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Title: Thoughts on my sketch?
Post by: SnarlingMink on August 26, 2015, 05:44:52 AM

I sketched this up a few days ago (I really do mean sketch. 15 minutes, this isn't a high quality thing  D: ) and I'm wondering what people think? I apologize in advance for the awkward placement of the head-shot type thingy... it was spur of the moment  <.<


http://brokendialect.deviantart.com/art/Louise-555811216 (http://brokendialect.deviantart.com/art/Louise-555811216)

Title: Re: Thoughts on my sketch?
Post by: HollowOfHaze on August 26, 2015, 05:55:06 AM

I think you did very well for such a small amount of time. I really wish I could draw that well given any amount of time.

One piece of criticism: I would give more detail to the wing structure. A thicker base where they meet the back, and some definition to any joints in their bone structure.

Title: Re: Thoughts on my sketch?
Post by: SnarlingMink on August 26, 2015, 06:29:47 AM

Thank you so much! I'll make some adjustments, and hopefully then it'll look a bit better! :D I really, really appreciate the critism, oh my goodness!  :3

Title: Re: Thoughts on my sketch?
Post by: Zane the Fox on August 28, 2015, 08:05:57 AM

I would say while it great for a quick work. One of the wing look broken. And the head is a little too big. Maybe if you lengths the head out, it would fix better...hmmm. The arm and leg look abit skinny t point that it might not hold a lot. Just add a little more depth to the muscle otherwise. It great