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Title: Look at people around you
Post by: ¿ Jesse Pawman ? on March 31, 2008, 03:43:17 AM

Look at everyone around you
    for their lives are connected to yours
Whatever you do
    affects them


Open the door for that old lady
    for she is too weak to open it
Help pick up that toy the baby dropped
    for it’s mother has not noticed it’s felled

Hold your boyfriend close to you
    for you may never see him again
Tell her that you love her
    for she may think you don’t

Help the ones around you
    for you may need their help
Smile at the people around you
    for smiles can brighten anyone’s day

Look at the people around you
    for everyone’s life is connected
Be kind and gentle to others
    for someone higher may do the same to you.


COMMENTS PLEASE!!! :D

edit: fixed typo thanks smit.

Title: Re: Look at people around you
Post by: Smitty the Airship Pirate on April 02, 2008, 06:03:57 AM

I love it! I enjoyed reading it.  Altohugh there is a typo here in this line " for she may thing you don’t "