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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: HyenaKing on December 15, 2013, 11:42:52 PM
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The first one here, I made up at another thread:
Why?
I find that unnecessary for you to say that!
Why are.. go sleep somewhere else, i'm tired.
I wonder why now she attacked me while I was setting my alarm
Good, go home, weirdo.
I just wonder.
Why?
Heres Another:
Cartwheels
Cartwheels, dancing, and being cute.
Living In a obscure time zone has its difficulties.
I've always have been nice!
Understood clearly.
Trixie Vixen
Yeah, that one was for a very unique character, Trix.
I'll write as I get more ideas.
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You put emotion in it that makes your writing livable. It is something we can almost relate to!
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Wow! I don't know what to say :')
I'm SO glad you've started a thread!!
*double cartwheels*
*hugs Vulpy*
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you are very Talented TFV *Hugs*
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Thank you!
My goodness, so much hugs!
Pets
Sometimes annoying
Always there to beg for food
Why do you make noise so much?
I Shout to stop you, though I never mean what I say.
I want to make you quiet
Your still my friend
Right, Rex?
*Woof*
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That summed up My day with my dog... (Not Alex BTW)
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So true.
My dog never judges me and everything I do is AMAZING!
In this forum it can easy become confusing though!
Nice one Vulpes! *hugs* :)
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My cats never jude..only love :D
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Three cheers for loving pets
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hip hip...
HOORAY!
hip hip...
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^_^
I am in the mood for writing~!
Limbo
As if I weren't ready.
I've been though enough.
So I simply put the blade
though my wrist.
I simply was given mercy
of what to come.
I lost strength and enveloped into a pool of grey
And thinking
What a quick occurrence
When I simply did not know
What was to come.
I was thrown into a world
As fast as I left the previous
And I came to cold sand,
Black, sharp, cold sand.
To be continued.
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Ooooh. A darker mood this time fella. Very brave.
I often cover up one of my wrists that has scars :(
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Yes and im planning on writing a bit more soon.
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Tired, fearless, though Paralyzed and alone.
Paranoid and depressed, going back to old Habits.
History being Unsown
Watching them go like rabbits
Memories falling, flying, skyrocketing.
Hating the distaste and unlike of others
Nothing is worth Pocketing.
And you turn to anothers.
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"going back to old Habits" really struck a chord with me.
*hugs*
:')
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Yes sure, i encourage people saying "Cool stufssels i liked it"
*hug*
But Honetly I've gotten an instict to disregard EVERYTHING no matter what you say when it comes to my own personal work.
Just too many times i've been lied too and too many times where it's hurt me posting something i created.
I think its great i porduced of something in value in your opionion, but eh, I cant ever belive anyone to that...
Back to writing, Me!
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You write very well, I can feel the emotion in them c':
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..Sure.
Relapse
Well here we go again
Like a repeated dream.
A Phase of feighn
A Disembodied Team
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The feels! Love your style of writing! You put your very heart and soul into it, and that makes me want to re-read it a hundred times over!
If I may, I have written some works that I am in need of criticism. I'm an aspiring writer that has a simplistic, but often darker style. I put a meaning to each poem and story. Lessons I've had to learn the hard way, or general life experiences. I also understand your disregard and distrust to others opinion. I can honestly say I'm the same way, but I'm working through it. Only with me, it's fear of creating something that has no meaning, and that this world is filled with liars. Luckily, the fandom in general, and the forum seems to be very honest and supportive. Best of wishes to your writing endeavors! -Your friend, Haden.
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Haden,
Thanks for the complements. Feel free toi start a thread. If you want it privatley critizised, go ahead and send me a personal message.
Meh, Bored, let's fill in a blank.
Oh, no, He's here.
To my greatest fear.
Coming to kick me down
Of all the work i've shown around.
Bet then he leaves.
I fired him to my please.
To my greatest relief,
Going to a new chief,
For who i need advice from.
Someone who isn't dumb.