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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: ZielZorix on November 01, 2016, 01:49:33 PM

Title: [Critique Request] Finally Free - Rough Draft
Post by: ZielZorix on November 01, 2016, 01:49:33 PM
I will go a head and tell you guys that this is in script format.

It is an idea I had for a babyfur/diaperfur comic that popped into my head over the weekend after binge-reading BabyStar's comic "Shine" over on FA. (I love that comic btw.)  I don't normally write this type of material, but I thought I would give it a try, and it was actually kinda fun.

So, any constructive criticisms would be appreciated.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21589330/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21589330/)