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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Amy Montgomery on August 14, 2007, 11:21:45 PM

Title: Poems
Post by: Amy Montgomery on August 14, 2007, 11:21:45 PM
this is just one of the many poems i'll probley post... please tell me if you like it THANKS!!  :upupdi3:



why can't you see

that whats in front of you

isn't just some silly emotion

it's something you can't avoid

something that will always be there

no matter how maybe times

you tell yourself that it's not



it's not something you can ignore

nor is it something you listen to right away

but it's something you should hold dear

not let it pass you by

maybe if you listen close

then it could tell you something

something about yourself



why can't you see

that it's love you seek

not some other silly emotion

to take its place

you cant live without it

but you cant see it either



why can't you see

that i love you

and i'm not willing to give that up

i'll wait till you figure it out

and then tell you

hopefully i wont be waiting to long
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Post by: ★Kuro★ on August 26, 2007, 06:44:10 AM
*Claps* Bravo! It's wonderful.  =3
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Post by: Dr. Strange on August 28, 2007, 08:30:15 PM
*claps, hugging rai*
beautiful, rai. simply beautiful.
Title: Re: Poems
Post by: Amy Montgomery on August 28, 2007, 08:47:33 PM
THANKS!!
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Post by: Dr. Strange on September 01, 2007, 07:07:57 PM
you're welcome. {you know if shinzus online?}
Title: Re: Poems
Post by: Angelofblackroses on September 09, 2007, 03:17:44 AM
Wow thats really great !!! I like to write to but i like your poem better then mine...but let me know what you think about it please.. :upupdi3:   Doesn’t Matter

Someone told me that life is just one thing
He said its how you live that matter
I am just a stupid teen
It didn’t matter to me
In till the night that friend never came back to me
I was just a person as lonely as can be
In this cold world it didn’t matter to me
I just thought of the words he said
They ran around over in my head
 I could feel like he was here even know he is gone
Gone in to the ground
Its so cold without him but it dose not matter to me Because I’ll see him again  
By Kat(thats me but im no kitty)  o.O
Title: Re: Poems
Post by: Joker Rose on September 13, 2007, 02:31:46 AM
better than my flaming bag of dog doopy stuff

and is there something wrong with kittys!!! huh!!!