I am Riku."
"And I am Xleena, the forest Queen."
=^,-,^= comments and critique are welcome! Xleena, I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it!
Title: Re: Pride of the Queen (for Xleena)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on October 31, 2009, 09:55:44 PM
Then the "king of dragons" Chrono makes a cameo >.>

just kidding, good start...unless this is it.... :'(
Title: Re: Pride of the Queen (for Xleena)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 01, 2009, 12:22:51 AM
heh, that was pretty good. Short, sweet and with a cute warm atmosphere... though when you said queen first, then xleena second, I thought you had made them 2 different people :/
Title: Re: Pride of the Queen (for Xleena)
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on November 01, 2009, 04:20:46 AM
This does not have to be it. If anyone wants a poem done over their fursona just pm me and I'll get back to you.
Title: Re: Pride of the Queen (for Xleena)
Post by: Xleena on November 02, 2009, 08:40:25 PM
I.Love.It!

I've had such an awful day, so this actually really brightened my mood. Always welcome with me Kindran! :3 xxxx