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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Vamp on September 01, 2009, 12:05:19 AM

Title: haiku and poems
Post by: Vamp on September 01, 2009, 12:05:19 AM

darkness:

the cold dark abyss
like a deep bottomles hole
black and hate filled pit


light

warm, radiant glow
a symbol of hope and life
keeps the dark away

Title: Re: haiku and poems
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 07, 2009, 09:40:31 AM

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refridgerator



Sorry to break the serious vibe, but... haikus!

Title: Re: haiku and poems
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 11, 2009, 03:34:49 PM

Good Haikus
Broad subjects and total coverage
Human narrows

Title: Re: haiku and poems
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 11, 2009, 03:36:56 PM

That wasn't a haiku... haikus go 5-7-5... that only went 3-8-4     ?? o.O

Title: Re: haiku and poems
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 11, 2009, 03:42:09 PM

and I've seen one done by a famous japanese poet that went 5-2-4... or something like that, i have the paper somewhere here. Like I said, "Human narrows."