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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: iKero-chu™ on March 01, 2009, 11:21:15 PM

Title: [x]Why?[x]
Post by: iKero-chu™ on March 01, 2009, 11:21:15 PM

Why did you come back into my life just to throw me out?
Why did you make me believe when all along it should of been doubt?

You lied to me, you hurt me, you broke me down.
Why did I think it was any different this time around?

Now when I hear your name or see your face,
I feel this burning pain inside of me that I just want to erase.

If such wrong as this has been done to you before,
then why would you do this to someone else, is this just some ongoing war?

I opened up and left my heart on sleeve,
and you took it, ripped it apart, and decided to leave.

I lie to everyone so they think I'm okay,
when the truth is on the inside its not what I portray.

Now I'm left here, not sure what to feel or what to do.
All I really know is that we're through.

Title: Re: [x]Why?[x]
Post by: Dog Donovan on March 02, 2009, 02:28:38 PM

*Wham* Your next mate better see this, Kero! This is a very strong poem, you know?

Title: Re: [x]Why?[x]
Post by: iKero-chu™ on March 02, 2009, 02:30:37 PM

Quote from: Dog Donovan on March 02, 2009, 02:28:38 PM

*Wham* Your next mate better see this, Kero! This is a very strong poem, you know?

Haha thank you.
+^_^+
I was doing my best to try to potray the main emotions in the poem: Anger and Hurt.

Title: Re: [x]Why?[x]
Post by: flames on March 02, 2009, 07:41:13 PM

As always you were able to convey your emotions very well.
*hugs* I hope your next mate is far better than that.

Title: Re: [x]Why?[x]
Post by: Dr. Strange on March 02, 2009, 10:36:14 PM

Yea, or he'll have many angry friends to deal with. King winks. Don't worry about it too much though, you've always got someone to talk to. =]