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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Jaraith on January 01, 2009, 07:32:47 AM

Title: If you can dance.
Post by: Jaraith on January 01, 2009, 07:32:47 AM

get up get up.

kick your legs and try to tiptoe on a star.

The guy in the back row is watching, let him.

Its so hot in here, why cant we act dirty?

just let it be, just let it be, none of them are me.

Individuality is a very finite resource, lets not use it all in once place!

Beauty, Beauty, thats what the night sky is, thats what his eyes are.

Beauty, beauty, showing me whats worth living.

If only I figured it out sooner.

Beauty, beauty, thats what things lost are.

Title: Re: If you can dance.
Post by: Dr. Strange on January 01, 2009, 04:00:41 PM

wow, that's pretty good.

Title: Re: If you can dance.
Post by: scarypuppy on January 02, 2009, 06:35:00 AM

Pretty good I guess, it felt kinda short, to me.

Overall though I liked the feeling from it, kinda happy ending on a slightly morose note.

keep up the work ^_^

Title: Re: If you can dance.
Post by: Dr. Strange on January 03, 2009, 07:47:37 PM

still, keep it up!

Title: Re: If you can dance.
Post by: Arilys DuskFlare on January 03, 2009, 08:01:09 PM

Nice.
Keep it up :D