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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Devault on November 02, 2008, 06:07:14 PM
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Getting rid of this, sorry.
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Nice. Keep it going.
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Now you dont have to worry about that. But keep the rules in mind if you plan it to get raunchy.
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If you posted today, yes. You can either wait until someone else comments or post the next day. Depending.
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Nice, its a pretty good story thus far. its nice to have another who likes to do literature we certainly need more of it
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Yeah well other then a few of us on this board I wouldnt exactly expect a Steven King response here either, but you write a good story. Though I'd be weary about refering to any of your characters "Crazyily screwing another" It may sound stupid but it borders the line.
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Nice, a little foreboding piece to keep people comming back for more. I find it fascinating really, what could possibly be in store for them. One of the better things about independant writers are they tend to be a lot less predictable because they aren't contrained by the needs of marketing and sales or a companies rules for a book.
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Nice, I look forward to reading more of it. it really is one of the better reads in this section for a while
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yo this is, great man, i'm hooked, wow u guys really know how to write a good story
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yo this is really cool, i'm so hooked right now, i rally like it man keep it up
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Yeah definately keep it up, its like reading a professional story, a good one at that
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dud this is nothing short of pure internet crack, this is worse than WOW great job man, scary and interesting, can't wait for more
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Awesome two chapters, things are definately heating up I cant wait to read more.
And a dragon. Nice
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Simply awesome. I find myself subconsciously rooting them on, particularly the snake Rellian (its that reptile affinity)
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Another masterful piece of story.
So is rellian really half dragon?
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I like her, shes hawt.
Way to go Milo. You now ya just can't help but love the little guy
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Awesome work as always, keep it up. I like the standoff moment between Leena and the dragoness.
Also good job on cleaning up the previous installment. which I had already commented on but was still really good
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At this point Im gonna have to just create a macro that says "awesome chapter" because really I haven.t read a bad one yet.
The only complaint I have is I have to wait for the next one.
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I cant help but feel sorry for the guy, I could never imagine the pain of loosing your parents in such a way. But then again he seems so stunned I guess shock would pave the way for a bitter awakening.
I know what your thinking and the answer is yes, I cant wait for the next chapter piece
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Another great chapter, they definately add some ground to my hectic days as of late. I feel sorry for Nile, and I gotta respect Rellian for doing the whole friend deal. I cant wait to see how things turn out
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A great way to go out with a bang I say, a nice emotional piece and moment between Rellian and Nile. Though Im saddened that there will be more length between posts though. Who's shoulder will I be able to cry on due to this terribly tragedy! :P
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Whoa Devault!
I am glad I read this, because this is one great story!
You really put some great detail in the whole story, not just in certain parts.
You got me hooked!
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dude i just read this chapter, way to go (srry for not posting in a while, you write long chapters man, it took me days to read 2 of them) this is great man i'm very impressed :P way to go
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ok now i've read everything again, wow i feel so bad for nile and milo, man thats harsh, very good writing, man i can't wait for more, really this is like crack
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Sorry about my delay in reading it, life has been hectic. So leena thinks the dragoness is the killer. Interesting turn of events
I cant wait till you get more up hopefully this time I can read it more promptly.
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epic.... cool job man. sounds good, makes u wonder about who really is on the outside... lol
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dude you have to finish this man we got to know what happens man, nice job
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interesting, nice job can't wait for more
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I wonder who is going to be the killer in the end...
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Ah the story is coming along very nicely, definitely one of my favorite reads in the section. You have a knack for keeping it interesting
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You could make a twist though and make the killer someone else :)
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lol can't wait for more man lol
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ok then. add more when u can ^.^
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interesting i can't wait for more to come very nice job, finnaly he catches a break. very nice keep it up devault
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wow i cant wait for more, man this is keeping me on the edge of my seat, i don't think felece is the killer, i want to say there is another dragon out tjhere but that is a shot in the dark, otr it neela
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so it is leena, or is it the dragboness? sorry my brain hurts fun week
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ooooooOOOOOOOOO man u got me on the hook, wow please put down more that was cool