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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Milly Snowpawz on April 21, 2014, 11:40:39 AM
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It's Dark out
Laying alone in a quiet house,
Its dark, its lonely.
Looking through a gap between the rough blue and white curtains,
The moon glistens, shining like a lamp through the mist.
With vision blurring, the moon shimmers.
As the soft smooth flesh of eye lids close,
The tears begin fall.
Slowly at first, running down soft furred cheeks
rolling down and soaking into the fabric of the shirt currently worn.
Harder and faster the tears do fall,
Hitting the pillow or mattress upon which,
The body of the tigress lays.
The tail so long and so soft,
Curls around the form of the weeping tigress,
as she tries to comfort herself.
No words can describe how she feels,
what is spinning through her mind.
One thing is clear,
Lonely, sad wild cat.
In the dark room of the quiet house
The tigress weeps,
For reasons,
Untold.
I just felt like doing this.... I'm far more into writing stories.... but ill just start with something like this
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I do believe thats the first thing of yours you've ever let me read :P
Its goooood. Sad. But good!
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7 years and thats the first thing???
well there will be moar big guy.
n thanks... ~steals a hug from teh Tyga~
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When Love is lost.
Spiraling out of control, I cannot see,
The images, The Memories, Words forgotten.
Blinded by what is Lost, Seeing what once was.
Body Shaking, ive lost control.
Can i Get it back,
I fall, The world crashes before my eyes,
Someone stop this tumbling.
Rustling of the leave form the wind,
Let me know i still live,
The scent of the Flowers, and the warmth of the sun.
something tells me im not done.
Im lost in love, And Love is Lost to me,
If i lay here long enough, Maybe
Just Maybe...
Love will find me.
Milly Snowpaws
Wrote this bout 4 months ago.....
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It Was But a Dream
Sitting in the darkness, I Look around,
Suddenly all i see is you,
Out of the darkness a brightness appears.
Standing, i smile, Your glowing arm open wide,
Inviting me,
I walk as if in a dream, gliding over,
Stopping in front of you.
Your arms close around me,
Surrounding me in light,
As i look into your eyes,
I gasp and recoil,
They are not there.
I close my eyes, upon reopening them, I shiver,
You have gone,
Alone in the darkness once more,
You were never there.
Im still sitting here,
In darkness,
It was, but a dream.
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Now that is very good. Well done :D
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Peace and Beauty
From the first time i ever saw you,
I Knew, I knew i was in love,
The way you light up my life since that very first time,
Fills me with hope.
You radiate such beauty, such passion,
Once a day is just not enough,
Because as the day goes on,
The Light before me fades away.
You bring be peace, You give me life,
Smiling down upon me,
My belly becomes a flutter,
Of high hopes and high dreams.
Sunrise, Your are the beauty of this world.
May the light continue to guide me, fill me with hope,
with peace and love.
Nothing competes to you.
Milly Snowpaws
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Yet another great poet ^_^
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Absolutely loving the poems so far!
KEEP IT UP X3
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Another amazing poet indeed! :)
I wish I could do such magical things with words as you do and turn such mere combinations of letters into pieces of art... :/
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thanks guys <3
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Something so fine.
With the sun shimmering down,
Warming the fur covered belly,
A simple pleased smile,
spreads across the face of the tigress.
Soft paw pads brush over the prickly blades of grass
Tickling between her digits,
the rumbling purr, soft and long,
fills the air, harmonizing with the gentle sound of the leaves with the breeze.
The Long fluffy tail,
sweeps the ground in a playful manner,
footpaws wiggling with comfort of her happiness,
still the smile stays upon the face of the Tigress.
Eyes of Aqua blue,
watch as clouds drift along in the light blue sky,
casting small shadows upon the earth,
sending shivers through her body.
Still the shimmering sun warms her,
Filling her with the feeling of freedom,
When something is this fine,
He can only but watch as his love baths in the midday Sun.
Milly Snowpaws
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one word Milly
AWESOME
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Wow...
Seriously, I should visit this poem haven far more often! ^_^
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A World Away
Relaxed and Contented,
Stretched out, ears perked,
Listening to a range of music,
enjoying the peace.
Eyes closed, Pretending,
That your worlds away,
the songs creating a world,
within your mind, sending you far.
Floating, gliding, free,
Nothing like laying alone,
with the freedom washing over you,
In a World all your own.
Stay quiet, keep the music playing,
Because this moment,
Might just last,
Forever.
Milly Snowpaws
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Be with you.
As they gather around,
you see her,
standing against the far wall,
quiet and looking down.
The white and black fur visable,
Shinning in the well lit room,
her long tail curled around
her shy looking form.
With a twitch of her ears,
She looks up, directly into your eyes,
even form this distance,
you see she is sad.
Wanting to go to her,
To see a smile upon her lips,
But unable to move,
for the crowd around you.
Watching from afar,
She slinks away,
Unnoticed, except by you,
Your heart melts.
Milly Snowpaws
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Is this love?
Look into those eyes,
remember how you met,
the smile upon those lips
forever in your mind.
Things once said, once forgotten,
now light a fire within,
heart beating fast,
hold out your hand, and wait.
The softness of their touch,
feeling the butterflies flutter inside,
step closer,
hold them tight.
Both sighing with content,
nothing else matters,
here and now,
is all that counts.
Milly Snowpaws
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Nuked
Broken down,
Torn to pieces,
one broken promise,
is all it takes.
The love that was there,
ripped apart,
a lonely empty space,
is all thats left.
Why hurt someone,
esp when you love them,
to loose them,
just like that.
Its hard not to cry,
to feel the pain,
one day you will see,
what was done to me.
Milly Snowpaws
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Cry...never let it grow inside...cry, till all you can do is smile. C u round milly! :)
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You're getting better Milly, keep it up!
Now get me a coke woman. :P
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Is it possible to fall in love with writing? Because I just did. Milly, if I may call you such, your writing doesn't just speak to me on an emotional level. It speaks to me on a most basic and primal level. I feel a connection to you and we've yet to say a single word. If ever I'd get the chance to meet you I'd certainly give you the biggest hug. You write not only with the volume of a tigeress, but the grace and intelligence of a dragon too. Perhaps you are part dragon you should find out. Milly you put into words though a lot of what I've been trying years to do. Thank you Milly <3 Please don't stop writing!
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What is this?
Fur prickling,
Eyes upon her,
The Tigress Looks around,
hazel eyes look back.
Standing straight,
Aqua eyes gazing into,
the hazel orbs in the shadows,
Frozen in awe.
Tail flicking the tigress moves,
one paw closer, curiosity strong,
Wondering, ears perked,
Whom those hazel eyes belong too.
MIlly Snowpaws.
Story set out poem style.. More to come.
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I love it! I'm eager to read more ~
I do love a good story!
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In to the shadows
Into the shadows,
The tigress pads,
seeing the tall form,
of the furry within.
Eyes gazing into her own,
her breath becomes faster,
Such hazel eyes,
she cannot pull away.
A Whispered 'hello'
she notes ears perk,
heart pounding as,
a soft paw touches her own.
Milly Snowpaws
More to come ^^
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I can't wait. Milly your writing is becoming addictive!
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the soft embrace.
"hello" the sound of a male whispered,
his paw lightly squeezeing her own,
Butterflies in the belly of them both,
Given away by there panting breaths.
'Beautiful Tigress'
His voice gentle and awed,
Finally she sees,
A Lynx before her eyes.
Milly Snowpaws
Enjoy stilll more to come.....
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Hey that lynx sounds familiar hmmmm
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words can paint pictures of love and loss. What do you paint? Keep at it mill.
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Stay Away!
She thought you had gone,
You vanished,
She was glad,
The Tigress was Finally healing.
The pain you caused,
The tears those Aqua eyes let loose,
Pain so strong,
Will it ever leave.
A Wolf you are.
Left the loving Tigress,
For another girl,
Leaving her unstable.
Months have past,
Months of trying to forget,
Broken Wounded heart,
Almost healed.
Why did you come back?
Stepping back into her life,
Opening the wounds,
Once more causing pain.
The Tigress weeps,
Alone she is,
Never thought the wolf would return,
Just stay away!
MIlly Snowpaws
(Poem unrelated to the latest story posts... this Poem is inspired by truth and the here and now)
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*Hugs Milly*
I don't like this stinky wolf >:(
Shall I bite him? >:3
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Who is causing my Girls trouble. I'll rip their heads off!
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Trix, im not exactly liking the Wolf myself, as you can tell...
Shiro Shhhh, settle hun, this Tigress's Ex decided it would be a good idea to reopen the wounds he caused on Her.
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Words
Can you paint?
Paint a picture with only words.
A blank page,
Come alive.
ground soft,
with the moss that covered it
dark wood mingled witht he light,
Of the forest all around.
Green are leaves,
that hang moving,
With the sprinkle of earths,
Summer breeze.
Fur rustled,
tingling and tickling
ears alert,
Freedom.
Crunching with footpaws,
Over the leave covered moss ground,
smiling to one self,
soemthing so little,
making lips smile.
Tail swishing softly,
Tapping at soft furry sides,
paws runnign across,
the rough tree bark.
Birds chirp,
sing and fly overhead,
Rushing water sounding,
from the nearby stream.
Open your mind,
See what can be seen,
Listen to your heart,
And Dream.
Milly Snowpaws
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Beautiful Milly just beautiful!
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Well done Mill, you're getting quite good at this
Is it bad I want to correct your typos?
<.< >.>
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Thank you lil Lynx
ANd Tyga, Cheers Matey, no but then you know i full well cant spell for horse crap dude.
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XP <-- I make a smiley at you
take that!
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Nice one Mill!
We should form a poetry club... and get drunk XD
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Mill that is just amazing im stuck in a myraid of emotions please please keep writing Iloved it
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lol Trix totally should gal!
n thank you lil fox. demon
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YAAAAY a new poem! XD
I've missed those, too busy to read all the time :(
IT's AWESOME! ^_^
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Cheers Mr. Red ~Nods head with a smile~
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Weeeee back with some more stuffs! holiday was great! but glad to be home!
Light of Life
As the sun sets,
the Tigress saddens,
as the moon gets high,
her tail drops low.
Something so electric,
Something so fine,
when the sun is high,
her smile is wide.
As he sleeps,
She misses him greatly,
Her life suddenly empty,
But shes in his dreams.
With the morning light,
It becomes a sight,
for her loneliness goes,
as the Wolfox arrives.
Milly Snowpaws
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These next two i actually wrote for my Online Bro a Red and Silver Husky by the name of Spring-the-Husky (on FA) But i wanted to share them with you all.
Who'd have thought.
There is nothing more stunning,
then a brother loving his sister,
protecting and caring,
being so sweet.
He makes her laugh,
he makes her cry,
But together they are strong,
Together as one.
She cares and worries,
and holds him tight,
She picks him up
and lays him down.
Who'd of thought,
the bond was there,
Between a Tigress and a Husky,
Forever are Near.
Milly Snowpaws
Spring.
Spring, Its a season,
But to me its more then that,
its the name of my brother,
Spring the Husky.
Though many call him such,
deep down he will always be.
Raizel, My special brother
With red and Silver fur all over.
His real life isn't the best,
but neither is mine,
yet we manage,
to still be there for others.
Raizel i love you,
and you know what i've said,
Keep it in mind over the next few weeks,
Ill be here always, Just remember that.
Never fear Your sister will forever be there. <3
Milly Snowpaws.
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Weeeee back with some more stuffs! holiday was great! but glad to be home!
Light of Life
As the sun sets,
the Tigress saddens,
as the moon gets high,
her tail drops low.
Something so electric,
Something so fine,
when the sun is high,
her smile is wide.
As he sleeps,
She misses him greatly,
Her life suddenly empty,
But shes in his dreams.
With the morning light,
It becomes a sight,
for her loneliness goes,
as the Wolfox arrives.
Milly Snowpaws
I especially like this one Milly! :*
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Thankies Trixie Darl!! XD
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Drop dead Tigress
She knew as soon as she got the message, Something bad was to follow. How right she was.
Such a beautiful week, The Tigress was so happy, enjoying hanging out with her online friends and family.
Today her world came crashing all around her.
Everyone talked behind her back spread terrible rumors about her.
She was suddenly spinning around saying sorry for something she wasn't in understanding of.
The Tigress was told as much as she needed to know, it felt like a thousand stab wounds to her back. and a ton of bricks pushing her to the point of been 6 feet under.
How many had she lost form others misunderstanding?
From her own doing.... she may never know.
All she now wants is to be in the paws of her loving Mate, Her Wolfox, Whom has no idea what consipred this day.
With a Heavy Heart, and Clouded Mind, The Tigress Sits maybe not alone, but in her world the life has left her mind, her emotions numb, her heart cold.
Milly Snowpaws, The White Tigress.
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Awww, babe :(
If you wanna vent just pm girl *hugs*
You just let me know who to slag off and I'm on it. Iz noes teh kulafool wurdz.
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so, ive had a wee bit of emotional strain lately.. online drama..... so called friends.. and all that Jazz... i thought about writing it out into a story, get it out of my system ya know?
its unfinished but here's what i have so far.... lemmie know what you think......
"That pain is there"
Is this what it feels like?
The question played inside the mind of the Tigress for hours, now she lay in shadows of the trees the moon poking through the leaves as she stared up watching it drift over the sky at snails pace, a cold winter breeze prickling at her fur. she shivered constantly but didn't move, her usually bright aqua blue eyes shining, we're dull and clouded over with the emotions she was feeling.
'Am i honestly such a bad fur that im so misunderstood?' she whispered to herself she hadn't eaten in over 24 hours, her belly was rumbling but she didn't care, no one else cared either. Her mind had been racing with the hurt and pain of the day she hadn't cared about anything else esp her own well being.
She stood as the moon vanished behind some dark rain clouds, no sooner had she stood leaning against the tree trunk claws out did the rain start to fall heavily, soaking through her clothes and fur, causing the lean Tigress to Shiver more so as she set off into it.
'time to vanish, after today no one will care.' she stood in a clearing the River near by running loud and quick. A deep painful sigh came from her maw, this place, she had been here before. She meet a Feral Wolf in this clearing over a year ago.
Tears suddenly erupted from her dull Aqua eyes at the pain of loosing her dear friend, over something so stupid, 'Why did you start it, Why did it end like that' she cried out knowing no one could hear her over the rain, river and distance.
Little did she know as she sunk onto the rain soaked grass, that she was been watched, a pair of Hazel eyes glistening with Tears of there own, stood a Rain Soaked Husky. Not noticeable in the Dark even with his Red and Silver fur. he watched Crying with her feeling her pain. He had gone looking for her.
The Husky whom always had The Tigress' Spirit at his side had felt it vanish, instead his own Spirit returned to him, Alerting the Husky into finding His wonderful Tigress Sister. Now he stands in tears watching her, the pain she was in clear to the Husky. Still he wasn't yet sure if he should approach the emotionally drained Tigress, in fear of her running once more he sunk down where he stood and knelt on the sodden ground.
Slamming her Paws into the muddy ground she ended up spraying her white and black fur with large splotches of Brown mud her voice full of pain.
'Don't you know i loved you deeply as a friend, don't you realize what you started, the chain reaction, don't you know the pain that has fallen upon me, you and the Timber wolf, the accusing you both did, the lies others told only making you even more nasty towards me'
The Tigress crawled over to the fast running river, she closed her eyes , flopping forwards soaking her belly fur and clothes in the thick mud. Her whole posture through out the afternoon reflection all the pain of this day. Not one she considered family had stood beside her, supported her, talked to her. She felt alone in this world as if she didn't exist.
Slowly the Tigress moved, spinning her drained hurt body around, dropping her foot paws into the water. From a distance the Husky watched before gasping as he realized what she was about to do and took off at a sprint hoping to reach her in time.
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On a lighter side another commission i had done ....
oh and a freebie (1st is freebie sketch lineart thing)
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Bleed out
Curling up eyes closed,
Long tail wrapping around the lean form,
softest sigh escaping an unsmiling maw.
Tears like sparkles of stars dribble down
The Tigress whom is always there for others
lays curled upon the floor alone.
Does anyone ever stop and think that maybe
This tigress sheds tears every night?
That all she wants to a hug?
Shes not purrfect, far from it,
Does that mean her back needs to be in so much pain from the stabbing?
She who has been there for so many, now struggles to hold what love is left.
Because she has been hurt so often.
A Tigress lays Shaking, crying,
misunderstood, and broken.
How can people stab her so hard when all she has wanted was to be happy,
No one cared that she is in love,
They stabbed her back and left her to bleed out.
The Tigress with broken emotions
Lays upon the floor
just waiting for even just a hug
believe it she has problems too.
Milly Snowpaws
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Oh sweetie D=
*hugs hun*
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I Dream...
Padding through a forset on strong but graceful pawpads,
Stepping up to a pool of clear blue water
refelecting the stars above and the moon full and bright.
a face of white and black, whos Aqua eyes shine bright.
Feral face staring not into her own reflection,
But into the stars reflected only increasing her own eyes sparkle,
a tail long and striped bearly brushing the grass adn leaves as it swishes peacefully
Turning her head looking up, Black adn white fur shimmering with a soft but gentle warm breeze
heart beating with love and peace
Happy and like a cub without a care in the world.
bounceing off to explore the forst of tranquility
Blues and greens, Mixed with a touch of black adn white yellow and sparkles.
the feeling of been free.
I dream of being who i long to be and feeling a freedom that so few get a chance to live,
A dream is a wish and some times wishes come true
Milly Snowpaws
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I dont know the beginning nor the end, but know that i'm thine friend. Age matters not to those from the same pot. missed are most so ill try to be a better host. (i really got carried away i hope its enough to light your day. also i think im stuck speaking in rhymes all of the stupid times. i miss you friend!)
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High
She was left on the ground,
Broken and wounded,
a small puddle at her head,
from the tears she had shed.
The Dark clouds were fast coming,
Ready to take her away.
When a small light came into view.
Closer it came she saw it was you.
Lifting her head but an inch of the ground,
You sat down beside her,
And words were said,
"Im here now hun"
Her tears began to fall once more,
But this time in hope.
You lifted her up and held her close,
Giving her warmth and support,
After a moment or so,
Her strength returned,
Up her head lifted.
Aqua eyes catching a loving gaze of the Silver lakes.
Suddenly you lifted her as you stood,
Turning away form the dark clouds that came,
Protecting Your Tigress with all that you could,
Healing the wounds that others inflicted.
just one whisper came form her Maw,
"I Love you My Wolf"
Looking down at her a tear taps her check,
"I Love You too Kitten" is what you said.
Milly Snowpaws
(written for my mate and Posted on FA and now on here)
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Threw it all away....
He lost it all,
gave out his info,
which blocked his sister,
leaving her in tears.
A "Master" he said,
"Demanded" the log in info,
Banned him to never speak to his sister again.
Without warning,
She goes to say,
Something sweet,
only to discover the block was in place.
Her tears now fall,
Quiet upon her bed,
this wasnt how it was ment to end.
A Sister now faced with a choice at hand,
A hard one at that,
Its the end.
"No More Brother"
"You have hurt me big time"
the last words she said was..
"Goodbye"
The Husky has now lost someone so dear,
A friend like sister
Is now gone for ever.
Shes Blocked him right back, and Said her goodbye,
Now she continues to talk to her Mate,
While the tears Flood away.
Ive been thrown away....
~Milly Snowpaws
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Well.... Thoughts and shyt...
Im begining to dislike Christmas...
We did an early Xmas on Tuesday afternoon for my 5 year old cub, because her ..... Father.... (Tyga) my EX is taking her down to his family for Xmas for a few days... Oh Joy, in 5 years i have had ONE xmas with her and my family and that was only because it was at MY house because i had to work.... (im an ex dairy farmer) so i find myself Living back home with my own Mom n dad, and sharing time with my daughter with Tyga.. aka Week on week off... 50/50 care.. yes sounds good, i had her for her 5th birthday.. but then she hasnt had one xmas up north with MY whole family... its saddening....
Then i gotta put up with my own little sister "Miss high n mighty because i have a job and money and you dont" Home with her own Boyfriend for xmas... Oh joy!
By the way.. i kinda want to rant this shyt out because its doing my head in.. gotta get it out of my system... ~Head desks~
Im lucky to have such an amazing and supportive Mate though hes everything i could have hoped for, except the distance... But im living with that and we are 4 months into our long distance relationship, closer to 5 months already,. Yay for My sexy Dire Wolf! i call him my Oreo Wolf! WOOOOO! which is kinda cute and odd ball ish because ive always loved cookies n cream flavours ice cream and chocolate and i LOOOOOOOVE oreo cookies!!!
But at the same time as all my loving goodness, i kinda wish we could be spending this time of year together in the fur so to speak.
Though also in saying that..... with mine and his birthdays only a month apart from eachother ive already started planning my pressie for him, kinda have too.... He was naughty and brought me a Drawing tablet for Xmas.. But he knows it will be used adn most deffinatly improve on my own digital Arts XD ~Mews~
Anyways This is long and ranty and all that stuff... its just get out of my head stuff and a slight little catch up... More for Trix then anyone :O funny that....
Merry Chrismas everyone.
Milly Snowpaws
P.S: i dont think i swore in this Admins, and im not rereading threw all of that, please forgives? <3
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Oh Milly :'(
*hugs*
Merry Christmas hun.