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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Vamp on July 27, 2009, 04:57:25 PM

Title: awesome song.
Post by: Vamp on July 27, 2009, 04:57:25 PM

these are the lyrics to Slipknot's 'Snuff' I think they are really poetic. great song, give it a listen.

Bury all your secrets in my skin
Come away with innocence
and leave me with my sins.
The air around me still feels like a cage
And Love is just a camoflague for what resembles Rage.
So if you love me, let me go. And run away before I know.
My smile was taken long ago...
If I can change, I hope I never know...

Title: Re: my poems
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 27, 2009, 05:05:06 PM

wow... that was really... really good. I can feel the darkness soaking into you and I completely get the full rounded idea behind it.

it is a bit too stereotype emo-poetry for my liking, but it's most definitely the best emo-poetry i've read in a long time.

Title: Re: my poems
Post by: Vamp on July 27, 2009, 05:59:42 PM

thanks! that's nice to say.


(17 more veiws equals pt.2)

Title: Re: my poems
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on November 21, 2009, 08:21:04 PM

lol this snuff by slipknot nice though

Title: Re: my poems
Post by: Vamp on November 21, 2009, 08:58:57 PM

yeah, I changed it a little but was going to let people know.

Title: Re: awesome song.
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on November 22, 2009, 04:33:57 AM

i think there is a couple of words missing I can't rember what it is though, never really good at rembering at the small details

Title: Re: awesome song.
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 22, 2009, 05:10:25 AM

You took it and passed it off as your own?... interesting