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Title: This is straight from my heart.
Post by: Ruffie Tealet on April 23, 2009, 10:38:30 AM

I wrote this poem for a very very special someone. For full effect, read it while listening to Candles by Hey Monday in the background  :P
If anyone can decode the hidden meaning in all this, i will respect you for life, and you get like 10 karma from me XP

Did you not realize?
For you I bleed myself dry.
Only on the Outside I’m masquerading,
Outside, I said,
Not inside.

Real love has no distance.
Only to keep us from having a chance.
Every minute of my life, you fill it.
View the world on the bright side, try as I may.
Vague isn’t it, how much I want to hold you in my arms.

Although she may be cute
Everyone knows she’s just a substitute.           But,
No one knows who she’s a substitute for.

“Ruffie” you call me everytime, with an exclamation mark of joy.
I just want time to freeze, when we chat.

Love, can even start with a simple: “You should hop on more often.”

And the promise you made. Please do keep
Or weep and weep like a baby I shall.

Let the torturing ensue.
Vinci drew Mona Lisa. Me trying to do nearly the same.
What else can I do? I’m running out of ways to keep sane.
Every night, your day. We meet.
A brief brush between our lives.

You came along into my life, just like that.
You know, sometimes I wonder: Is it good or is it bad?
Oh, Love, you can be a lady at times.
Surrender us please, all of us.
Us that are just barely staying alive, for you.

                                  Ruffie.


Try to decipher it. read it properly, because its a 1 guess only thing.

Oh and lady was supposed to be another word.. heheh they censored it

Title: Re: This is straight from my heart.
Post by: Arilys DuskFlare on April 23, 2009, 11:02:06 AM

Nice...
But I can't see the hidden meaning, better not risk it xP

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Post by: Sareen on April 23, 2009, 02:15:23 PM

Aww Thats Soo Sweet and i Got The Message Too!

Title: Re: This is straight from my heart.
Post by: Ruffie Tealet on April 23, 2009, 03:05:27 PM

Wow Syra! You got half of it correct. I gave u 1 karma for now..hehe.. pm me the other half!

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Post by: FurFlyer on April 24, 2009, 08:23:42 AM

awww thats awesome! i dont know the hidden message although I think your on about furry people and there mates :P

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Post by: Ruffie Tealet on April 24, 2009, 08:31:12 AM

Theres a reasons for the Italic~ <<< Major clue.~

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Post by: Sareen on April 26, 2009, 07:08:54 PM

*big beaming grin through tears (personal reason) since she knows it all*

hehe I still think this is a sweet poem

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Post by: Dog Donovan on April 27, 2009, 03:17:15 AM

Ruffie!!! Get on MSN and Skype and all that more often. I needz you!!!!!

Title: Re: This is straight from my heart.
Post by: Kida Howlette on April 27, 2009, 03:47:14 PM

awwwwww  :-[ thats sooooo cute ruffie