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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Noah Fulf on June 01, 2019, 09:16:39 AM

Title: MY little box
Post by: Noah Fulf on June 01, 2019, 09:16:39 AM

This is a poem... But it's still literature so here you go

I have one little box
That I keep all my thoughts in
It is hidden well, it is very valuable
It must be hidden to keep me happy

Every day, I put more thoughts into my little box
It is always ful, but there is always room for more
I tried to empty it once but it just made a mess
I can't handle all of that!
So I just put it back in the box

But one day the box was stolen!
They went trough my little box
Threw stuff out
I tried to pick it up, but it just fell flat on the ground
They went trough my thoughts
And that hurt me
It hurt me a lot
And it damaged my little box

Title: Re: MY little box
Post by: Anacletus on June 08, 2019, 02:59:52 PM

Good work you got there! I can almost feel the seriousness of the 3rd act. ^^
Love the style of this poem as well!