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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Vinny Raccoon on September 02, 2011, 03:24:07 AM

Title: A day at the park
Post by: Vinny Raccoon on September 02, 2011, 03:24:07 AM

Here I live within a mountain town.
Laying on the grass to let hours pass.
In the park I lay with nothing to do.
Filled with grief with language to bare.

Angry I was yelled at top of my lungs.
Aggravated I was at least no ones around.
After I started to simmer down.
I decided it was time to meditate


First I centered my thought on a leaf.
Then I focused my thought on some beef.
Then I strayed to super Mario three.
Then I stopped I had to pee!

So then I went home not a Nome to be found.
"Home sweet home!" Tell tomorrow morn.
For those who read this poem I written.
I hope you enjoyed it more then kitten's


Vinny Raccoon©

Title: Re: A day at the park
Post by: .: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :. on September 04, 2011, 05:16:05 AM

Pretty nice, kinda looks like you struggled a bit on the last two verses and veered a bit off course hah :3