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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Raphial on June 02, 2008, 06:16:00 PM
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I'm done with this dreadful heart
Here I write my stupid art
I'm done with my part
He stood me tall
He stood me proud
He stood me with care
But now he's an enemy.
He told me he'd be my brother
Not to be the same as all the other
But to make sure we stood tall together
He took me in under his Wing
Maybe that's why this always has a sting
It's always more than my heart can sing
I'm done with my heart
With this stupid art
Here I end my part
He told me few
He told me lots
He told me stay through
But now he's done
With my past memories gone
He was the only one
I trusted him more than most
This I do not boast
We thought of brotherhood at the most
I miss my friend
My companion
My brother
I miss my other.
Something I wrote awhile back when my best friend's girlfriend pretty much ruined our friendship....so I wrote this when I got upset about it one day.
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Nice.
Short, Simple yet containing a large range of downtrodden emotions.
Great work.
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Nice.
Short, Simple yet containing a large range of downtrodden emotions.
Great work.
heh heh thanks! I've seen some of your work as well, and I'm impressed to say the least ^^