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Title: [x]Insomia[x]
Post by: iKero-chu™ on June 09, 2009, 06:18:22 PM: Another sleepless night spent thinking of you,
each feeling, each emotion, failing to subdue.
Would you consider me weak if I told you I still couldn't move on?
Would you still not care, and push me away and tell me that anything you had for me is gone?
Perhaps I am weak, maybe I should just kick you out of my life.
But as much as they all will it, I can't, all in strife.
The memories still replay and the image of your face still burns into my mind.
Your smile, your voice, your touch; it just won't stay behind.
The worst part of it all is not being able to help you when your in pain,
because I know you'll resist my out reached hand in vain.
So here I am agian, like I have been many days before.
Reminiscing, Crying, wishing for this pain to be no more.
By the time I finally close my eyes and fall asleep,
the image of your smiling face still remains oh so deep.
Title: Re: [x]Insomia[x]
Post by: GÃ¡ire on June 10, 2009, 08:05:42 PM: :) Thumbs up! I really like the reality of the poem... How anyone can connect to it, but you can still feel what you're saying...
Title: Re: [x]Insomia[x]
Post by: iKero-chu™ on June 11, 2009, 03:22:47 PM: Quote from: GÃ¡ire on June 10, 2009, 08:05:42 PM
:) Thumbs up! I really like the reality of the poem... How anyone can connect to it, but you can still feel what you're saying...

Thanks ^_^
Title: Re: [x]Insomia[x]
Post by: flames on June 17, 2009, 07:59:50 PM: Powerful, I like the usage of Insomnia to put across the message. Very good work.
Title: Re: [x]Insomia[x]
Post by: Armalite_ on June 18, 2009, 02:22:13 AM: Awesome poem, dude! *thumbs up*