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Title: New, Dark Poems
Post by: flames on August 02, 2008, 08:09:10 PM

No forgiveness
I don't deserve forgiveness,
I'm the one who made this mess.
I said I could cope, but I lied,
My shame and self-hatred, I can never hide.
I never think, I never pause.
I do terrible actions, but for what cause?
My emotion is a tornado hurling all around,
Tearing up my insides until naught can be found.

I don't deserve forgiveness,
All I need is this agonising emptiness.
I deserve the pain, must be punished.
I won't end it until it's finished.
The desire to wash it away in a sea of blood,
Is as strong and destructive as a mighty flood.
I shouldn't relieve myself of the pain,
I've got nothing to lose and nothing to gain.
I glance in the mirror as crimson liquid stains my arm,
I move the weapon to my wrist with total calm.

A slash, a flow, the blade has darted,
Numbness, I fall and finish what I started...

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: Somebody on August 03, 2008, 08:53:52 AM

Good one, deep and emotional, I can understand the feelings within

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: flames on August 03, 2008, 08:09:56 PM

Humanity against the World
Everyday I see the same sights,
The same people getting into fights,
The same people fuming over trivial things,
The same people who think they are kings.
I walk on by, music blaring in my ear,
In this day and age we are filled with fear,
Anybody could shoot, stab or maim you,
Nobody to trust, none to turn to.
I just watch the world go by,
Depression lingering in the murky, grey sky.
I can't help but wonder as so many die,
How many realise humanity is a lie?

Humans are not mammals, not even vermin,
They are but a virus, I am learning.
Humanity destroys all it touches,
The World is in its dark clutches.
It's never over, just another day...
Of hoping this virus stays at bay...

I see the same people, the same selfish desires,
The same ego's, the same destructive fires.
The World is being tortured by this terrible race,
These monsters destroying all in nearby space!
My tail is revealed to all and I unsheathe my claws,
I'm glad I'm not human and so I roar...!

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: Dr. Strange on August 06, 2008, 11:24:24 PM

What brought this sudden mood swing, James?

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: XXxMaximuMXXx on August 07, 2008, 02:22:38 AM

WOW...O.o deep...are you sure your oki great though!

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: flames on August 07, 2008, 08:14:04 AM

Quote from: ~Postmortem Falls~ on August 06, 2008, 11:24:24 PM

What brought this sudden mood swing, James?

Oh, just a short span of self-loathing I had. All is good and I'm okay now.

Title: Re: New, Dark Poems
Post by: Dr. Strange on August 07, 2008, 10:56:57 PM

Good, no one else is allowed to steal ma dark poetry spotlight. :) That's what I'm suppossed to do. Anyways, have you started school yet?