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Title: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 28, 2012, 02:11:43 PM

I've been writing up this story on the computer (Since my handwriting isn't good.) for a while, only completed Chapter 1.
My wording is not the best, though I have tried hard to get stuff to make sense.  :/

http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4t1k9b (http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4t1k9b)

I'm just starting into Chapter 2. Taking a while due to school. Tell me if I did anything good.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on March 28, 2012, 02:17:32 PM

I can't wait to find out what happens next. I really liked the characters.

Also what does LPRD and WLF stand for?

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 28, 2012, 02:31:58 PM

LPRD originally stood for Leopard, but now means "Legion of Professional Reconnaissance and Deployment" which means they have a great land and invasion forces, but poor space-faring vehicles, makes up for this with powerful mining lasers fitted to the front of every ship. They are made up of numerous felines across the galaxy, including Leopards, Lynxes, Cheetahs, etc. etc. Leopards lead the government and the lynxes and others manage the war and weaponry. The Leopards usually join up to the war more than any other feline race.

WLF originally stood for Wolf, but now means "War League of the Future"  which means that they have great space-faring vehicles with more advanced tech, but ground forces are poor quality, makes up for this with numbers of soldiers. Usually made of Foxes, Wolves, and 3 other canine races. Foxes leading the political system, Wolves taking the War effort, the others manufacturing or distributing weapons. The Foxes are almost always first to join up in the war, and in competition with the Wolves for weapons.

Sorry for the big explanation, I needed to put that down so people won't be confused. Also answers your question Nikolai.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on March 28, 2012, 02:38:09 PM

Yay! I want to join the Legion of Professional Reconnaissance and Deployment.

This really does sound like it could become a really great story(Already sounds awesome), I love all the details.

I am way too excitable.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 28, 2012, 02:41:03 PM

You can just call them the LPRD. :P

I just need to improve my wording a bit then I can actually make a better intro. But for now, Chapter 2 is on my mind.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on March 28, 2012, 02:43:58 PM

Oh yeah. Can I join the LPRD? Oh can I *Jumps up and down*

I am super psyched.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 28, 2012, 02:45:22 PM

Sure why not.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on March 28, 2012, 02:47:59 PM

Yay.

Oh, I almost forgot, I like the part when they crash into the WLF's ship. That was cool.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 28, 2012, 08:50:09 PM

Thank you!

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: BusterBuizel on March 29, 2012, 02:34:54 AM

I like it. You should read up on my Pokemon/Star Fox crossover and analyze the text so you could get better with your writings. Keep working on these, it's not bad at all and I actually started out worse. I'll link you my crossover on dA.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on March 29, 2012, 04:06:13 PM

Ah! I did, a lot of reading but I enjoyed it. Thanks Buiz.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on April 05, 2012, 02:46:29 PM

http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/art/The-LPRD-Chapter-2-294241325 (http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/art/The-LPRD-Chapter-2-294241325)

Finished Chapter 2. Hope you guys like.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on April 05, 2012, 09:09:36 PM

I really liked it, also the character development is really good.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Kaitlynn on April 11, 2012, 12:28:08 AM

http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/#/d4vss3u (http://blacklight-trooper.deviantart.com/#/d4vss3u)

Chapter 3 done.

Title: Re: Space Furries (Not actual title.)
Post by: Nikolai the Lynx on April 11, 2012, 01:25:00 PM

I really do like your story.