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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Soryu/Miayuki Isumi on June 10, 2008, 06:58:39 PM

Title: Ramblings...
Post by: Soryu/Miayuki Isumi on June 10, 2008, 06:58:39 PM
Make up your mind.

Faint black figures paint my mind
Tied down by straps that bind
My body free
My mind and heart to be tied
Indecision is in your mind
Dark emotions seemingly blind
Just make up your mind
Do you want me?
Care to flaunt me?
Don't Bother to Taunt Me
You've made up your mind.

                           ~Luca~


What Did I Do To Deserve You?

The tragedy that is my life
Ended by the thin red edge of my knife
What did I do?
Nothing done right,
Never won a fight
But yet here you are holding my body tonight
I am sorry I have left you and myself
The broken picture lays there on the shelf
Tell me this much
I think I got a hunch
But clear it up,
What Did I Do To Deserve You?


                  ~Luca~

Find Your Balance

Knock her back
knock her down
Shes bleeding on the ground
She slowly stands
You strike again
But to your surprise she still stands
She has had enough
Its gone on too long
Shes found her balance
She strikes back
And as you lay on the ground she whispers in your ear
"Find Your Balance"


~Luca~
Title: Re: Ramblings...
Post by: flames on June 10, 2008, 07:10:39 PM
Nice. 'What did I do to deserve you?' is probably my favourite.
Title: Re: Ramblings...
Post by: Dr. Strange on June 10, 2008, 08:18:32 PM
I like 'Find Your Balance'. Who's it based on?
Title: Re: Ramblings...
Post by: Soryu/Miayuki Isumi on June 10, 2008, 09:17:33 PM
No one these were thoughts flooding my head.
Title: Re: Ramblings...
Post by: Dr. Strange on June 10, 2008, 09:23:16 PM
Ah. It's very good. I got a request. xD I like the display you did for Matthew. You should be proud.
Title: Re: Ramblings...
Post by: Soryu/Miayuki Isumi on June 10, 2008, 09:33:24 PM
XD I can try >>