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Title: My Love (For Her)
Post by: .: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :. on May 17, 2009, 05:49:18 AM
My Love

My love for you, It's incomprehensible
I would walk to the ends of the earth, just to get you to smile
The things I would do for you, Just because you asked me to
I guess I am a slave to my love for you
I don't mind though, at least I get to spend time with you

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

I can't express how much you mean to me
Even in this poem, I just cant find the right words
Like they escape me, I know that I could write pages and pages
Of what you are to me, but it still wouldn't suffice
I love you, completely and utterly.
I just needed to say that

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

Your so beautiful and pure, I can't bear to see you
Hurt or upset, I want to kill the ****** who
Did it to you, I'd forsake my entire life just to
Spend a minute alone with you, because with you
Minutes can seem like hours, Hours can seem like seconds and

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

I get jealous easily, though I have no right to
I don't even deserve you, what do I have to offer?
I'm over a thousand miles away, we can only communicate through a screen
I don't even know what your voice sounds like
My love for you will never be quenched  but

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

Yeah, that's my feelings for you, put on paper...I hope you like it...I'm no
artist or poet, I just write what I feel and try to arrange it so it makes sense


Xion, Snowblind, Snowy, Riku, Scott and Chris - The many in one.
Title: Re: My Love (For Her)
Post by: Sareen on May 17, 2009, 08:42:24 PM
Aww this is really sweet ^^
and very well written too ^^
i like it hehe
Title: Re: My Love (For Her)
Post by: Shenzii on May 17, 2009, 11:06:35 PM
Very well done. I enjoyed reading it.

You have skill.

its very emotional and very sweet.
Title: Re: My Love (For Her)
Post by: .: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :. on May 17, 2009, 11:09:01 PM
Thank you. Both of you. Your praise is welcomed ^^
Title: Re: My Love (For Her)
Post by: Shenzii on May 17, 2009, 11:18:03 PM
It almost made me teary eyed  :P

great work!