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Haiku
Post by:
JFPulse
on
June 07, 2007, 07:06:31 AM
Poetic haiku
Employ a syllabic count
Of five, seven, five.
Haiku are at peace
In this illustrious thread.
Prose is not allowed.
Scribe your poetry
On these black and barren walls,
But take care your words.
In sincerity,
Signed your dear humble feline,
Pulse of the grasslands.
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Tator_dog
on
June 08, 2007, 10:14:56 PM
I like your poems :snicker: ( aplaudes )
I have one :sparkle:
Snow falls covertly
Upon the cold arid ground
Awaiting springtime.
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
JFPulse
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June 09, 2007, 09:23:01 PM
Thank you, friend Tator.
Your compliments are welcome.
(Next time write in verse.)
:)
An absent loved one,
Such heart-wrenching loneliness,
Yet the tears won't come.
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Tator_dog
on
June 10, 2007, 02:42:40 AM
Your welcome JF
I will try harder for you
I will write in verse
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
JFPulse
on
June 10, 2007, 06:07:27 AM
Father in Heaven,
Why hast thou forsaken me?
I pray for thy gaze.
Tail between my legs,
I stand frozen awaiting
My master's swift hand.
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Tator_dog
on
June 15, 2007, 05:12:11 PM
Where are my Tators
I can not find them in here
do you have them J
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Karma
on
June 15, 2007, 08:34:34 PM
the end of time comes,
swiftly as if on eagles wings,
silently it sings.
beyond the mountains,
the sunrise dawns to end me,
silently i cry.
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Milo The Tiger
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June 20, 2007, 03:53:47 PM
thats some nice poem skills right there man :)
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Re: Haiku
Post by:
Karma
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June 20, 2007, 04:18:33 PM
(thanks)
the owl takes flight,
spreading its vast wings softly,
the mouse is running