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Title: Unique Love.
Post by: ★Kuro★ on August 26, 2007, 03:27:46 PM
I’m drowning in my tears
She lent me her hand
And I’m frustrating to hold on
But they drag me from her
Harder each second
Our furtive actions
Just become harder to obtain
But there’s not a chance in hell
Where I could hold her hand
And hear her whisper three words
I love you
I could attempt and fail
It’s so practical with me
Never would I live to hear her say
I’d die for you
In her arms I’d never rest
It’s just another fantasy
A wall of uncertainty
But I can dream
And pretend in my world
Until she’ll realize
She’s fallen in love with me





What do you think?  :)
Title: Re: Unique Love.
Post by: Nintai Tamashii on August 26, 2007, 06:38:21 PM
I love it, it's really good :upupdi3:
Title: Re: Unique Love.
Post by: ★Kuro★ on August 26, 2007, 06:42:40 PM
Thank you. ^^

It's about a girl I was in love with.
It was a very sad time for me, especially after a heartbreak like that.