The Furry Forums
Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Joker Rose on August 14, 2007, 03:30:59 AM
-
ok dont be hars guys....im ganna post my poems on hear...and i know they all suck but atleast someone an read them
anyway....(note: comments can be posted on this page if you wish to comment at all..and vote at the top...please :sniffle:)
poem 1
mental abuse
sitting in a pit of darkness
seeing nothing
only harshness
the smell of blood
lays on the walls
damp cold floors
conseal our souls
screams of horror
driving you insane
it penatrates the mind
those screams of pain
nothing comforting
about this place
trying to escape
the effort is a wast
we are all traped
with the torturous screams
but ive been told
its all in my dreams
Joker Rose
-
poem 2
"whats wrong"
"im not crazy"
he says as the rain runs down his face
wondering how he became
so different from the human race
disgrunteled thoughts eat at him
as he slowly fades away
back into the shadows
were he is shunned to stay
crys for help and ignorance
wishing he was dead
"am i different from the owrld?"
"or is it all in my head?"
he wonders why he cannot sleep
noctournal as the night
killing him slowly
he has no will to fight
-
Pretty good... Dark, but you didn't overdo it.
-
thanx dave
-
NP
-
poem 3
"fall"
fall again
with amber leaves
the smell of death
to the warm breeze
cold gusts of wind
to chill the bone
the greeting to the creatures
who all walk alone
fire, blood and rust
line the colors of the trees
wind will soon be violent
as the roaring of the seas
waving back afourth
from the cold but gentle breeze
wind chimes blairing
like the ratteling of keys
this is fall
back another year
everything seems serin
wile this season is hear
Joker Rose
-
You're just popping these out, aren't you? ((Not a bad thing...))
-
actualy the last 2 i did off the top of my head but i really ment it in depression when i said i had note books full of poetry he he :snicker:
-
You have good poems i make manny up just half the one's i make pop out of my head as soon as i try to write it down, But your vearry good.
The one's i made are just random feelings
-
i luv em, very structured...well gtg, ive got ppl to piss off elsewheres.
-
“Tale of twoâ€ÂÂ
Cold hibernation
Hiding from the world
Danger is beyond you
For such a little girl
Cold is oblivious
To some who may enjoy
Walking with out fear
Wile others hide from this boy
Two complete opposites
Living in control
Hallow by their surroundings
Poor tortured souls
Oppressed by their elders
Never given a chance
It’s a never ending game
Ts a never ending dance
Scared to move
In fear of what they say
This girl holds on to nothing
So they play her till she pays
His sins are many
But made up for in good time
He trys to hard
But is in debt with his moral fines
Apart they are nothing
Together they can be great
But for now they are separate
And can only wait for fate
-
“Herâ€ÂÂ
the one shining jewel
that caught my eye
I have to hold
and keep alive
love is to pain
as we are together
I hope that we
will never sever
without her its lonely
but to hold her is bliss
I sit and I wait
for that mesmerizing kiss
she’s precious to me
not like anything I know
cause when she’s around
i seem to let go
something she holds
nothing of art
but what she has kept
will always be my heart
i know i love her
there no doubt about that
so ill sit and ill wait
for her to come back
JokerRose
-
That one was really good..your good at this stuff who knows mb one day i'll be reading yours out of a book hum?
~crazeyfox~
-
hehge maby.....
nezt.....
“Winterâ€ÂÂ
Cold but to a joy
To the numb creatures of the night
Winter holds us guilty
Higher forces we do fight
Fury of the wind
Chill of the snow
This treachery reeks havoc
On everything we know
The snow we see is empty
As the color it up holds
It blinds us to oblivion
And leaves up full of holes
Slick but fierce
It takes us down
Fast and painful
We shall drown
This hell of ice
Controls us all
Un till its gone
We wish for fall
-
i LOVE it dad.i even got a pic for it (http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t141/Mizu_no_Kimiko/EmOs%20AnD%20mUsIk/NewImage.jpg)
-
Bravo Bravo
the first 2 sound like they were written about me irl you have a great talent keep it up :)
-
i think you will like this one anklor or els i wouldent be posting it
“Coldâ€ÂÂ
Dilutions of hope
Images I see
No matter what I do
There is no hope for me
Slowly dieing
Of my own dust
Wish I could get out
And wander around dusk
Nothing can keep me
Nothing to hold
I just keep falling
ALONE AND COLD
Im used to the darkness
The horror of my life
One day I will be gone
Taken by the blade of the knife
Joker Rose
-
:'( its beautiful
-
lol thank you anklor...
(note: will edit this post if its the last post befor my next poem...no more tonight)
-
=3 i wuvs it and a pic for ya poam dad ok.
i whant to start writing poams but idk why i don't
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u256/blackpetal16/tiedup.jpg
Stay within the 600x600 pixel size for pictures, links to over the size limit pictures are allowed.
Vosur
-
heh i will wait till then if you do publish them tell me i'll read everyone and rember them verse by verse ^^
(( i know i have no life i rember half the things i read mostly becaus i read it till it means nothing or till i start to read it upside down or backwards O.o yea..i read to much..))
BUT keep them up their really starting to get good and intresting. x__X not like they wernt anyway.
-
wow those are awsome... i can't write poems but not as good as you.. jeez when did you start to write those?
-
ive been writing for a long time lol i still dont like my work lol
hears another one for my fans lmao
"The right words"
Twisting turning
Haunting at my mind
Trying to find the words
To tell you that im fine
More eats away
At what’s really on my mind
What im really trying to say
Can’t be completely defined
No more descriptive words
That means nothing to us both
Nothing comes out right
Nothing even comes close
I don’t know how to say it
I don’t know were to go to
I guess what im trying to say
Is ill always love you
Joker Rose
p.s. sorry for the mushy one lol
-
i love it man its cool
-
thanx and just cause im in the mood to im ganna postr another one
"war?"
What is war?
War with self
Simplicities and anger
Bottled on a shelf
Bloodlust fetish
Dripping from the knife
Creeping only in the dark
Demon of the night
Your blood I drink
Your energy I drain
Your anger and anguish
Taking all your pain
Every one is different
No one is the same
We are all alone
No one to share pain
So what is war?
If we are all alone
Is it war with self?
Or is it war with home?
Joker Rose
-
:'( its beautiful and i generaly hate poetry but yours is kick ass
-
im glad you enjoy them.....no more tonight ill post some tomarrow ...gotta find my other book....cant seem to find my other note book and its full of my poems lol anyway goodnight all i will post hear tomarrow
-
nice hun but dad your real good
i'll find a pic soon
-
anothe day another poem
“Tale of twoâ€ÂÂ
Cold hibernation
Hiding from the world
Danger is beyond you
For such a little girl
Cold is oblivious
To some who may enjoy
Walking with out fear
Wile others hide from this boy
Two complete opposites
Living in control
Hallow by their surroundings
Poor tortured souls
Oppressed by their elders
Never given a chance
It’s a never ending game
Ts a never ending dance
Scared to move
In fear of what they say
This girl holds on to nothing
So they play her till she pays
His sins are many
But made up for in good time
He trys to hard
But is in debt with his moral fines
Apart they are nothing
Together they can be great
But for now they are separate
And can only wait for fate
Joker Rose
~enjoy~
-
:lovestruck4: its like me and my girlfriend
-
wow that one is touching...it says alot :x good job.
-
anyway......im in a mellow mood
"fallen"
comfort is a mystery
crawling out of my own skin
the way i see my self
as clear as vibrations from a fin
soothing as hot cole
burning at my fur
air hot and sticky
making everything a blur
temporeraly blind
is nothing to ones self
some hidden feeling
bottled up on a shelf
but this is just one stage
of a person personaly hell
they are still oblivious
to the fact that they already fell
-
i still say i would like write poems like that... but i can't anyway that was REALLY GOOD can't wait for the next!!!!
-
i just wrote that like 3 minuts ago....was a fraid to post it dident know how it would be
-
are you quoting me for things i should say?
-
huh???
-
special poem made up on the spot from a conversation
"confused"
its been a wile
seince ive seen you smile
but now i dont know what to do
and i am in denial
i see another
and i try not to compare
shes something els
secrets i wish not to share
but its her or you
i can not play both
i wish to hear your voice
i need something to help me cope
your locked away
away from my reach
she was an accedent
one i cannot preach
please forgive my faults
your what matters to me
she was a substitute
but i was bline and could not see
i know my own fault
and reality wouldent fuse
but do i tell you?
this leave me confused
Joker Rose
~enjoy~
-
:'( thank you my friend i am greatful and keep being you and never forget who you are inside man
-
always my friend always....
-
They're awsome I love them all!! I wish I could write poems like you!!
-
very nice joker. {i apologize for rubans idiocy earlier}
-
ill try i dont feel good tonight and im tiered and i have to work at 7 in the morning
"ones curse"
trying hard to hold myself
from sounding like a baby
im so sane
its making me crazy
this isent how my life is
yet i play their stupid game
every one will move on
ill remain the same
broken glass
shards of myself
hate,anger,anguish
bottled on a shelf
i will show you one thing
but its not really me
ill test you befor i let you in
this youll never see
ive always done the wrong thing
because i thought about everyone els first
but now it my time
to break this stupid curse
Joker Rose
~be easy its late ~
-
... it's really good...
-
My favorite had to be "Cold"
-
i like falen so far....they're all very nice tho joke.
-
you should like publish this stufff its very good
i love them all.
-
sorry for not posting...ive been busy
"shells"
life is a steam roller
waiting to crush you
this is what ive been told
something keeping you
in one still spot
as you feel the rollers metal cold
borken bones
as well as pain
but this is consices ness at its best
the red pill or the blue pill?
how do you know
witch is best?
dont die on the back seat
of lifes red chevorlay
is it best to run?
or would you rather stay?
twice 2 is 4
is that thre truth?
if so than were is free will?
are you an equasion from ones booth?
are we all just numbers
piled into preexzistance?
or are we just random drones
if so than weres the point in exzistance
these are the real questions
we shold think everyday
are we empty shells
of this ugly socioty?
Joker Rose
~enjoy...its bad~
-
no its not, its BEAUTIFUL!!!
*drools*
see, its very good. much gratitude to ya for posting.
-
im ganna try tonight
"home tonight"
tonight i see the stars
feeling like the first time
tonight i wonder why?
its so hard to make things ryme
tonight i miss you
but yet i dont
i wonder if i ever have
but the lights make it hard to cope
tonight i am empty
but i think i always was
waiting for that wish to come true
but it nev er does
i am by myself tonight
but yet im never alone
alone is just the feeling
i get when i am home
Joker Rose
~enjoy~
i dont like it -.-
-
i like it lots daddy
oh i miss you!
-
im sorry i havent posted guys i do what i can
"train of thought"
I am from death
not the death of me,
but the death of everything around me
I am from the wetness of the rain.
a cold soothing comfort,
a familer friends tear.
I am from the noise.
the LOUD obnoxious traffic,
making it heard or easy to sleep at night.
I am from the darkness of the shadow.
the same shadow most children,
are forced in to.
Iam from a lost friend.
the moon that lights your way through darkness,
as darkness is the undesierable.
I am fromthe perfection of imperfection.
finding what most cant see.
I am from the heat of the fire.
the fire that burns to destroy,
yet is vitle to creation.
think,
find your train of thought.
Joker Rose
Posted on: September 20, 2007, 03:49:55 PM
sorry for the wait guys dunno ifanyones reading them anoy more or not but hear ya go ill try i have a lot of anger and emotion to deal with right now so im sorry for not being around much'
vain
cold as ice
his nerves are shot
feeling numb
he thinks he will rot
he sees his reflection
it not much at all
he cant see him self
he can stand but will fall
nothing is good enough
for his empty tears
no one cares
as he hides his fears
its so cleche
as one would think
he sits alone
on his brink
almost over
the edge of his sanity
sick of people
and their vanity
y do i put up with this
he says to himself
its always his though
but it stays bottled on the shelf
Joker Rose
~enjoy~
-
Grats joker wonderfull i love everyone of them they get more and more better Keep it up and i will be in the book store reading yours poems
-
back by popular demand.....ok i lied
bad dreams
as i lay dieing
with nothing left to do
i think of all the times
ive been betrayed by you
wile i was crying
you wandered my heart
but as you were playing
you were tearing me apart
i feel compleatly worthless
so i wish to take my life
suffering the pain
caused by the blade of the knife
pritty red rain
falls from the neck
i wish it was me
cutting the thred
but now ill wake up
hence that you are dead
later be asleep
and do it all again
Joker Rose
~enjoy~
-
I love this one Joker, I feel like I can relate to it
-
im sorry its been a wile hears a new one enjoy
"from my eyes" (serial killers side)
I always had the desire to inflict pain on others and to have others inflict pain on me.
I always seemed to enjoy everything that hurt.
The desire to inflict pain, that is all that is important.
None of us are saints.
People don’t know me, they think they do, but they don’t.
When this monster entered my brain-
I will never know, but its here to stay.
How does one cure himself?
I can’t stop it, the monster goes on, hurts me as well as society.
Back to the beginning
We start again
I have killed no one.
I have ordered no one to be killed.
These children who have come to you with their knives,
They are your children.
I didn’t teach them,
You did.
But know this!
you
Look down on me,
You will see a fool.
Look up to me,
You will see your lord.
Look straight at me,
You will see you’re self.
I like to see you suffer.
I mean I am not dangerous now,
but I am not saying I won’t be tomorrow.
You see, total paranoia is just total awareness.
For me,- a corpse has a beauty and dignity witch a living body can never hold,
There is a peace about death that soothes me.
Just know,
A clown can get away with murder.
-
Wow..Thats really good it expresses alot and shows alot good job..i dont think i can relate..but..who knows i'll read it a fue more times.
-
Registered largely to say I enjoyed these very much. Keep them coming!
-
i will say great because most people have not done a poem before ( like me but i gave it a go, about meerkats) and i will say they are great
-
Publish them!
-
sorry im slacking on the poems guys im just really busy with work and such but i will post a few more verry soon...and im iffy about publishing them cause i dont like how i write
-
sorry it has been a wile guys
"train of thought"
I am from death
not the death of me,
but the death of everything around me
I am from the wetness of the rain.
a cold soothing comfort,
a familer friends tear.
I am from the noise.
the LOUD obnoxious traffic,
making it heard or easy to sleep at night.
I am from the darkness of the shadow.
the same shadow most children,
are forced in to.
Iam from a lost friend.
the moon that lights your way through darkness,
as darkness is the undesierable.
I am fromthe perfection of imperfection.
finding what most cant see.
I am from the heat of the fire.
the fire that burns to destroy,
yet is vitle to creation.
think,
find your train of thought.
Joker Rose
-
Time
time to return
pull your self from the shadows
but know all has changed
killing time has never been like this
do not be scared
walk with your head up high
just lke you did when you were little
your confadence should be in your self not them
dont worry
the people you knew changed
but the people you can know will the same
the world changes people in a way you will never know
-Joker Rose
-
Maybe I am sadistic after all. No matter how dark this is, it actually makes me smile. Good job, Joker!
-
Maybe I am sadistic after all. No matter how dark this is, it actually makes me smile. Good job, Joker!
thanks man... i will try to post more i just dont have alot of time to just post yano
-
In me
to know that you are there
but see something better to do
kills every inch of me
and i think i dont know you
we used to be great
friend till the end
but you seemed to have forgotten that
so the bon breaks at the bend
stick my neck in the gillotine
time after time for you
i would still do it today
for that i am a fool
i will take my pointless way
and all my useless advice
walk away from you
though you have me in a vice
i have always benn there for you
and i will be till the end
i just want you to know
in me you have a friend
-Joker Rose :)
-
Deep. I have a friend I could forward this to, if you'd let me... Good job, Joker.
-
you can use any of my stuff as long as my name is on the bottom of it
-
^^ Alright. I love poetry.