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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Spotted_Serval on March 03, 2013, 09:25:52 PM
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This is something I started writing a few years back, but I didn't like where I was taking it, and scrapped it for a while. I have debated whether it is worth going back and re-writing it to try and take it in a different direction. Thoughts?
http://hamant.deviantart.com/art/Eloca-Prologue-and-Chapter-1-332560807?ga_submit_new=10%253A1362345643&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1 (http://hamant.deviantart.com/art/Eloca-Prologue-and-Chapter-1-332560807?ga_submit_new=10%253A1362345643&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1)
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Oh, you're the one who watched me on dA! XD
Thanks btw for that ^^
As for your story:
To me, it's very well written. In the way it's easy to read (which is a good thing). It reads fluently, I should say. And the story seems interesting. If you want to -and have the time- I think you should definitley re-write it, or at least continue it :)
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Oh, you're the one who watched me on dA! XD
Thanks btw for that ^^
As for your story:
To me, it's very well written. In the way it's easy to read (which is a good thing). It reads fluently, I should say. And the story seems interesting. If you want to -and have the time- I think you should definitley re-write it, or at least continue it :)
Haha yeah, that was me. XD You're welcome. :)
Alright, perhaps I will keep working on it then. Thanks!
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They def. have a lot of potential ^^
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They def. have a lot of potential ^^
Thanks! It was really just an attempt at keeping an ongoing storyline. I usually just write poems. Haha