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Title: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 11, 2012, 01:31:19 PM
These poems and stories are for my Wolfy, but feel free to read and review! Here's the first one.
 
 
 
For My Wolfy
With you, I feel no fear
I feel truly loved
When you are near
My Heart wants to sing to the sky
And gaze ever deeper
Into your eyes
Though the miles seperate us
Our love together will bind us
For my love for you is greater
Than the ocean of space
And sooner rather than later
I wish to see your face
This Heart will forever be yours
This mind will e'er be thinking
Of you
This voice will sing it's song
For you
For you, my Wolfy
Are my all, my Heart, my love
Now and forever
I will ever be
Ever have
Nothing but love
For you
My Wolfy
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: MrRazot on May 11, 2012, 01:42:03 PM
Beautiful :)
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Post by: Colioli4 on May 12, 2012, 09:12:44 PM
God, I almost cried... *pulls himself together*
Great poem, one of the best I read these recent days. Keep going :)
Title: Works of Words
Post by: JoJoJoshua on May 13, 2012, 08:29:02 AM
Very sweet of you. I'm sure the wolf will love it.:3
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: anoni on May 15, 2012, 11:51:32 AM
Awww that was really nice :D
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Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 15, 2012, 01:28:22 PM
Figured i'd do a knew one.
Two in love
Seperated by miles and miles
One creates portrairs of beauty
The other uses words to convey
And he misses him
These two wolves
Bound by love and happiness
Together forever in a world
All their own
And he misses him
The one of words
Can scarcely speak
To his love
It tears him apart
And he misses him
But the one of words knows
One day, they will be together
That they may one day kiss
Fills his Heart with joy and longing
And he misses him
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Post by: Tika on May 15, 2012, 02:26:06 PM
ohh my... :'(
it's so beautiful, i love it, Thank you cub  ^_^
I Love you ^_^
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Post by: Colioli4 on May 15, 2012, 02:40:02 PM
You're a great poet :)
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Post by: Tika on May 15, 2012, 03:06:34 PM
Indeed he is  ^_^
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 15, 2012, 05:38:11 PM
 ^_^ I just finished this one, and i wanted to get it on here before i forgot. And thank you guys for the comments! ^_^  I feel loved!
Funny how things just
Happen
Isn't it?
Funny, things just occur
Without purpose
Without purpose?
No, that can't be it
But it has to be!
There's no other explanation
For my happiness
I don't deserve it
But I'm grateful for it
It's funny how the little things
Are the biggest
It's funny how five letters
Two syllables
Make me so happy
Mean so much to me
Wolfy
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Tika on May 15, 2012, 05:42:25 PM
i can feel the tears coming out my eyes as im typing this  :'( it's so beautiful thank you my love  :'(
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 15, 2012, 05:47:38 PM
It's all for you, my love. ^_^ :3
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Post by: Luggz on May 15, 2012, 08:56:44 PM
These are really good buddy! :)
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Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 16, 2012, 07:40:32 PM
Here's a short one, but i think it's alright.
 
 
Wonderful, always there, my rock
Only one i want to spend my life with forever
Love you forever
Forever yours
You and i together forever.
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 23, 2012, 01:24:22 PM
Okay, after that last crappy one, time to ry this one out.
It's a turbulent
Life we all live
Here
On this Earth
And who is there to calm the storm?
Those
We love
We must hold clonto those
That we love
For they are all that matters
Hold close to them
And you will find yourself
In the eye
Of the Hurricane
That is life
Raging around us
And yet those we love
Are our eyes
Of the Hurricane
Of life

 
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Post by: Tika on May 23, 2012, 02:30:15 PM
It's a cute one, i love it  ^_^
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Post by: anoni on May 24, 2012, 12:30:36 PM
Nice work White :D
The phrasing and format of the poem is really nice I thought XD
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on May 30, 2012, 06:04:50 AM
Thanks, anoni! I apreciate that! Now, of the poems i've down, this one is one of my favorites...even though it doesn't make much sense! ^_^
What Is And Isn't
Winds
Winds keep blowing
Time
Time keeps going
In a second, a day
In a day, a month
In a month a year
In the blink of an eye,
My life flashes by
Where they aren't
I am
Where they can't
I can
In a world all my own
Where time moves to the beat of my Heart
Where their rules apply
When i wish them
My life is mine to live
My Heart is mine to give
My mistakes are mine to remember
But now
My life is yours
My Heart is yours
This love is ours
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: anoni on May 30, 2012, 10:14:42 AM
That's very nice White-heart :P
Some of the lines rhymed too :D
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on June 02, 2012, 06:28:53 AM
Thank ou! That's what i was going for. ^_^
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on June 13, 2012, 05:00:52 AM
This is one of my older ones. I wrote it a few years ago, and i thought it would be nice to show some of my older work.
Joy
The creaking of the trees
The whisper of the woods
The falling of the leaves
In this place i could find
Solace, Quiet
The tang salt upon the air
The endless expanse of blue so fair
The crash of waves, the call of gulls
The gentle rocking slowly lulls
Me into slumber
Here, i could find
Adventure, sweat
Endless Darkness
Velvet Blackness
Pinpricks of light
Souless specters in the night
Here, I find
God, emptiness
Where you find
Joy
Is up to you
Where I find joy
Is where I find
Love, and peace, and
Family together
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Post by: Luggz on June 13, 2012, 05:05:40 AM
That one was really good White. :)
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Post by: anoni on June 13, 2012, 11:02:08 AM
It's quite a bright poem, kind of makes me warm inside xD
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on June 30, 2012, 05:12:12 AM
I just wrote this, at 11:00 pm. So...idk, what do YOU think?
 
 
Let's take a step out of reality, you and I
Take a step into Neverwas, Mightbe, Could'vebeen, Should'vebeen
Take a step into Whatwill, Whatif, MaybeI
Not Memory Lane, not a place to take a stroll, but somewhere more dark
You and I have been down this road before, we all have
You know where we are
It's a place we've all been traveling to far too often
I know, I know, this is not the happiest place, no one wants to be here, no one wants to live here
But some do, too many do
And everyday they see their greatest love walking out the door, everyday they don't stop them
Everyday they answer that text when they should have been watching the road
Far too many live here
I had a place not far from where we are now
And it's filled with these things
But I know
I know that grief is a step, anger is a step, it's all another step
On the staircase to moving on
Everything happens for a reason
You've heard me say it innumerable times
But it does, and we all come out stronger for it
Here, in the City of Regret, it's all past, it's all laid to rest in His eyes
Now you have to let go, time to move on, get up, face the future,
Even though the future will never arrive
Because all we have is
Right here
Right now
The time for regret is over
The time for hope, my friend in the mirror, is evermore, everalways, evernow
Time to face up, and move out
Of the City of Regret
 
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Colioli4 on June 30, 2012, 08:41:52 AM
One word: Amazing

Keep going :)
Title: Re: Works of Words
Post by: Luke White-Heart on July 01, 2012, 05:18:50 AM
Have I lost touch?
Do I know what real is anymore?
Have I ever known?
I regret, I mourn, I grieve, but what for?
Have I been so out of touch that i don't know what's real anymore?
Is it all for nothing, or is it for something i have yet to earn?
To achieve? To realize?
No one's perfect, why should I be any different?
What is the truth?
Do I even know the question anymore?
Did I ever know it?
Does any of that matter anymore?
How do I choose to live?
In regret?
In "what-might-be"s?
NO!
Never again!
I choose to acknowledge the past, hold on for the future, and live in the NOW!
I will hold on, strong to the end, never alone!
All my loved ones, friends, family, they are all here!
With me!
As I walk on, I choose
To hold up my head
And open my Heart
To all the pain and joy
In the many years I have left!
Wherever I'll go
Wherever I've been
Wherever I am
I am here and breathing!