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Title: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing)
Post by: Conchobhar on March 28, 2009, 11:32:32 PM
I need someones opinion on this...  I got the art technique thanks to Wingedzephyr!  :D

Anyways i had to constantly erase, and correct.  So I'm open for improvement suggestions

(http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt172/Conchobhar/DSCN0901.jpg)
Title: Re: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing)
Post by: Yumé on March 29, 2009, 01:10:09 AM
Sorry if I'm just blabbing my personal OCD drawing opinions out but.. I think.. try bringing the snout a tiny bit up and make the nose slightly more level and bigger... and the same thing Alice said :3
but I think the head is vary good  :D
Title: Re: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing)
Post by: Yumé on March 29, 2009, 01:20:16 AM
Actually the first one might look pretty good without those muzzle line things.. If only I could draw on a computer and figure what would look best XD
Title: *EDIT*
Post by: Conchobhar on March 29, 2009, 01:28:58 AM
I also redid the first picture, I did what u said. :lovestruck4:
here it is!


(http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt172/Conchobhar/DSCN0912.jpg)                           (http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt172/Conchobhar/DSCN0911.jpg)
Title: Re: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing)
Post by: WingedZephyr on March 29, 2009, 01:46:46 AM
Not bad. I think it's quite an improvement from the drawings you posted in the other thread. The muzzle on the 3/4 view looks a little crooked though. The space where the eyes meet the top two corners of the muzzle should be equal - as it is, the corner that meets the left eye is way too far down. It should meet near the inside corner of the eye (like the right one does).
Title: Re: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing)
Post by: Conchobhar on March 29, 2009, 02:47:00 AM
Ok thanks wing.  Im gonna go to bed... *yawn*


 :sleepytime:

Post Merge: March 29, 2009, 12:11:08 PM
Ok I'm back! :peace:

gonna be posting art every now and then