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Title: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: ColdScales22 on September 18, 2012, 12:59:08 AM
Alright here's the OOC, anything to ask just tell me and I'll do my best to inform you
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: FurryJunky on September 18, 2012, 01:46:13 AM
This belongs here! ;)
 
Name-Anabelle Sareo (Anne for short)
Race-Saber cat
Gender-Female
Family-Unknown
Look-Light brown solid coat with black tipped ears. Black stripes going down tail.
Weapon(s)-9 MM silenced pistol then.
L115a3 Sniper Rifle custom made with a counterweight in the stock for standing shooting. A kickout blade in the stock with a long dagger like bayonet.
A sword is in the style of the samurai sword made from tempered intermediate alloy.(Freaking strong and sharp as HELL... And very light)
And a dagger. (The dagger is an old standard combat survivalist knife from the slave owner she killed)
Fighting Style(s)-At long distances she would use her rifle, NEVER missing. At unexpected close range combat she uses the reflex blades that are built into her rifle, She also has developed her own fighting style with it. At expected close range combat she uses her energy sword and dagger.
Faction-None
Backround story-As a girl she lived in a trading caravan that sailed the sea(s) trading the towns and city's on the coasts. At the age of 7 her caravan was attacked separating her from her parents. She was taken by the attackers who turned out to be slavers and sold her to a plantation owner in the Rekzor's Empire. After two years of abuse and hard labor she revolted killing her owner in his sleep with the same dagger she has today. When she went on the run she meet an amature thief who took her in and taught her all he knew. But she excelled at the trade, and soon started to take up bigger jobs of assassinations. Now she is living in Sandtrap City as a professional hired assassin. She never takes up contracts upfront but has a basket behind the GoldDuck tavern where people would drop gold and the name of the target.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: Colioli4 on September 18, 2012, 04:30:52 PM
Let's RP!!!  XD
 
Name: Devan 'The Fury' Fera'tyru
Race: 'Velociraptor Sapiens'
Gender: Male
Family: none
Look: Dark green scaled Velociraptor.
Weapons: - Silenced All-Terrain-WARfare Sniper Rifle (or AT-WAR): silenced long range combat sniper rifle with high velocity rounds, 16x zoom scope and bipod.
- Pump-up heavy duty shotgun (nicknamed 'Big-Bang').
- Retractable blades build into his forarms for close-combat.
Upgrades: - Mechanical Eye: makes his aiming 70% better, able to see infrared and ultraviolet, heat-seeking
- Retractable blades (see weapons)
- Exoskeleton 'Omega' (for extra dexterity and strength)
Faction: Rekzor's Empire (RE) (???)
Background: Devan was recruited at a young age by the Empire to work for them as a specialized soldier. He is now awaiting his first real assignment. But, young Devan is confused. Whoi are his parents? Who is the enemy? Is he really fighting at the good side???
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: FurryJunky on September 19, 2012, 11:52:01 PM
Is there an order in witch we are aloud to post or are you just waiting for more people to join?
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: ColdScales22 on September 21, 2012, 04:01:31 AM
I was waiting for more people to join but since that's not going anywhere soon I'll just to posting now
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: Colioli4 on September 22, 2012, 08:30:37 PM
The building collapses SLOWLY... You can still escape  ;)
Just thought of a 'booming' start of the conflict  XD
 
Let the fight begin!!!
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: FurryJunky on September 30, 2012, 12:08:34 AM
I'm not all that sure how to continue because I'm being held at gunpoint... and only order i was given is to walk forward...
Sooo might want to do something specific now.
Just saying.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on September 30, 2012, 06:26:41 AM
Name-she is a street myth known only as "saint"


Race-unknown


Gender-Female


Family-Unknown


Look-black leather jumpsuit with a crimson cross on the back


Weapon(s)-has no weapons, uses a body that is conditioned to the point that she can disarm a gun before the trigger can be pulled, or at a distance, dodge bullets, she has no augmentations, yet only those who have them could hope to match her speed and strength, she does however carry explosives for.....coaxing....doors and buildings open


Fighting Style(s)-every martial art and mix of arts ever created, plus a few specially created ones


Faction-None


Background story-she helps those in danger, though her appearance is a summons to hell for any who are putting others in danger, few know her gender on account of not getting a good look at her, none know her name, none who live have seen her face, all recognize the cross, those with sense fear or respect it, she shows up wherever there is trouble, but is based in no place in particular
she never kills, save for the persistent few who come back even after coming close to death.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: FurryJunky on September 30, 2012, 06:29:11 AM
Heh  :P I Love your character..
Ours are kind of opposites... This is going to be fun!
The RP allready started if you want to jump in BTW.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: Colioli4 on September 30, 2012, 02:14:52 PM
... Was that not a BIIIIIIIT of Godmodding  ;)
 
Anyway, don't make a habit of it. Now I can't even shoot at you!!!  :P
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on September 30, 2012, 06:33:14 PM
actually irl it is quite easy to disarm someone when they are holding someone at gunpoint, they focus too much on the person they are pointing the gun at, and two, i don't have weaponry, we are now on even ground....execpt for the fact that her body is her weapon, also the only time i could disarm that well is when i catch someone who is on their gaurd, but not for me, also......you now are holding a live grenade
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: FurryJunky on September 30, 2012, 06:45:49 PM
How long has your character lived in this city Whitewolf?
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on October 01, 2012, 02:17:35 AM
she does not live, she drifts
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on October 02, 2012, 08:28:44 AM
and i suppose that little grenade deactivation/weapon repair was not godmodding? i threw the ENTIRE firing mechanism off the building, and the things are so fragile that you would have to carry it disassembled, and then it would take you an hour minimum to reassemble just three of them. not pissed. just saying that hypocrisy looks bad on anyone, second it was pre-stated in ooc that my character can epicly disarm, yours says nothing about a cybernetic weapons interface, or him being a weapons specialist, I just want things to be fair because your character sheet was a little vague on abilities, and i could see many RPers abusing this when they find that their character needs to be able to do something specific, my experience with my irl rp friends has taught me that we have specialized character sheets so that we are forced to work as a team in order to fill in the gaps.


all in all this is just a suggestion, I do not run this RP
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: Colioli4 on October 02, 2012, 02:02:36 PM
Hey, I'm kinda on my own out there. I'm the only RP'er trying trying to kill the scientist  :/ . I thought the Grenade-trick was just a good idea. The weapon thing might have been a bit overestimated, but I still am alone against a whole army of you all! And without any guns, how can I stand my own?
 
 And Devan is an Specialized Operator (Spec Op). Sure he knows a thing or two about weapons, and how to repair them!  ;)
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on October 02, 2012, 07:59:41 PM
a thing or two does not a specialist make
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: ColdScales22 on October 02, 2012, 08:50:00 PM
Okay I've been gone for a few due to college but I'm back now and I've read what everyone posted. Okay, Whitewolf, what is up with your character? There's no race listed, not even a name except for some 'street name' barely a backstory, knowledge of every martial arts skill known to them and her body is her weapon?


I'm sorry but that's a seriously OP character, you better tone down on it or else that's not gonna fly.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on October 03, 2012, 03:44:44 AM
hmmm tone it down.....lemme see, conceivably my character is not a killer, can only take the offensive when able to sneak up on people, my character is made to protect, not fight, clearly no other character in this RP has much of a peaceful disposition, may hesitate to kill,but probably will kill if angered sufficiently, my character MAIMS, and only as a last resort, ask youself this, if you are evenly matched in skill with someone, but they have no morals preventing them from say...taking a hostage, who will win? I am giving my character a lot of power yes, but with that is coming an aversion to violence


alone, my character may be near invincible, but my character is a protector, create a sufficiently harmful distraction to the person or group being protected, move in while distracted


as for the rest names are difficult, and backstory more so, especially considering this is the first time i have tried this particular archtype
most of the time i play aggressive characters
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: ColdScales22 on October 03, 2012, 05:04:45 AM
Even if your character is a 'defender' it doesn't give a valid excuse for her to have all these abilities. I mean you've given her the ability to disarm a weapon before it's even fired (how this is possible even without augments is strictly beyond my knowledge), her story doesn't say anything about her and even her race is unknown at this time. You need to seriously rethink this character because to me it just falls into the 'unstoppable assassin/hero' type of role, the others here have a character with a set backstory, certain abilities and something to compensate for that.


You've barely given your character any type of drawback to them and it looks like it's fallen strictly into a powerplay role. You can tell me that they only use their powers to defend others but the abilities still being there would be a hassle to work with or around it.
Title: Re: Into the Sandtrap OOC
Post by: kivabunny on October 03, 2012, 06:26:02 AM
ahhh but there in lies the problem


 take out the insane disarming.......i get shot
 
take out the stealth.....i get shot before i can disarm
 
take out the insane speed and strength.....well all the other characters have physical augmentations.....i get my back broken and end up in a wheelchair
then shoot myself from depression.


they work in sync.


as per the backstory, i am working on it, as i mentioned before, this is the first time that i have played this kind of archetype




have you ever actually played a game that allowed you to do so and played through without ever attacking? it proves my point, pure defense is literally several times harder than attacking, if you attack and succeed, no more threat, defend and succeed and the threat is still there,but you are fine


my character IS overpowered, IF it were offensive, but it being defensive levels the playing field


if you can think of a way to make my character a pure defender and still have a fair chance at surviving the fight i am fully open to suggestions


as to how the disarming speed is possible, consider that a modern martial arts master can dodge a rattlesnakes strike, factor in mass genetic refining, everyone now has alot of potential, and my character as far as potential goes, probably does not have the highest speed, however it is the training that allows martial artists to dodge the snake, not the potential