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Title: Why?
Post by: iKero-chu™ on May 02, 2008, 11:46:11 PM
Note: This is probably one of the most shortest poems I've ever written but I really love it.
^^" Probably because its one of those poems I wrote on the spure of the moment with no real thought about.
I hope its good enough +o-o+"


"Your the unrequited one,
your the untamable,
your the unbreakable,
your the one my heart craves the most.


Anytime your within my grasp I can only savor a sample,

Why cant you just surrender yourself to me for once?"
Title: Re: Why?
Post by: XXxMaximuMXXx on May 02, 2008, 11:48:49 PM
nice one
Title: Re: Why?
Post by: Dr. Strange on May 03, 2008, 02:12:48 PM
It is pefecto. *smiles* I love your style iKero.