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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: skatenjoe10 on December 24, 2008, 10:30:32 PM

Title: My Love
Post by: skatenjoe10 on December 24, 2008, 10:30:32 PM
My Love, She was like music. Soft at first, soothing, tender notes one after the other like a beautiful song that gets stuck in

your head. I'd listen to her, wrapped in her soaking moral end.  Just ... smiling in my luck to have found someone like

 her, an angel!, Amazing. Have you ever loved anyone? Have you ever stood next to someone and said to yourself 

"This is the Person I Love, The Person Above all Other Things I will Dedicate Myself to", Have you ever done that?

Its the ... Incredible Feeling you hear about in the movies, that Ecstasy, that middle ground between Longing

and Satisfaction. Everything is in the ballads and She is right their besides me, holding onto me. And I'm looking into

her eyes and holding right back onto her. We could stay like that Forever. That's Love! That's My Love!
 

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Title: Re: My Love
Post by: Somebody on December 24, 2008, 10:34:11 PM
Very nice depiction of love, its goo to be able to write those feelings about somebody you care for
Title: Re: My Love
Post by: Dr. Strange on December 25, 2008, 12:01:27 AM
Very nice, I like the set scheme.