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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Kit Angel on March 18, 2009, 09:18:25 AM

Title: Kit's Poems
Post by: Kit Angel on March 18, 2009, 09:18:25 AM

I had a certain someone on my mind and i just wanted to write something from the bottom of my heart ^w^

When i think about you my heart starts to beat faster but as i talk to you and hear your sweet soothing voice my mind and body feels calm. Sweet, caring, calm, funny, and cute are some of the words that can describe you, but in my eyes and in my mind you are someone who i love, who loves me back, as we talk i feel my body start to calm, my muscles relax as i'm memorized by the sweet harmonics of that blue eyed voice that sound like a thousand angels singing, he is only one of the few people who truly knows the real me, the one that is on the inside and not on the outside. I've never felt more at peace with my self in my who life, it feel like i've achieved inner peace and found who i am, only one sentence is all i can say towards him and its "I love you with all my heart"

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Post by: Wolfgang on March 18, 2009, 10:02:36 AM

Wow kit, that is amazingly beautiful.

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Post by: Dog Donovan on March 18, 2009, 11:02:39 PM

Love is awesome...
Poetry is awesome...
Griever is awesome...
That poem is magnificent!!!

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Post by: Kit Angel on August 22, 2009, 11:36:34 PM

Here is a new poem for my new Mate Comet who i love more than life itself ^^

You are the love of my life, The savior of my soul.
you know how to make me happy when i am sad, you give me energy when i am tired, Best of all you give me the most important thing in Life.

LOVE

You are the inspiration to my heart and soul, Comet you complete me and i have never been in love this much before, and you are the only Wolf i want in my life.

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Post by: Kit Angel on August 27, 2009, 11:12:05 PM

I wrote Another Poem for comet ^w^

Through out my life all i ever experienced is loss and i never felt wanted in all my life, until i met you.

You are the most charming, Handsome, and Purfect mate i have been searching for, you are what completes my day, you are what makes my life go on, You Comet are the piece to my heart and soul that i have been searching for.

Comet you are what completes me. All I have to say that comes from deep withing my heart and soul is this "I love you"

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Post by: Grizzy on September 07, 2009, 08:19:18 AM

That was extraordinary. I loved how you intertwined visual and symphonic metaphors :)

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Post by: Kit Angel on September 08, 2009, 06:05:23 AM

Thanks for the compliments ^w^  :3

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Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on November 21, 2009, 08:30:35 PM

your poems are very nice true from the sould, but I do say please be careful, I was in love once and well it didn't work out for her so...you get the point look before leap because the fall could kill you. lovely poems

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Post by: Kit Angel on January 01, 2010, 05:49:15 AM

Yeah i figured that out the hard way

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Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on January 01, 2010, 10:24:06 PM

sorry to hear that... :(

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Post by: Kit Angel on January 05, 2010, 03:31:48 PM

It's ok things are bound to happen sooner or later and i am really use to it