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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: cloudedleo on November 03, 2013, 07:32:05 PM

Title: A poem (venting my anger)
Post by: cloudedleo on November 03, 2013, 07:32:05 PM

my eyes are dirty, why cant I see the light.
F*cking hatred is killing me, I try too love you all.
why cant they see me, I see them all.
I love you all I really do.
I love you all, but if you push me into the darkness.
the darkness you will fell.
Why wont they hear me. why wont they see me.
my brain starts racing, my though turn to hate.
I am darkness and darkness you will feel.
 
 

Title: Re: A poem (venting my anger)
Post by: Grisli on November 03, 2013, 08:55:59 PM

This is quite powerful. I like it. Keep it up!
 :) ^_^ :) ^_^

Title: Re: A poem (venting my anger)
Post by: cloudedleo on November 03, 2013, 09:08:32 PM

thank you will try at least   :D