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Title: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 06, 2011, 01:26:39 AM
After the burning embers of Everflame 2 have died, now comes the phoenix. A rebirth of the series.
Here is Everflame: The Shard

I will put my first post onto the main thread soon. But first, some history.

Everflame: The Shard is set tens of thousands of years after the events of the Everflame 2. In that time, walking killer plants (known as Triffids) covered the universe in death and destruction. Tina (a kind of mysterious criminal) had prepared for this. Under the instruction of some old friends who had gained a window into extra-dimensional soothsaying, she organised the construction of an enormous bunker. This became their home which after her death was called "The City of Tina" or Tina City. On that same planet was an extra dimensional being that helped them out. This being was called Seeker.It had brought them soldiers stragglers who had found themselves stranded, and helped and sheltered where she could. Over time, she realized there was no going back to her dimension and so decided to live as she once had in a past life. She disappeared, hiding away as an eternal recluse keeping very few by her side. Eventually, in her ethereal nature as one not of this plane of existence, she faded into the land. Some see her as a ghost, others a goddess. Over the millennia, her reputation within history has created a religion for her. Most of the inhabitants of Tina City are believers.
In that same period of time the Triffid attacks had caused significant damage and infestation. Many key areas of Tina City had to be sealed off, along with the technology it housed. Civilization had to start again. Eventually the Triffids burned themselves out. They had consumed too much and ran out of food. They had all died out, leaving the surface free for humans to colonize. Little groups spread across the forests and plains. One group moved further than any other. The leader unerringly drawn to something. Eventually he found it, a black shard embedded in the dirt. It was warm, like an eternal black flame. They built their homes there and devoted themselves to the study of this shard.

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In the present day, technology is still at the level of knives, spears, axes and bows and arrows. There is no metal smelting or anything like that. There is currently a celebration; The annual event of gratitude to the Seeker, where all the towns are invited to a party celebrating the Seeker and her protection.

The way the religion and society in general works is this. The leaders, both religious and societal, have all been women. It is a matriarchal society where women are heralded for their greater intelligence, while men are servants, soldiers and workmen used for their strength more than anything. The outlying towns can differ in this respect and the town of the shard has a male leader.
In religion, there is a head priestess who has final say on what is right and what is not. Beneath her there are lesser priestesses who decide who the next head priestess will be and also attend to their people in their respective areas and towns. Beneath them are their helpers, known as the students of the Seeker.
There is also another group. It is within this religious framework but more secluded to the side. These are the Chosen. These are people infected with remnants of the dimension of light. They have powers over life and death.They are often used as healers during a great emergency. They have long lives and bestow this advantage on to high priestesses and city leaders. Their magic comes from bending the ether and using the Seekers own power that is embedded in the fabric of existence. However, due to their connection to a dimension that no longer exists, they feel a tugging void within them. It is a feeling of half death.

So there's a big gathering and religious celebration going on; however at the same time as this, some sort of meteor has fallen from the sky many miles away, discovered by an eastern pygmy possum girl in a red tunic, with flowers in her pocket.


As always with my stuff, my own characters can be important or utterly irrelevant. I don’t know how this will turn out. All I know is that you will be the hero... one of you... maybe... probably.

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Here are the rules:

-No over-powered characters or Deus Ex Machina
-Wait for others
-Feel free to throw in a story element or event, but only if you think it will be fun and engaging. If you’re not sure, run it by me first.
-insta-kills are allowed but are extremely rare, need to be cleared by me first and must never cut someone out of the rp. The one dying needs to consent as well. (For the sake of an engaging tale, dont be afraid to lose a character or two)
-Follow the nature of the society you're in
-Dont be afraid to lose a battle or get arrested or anything like that. A good story needs highs and lows and who knows where those lows will take you.

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This is how you will set these characters out:

Name:
Age:
Species:

Location: (Refers to location at the start of your entrance into the RP)
Occupation: (Should make sense according to the location and society, but doesn’t have to.)

Weaponry: (Don't go crazy, make it realistic.)

Biography: (Should make sense according to location, but doesn’t have to.)

Appearance: (Should make sense according location but doesn’t have to.)

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Here are my main characters at this point.

Name: Tizzarath Nather
Age: 80
Species: Mouse type hybrid

Location: Tina City Surface attending the celebration.
Occupation: Queen of the World.

Weaponry: Hidden bodyguards everywhere.

Biography: Born and bred for leadership by one of the oldest families in Tina City, descendant of Tara (Tiz) Nather, second Queen of Tina City. She rules with a strong focus on consolidation. Rapid expansion had commanded much of her predecessors life, so she has focused on making sure that the towns and people that exist live upon a strong solid foundation before moving onward. On personal terms, she has little time for people and is often seen as curt and abrupt. She knows her own mind.

Appearance: Small and white with red streaks running down her back and a pink scaled tail behind her. She looks remarkably young yet is always seen in modest yet formal wear to reflect her serious tone in leadership.

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Name: KaraBelle Kara
Age: 240
Species: Harpy Eagle

Location: Tina City Surface attending the celebration
Occupation: High Priestess

Weaponry: Spear of Feshanoq. It is a large staff adorned in bright feathers and fur from base to tip. The head is embedded with obsidian blades taken from the mouth of the demonic mountains.

Biography: She is from one of the newer families who received much protection from Seeker during darker times in their history. Since then they have dedicated their lives to serve and honour Seeker. She is the highest and most successful member of that family having powerful insight into both mediation and leadership. People seem to naturally look to her for answers.

Appearance: Large with black wings with white undersides. Her head is blazing with black feathers splayed like a crown at the back of her head. Her clothes are completely comprised of plants, trees, and the feathers and bones of some of the most exotic creatures they could find. She has a powerful beauty, vicious and deadly.

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Name: Little-Hands Powerful-Touch
Age: 16
Species: Eastern Pygmy Possum

Location: Middle of a field many many miles away from the city or towns. The closest town is the Town of the Shard.
Occupation: None

Weaponry: a regular spear and Saviour, her feral lizard protector.

Biography: She was abandoned when she was young, left in a cave to die. A small feral lizard wreathed in leaves found her and through it so did Seeker. Seeker kept her warm with ocean breeze and stray flames from nearby fires. Seeker fed her with old and lame animals guided into the cave. Seeker talked to her and gave her that name. She learned Seeker’s language and only picked up English much later and can only speak it in broken bursts. The possum girl and the feral lizard grew up together and both grew, though the lizard grew far more and has become the girl’s protector and closest friend. His name was Saviour.

Appearance:  Small and wiry frame, she wears a short red tunic and has brown diamond patches over her eyes against the grey and white.
Saviour is enormous with a great tail that’s almost as long as he is. His pale green/grey body and wreathed in large leaves that sprout from his neck like a headdress. They are naturally part of his biology.


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Name: General Andreya Caisen
Age: 34
Species: Red Fox

Location: Middle of a field many many miles away from the city or towns. The closest town is the Town of the Shard.
Occupation: General of the Galactic Authority

Weaponry: One energy pistol with a fifty round clip with recharging ammunition.

Biography: A cheery women, especially when a grim face or future is present. She was tasked with aiding a scientist called Leo in preventing dangerous extra-dimensionals from getting hold of a rather special stone known as the Everflame. Things went wrong and Leo rocketed their ship into an unstable hyperspace jump. They tore through timespace and crashed into the ground of the planet Mngeya. They jumped tens of thousands of years into the future and are now very much unconscious

Appearance: Currently dressed in a baggy space suit that has been taped to her form to compensate. Underneath that is a vixen in a uniform; prim, proper, militaristic and blue.

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Name: Aman S. Mongoste
Age: 40
Species: Red Fox (though a surprisingly large one)

Location: Tina City surface attending the celebration
Occupation: Leader of the Town of the Shard

Weaponry: a pair of bodyguards, armed with many axes.

Biography: A descendant of one of the oldest families, his predecessor found the shard and set up the town. At first it was a scientific discovery but as the old leader died, the young Aman took control and saw it as so much more. He had spent much of his young life around the shard, and he could feel it affect him. He knew there was a great power within this. He claimed there was an ancient power, a greater power than the Seeker who would balance the world. He had ineherited a short temper and a vengeful mind, and the gender imbalance forced against his leadership has always sat in his mind ready to be manipulated by the shard.

Appearance: Dressed in shrouds of white, the large red fox towers over many, bearing a black diamond upon the chest of his clothes, as a symbol of the shard.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 06, 2011, 02:49:09 AM
Name: Talin Kor'vial
Age: 90
Species: Panther type hybrid

Location: Tina City, in an isolated prison that only KaraBelle, Tizzarath and the other Chosen have access or knowledge of.
Occupation: Chosen

Weaponry: None, but used to carry a stone broadsword he affectionately named Fang for the serrated edges.

Biography: Talin was once a very sociable man, despite his ties to the void, often getting attention from the women that wanted more than just a chat. On the other side of that man, was a person tormented with emotions and memories that are not his own. When he reached the age of 60, he had his first psychotic episode, imagining he was a dragon that could shoot fire with his left hand. Nobody would try to stop him, as he was a Chosen, and a physically intimidating one at that. Luckily, these episodes were few and far between until he reached 85, when he went nuts at least once a month.

For three years now he has been held in an underground prison, held in check by pillars of stone and robes reinforced with an adhesive to prevent tearing. He gets visits from both KaraBelle and Tizzarath, the latter tending to stay around longer than the former. The other Chosen refuse to associate with him though, afraid his unique madness will no longer be unique the moment they get near the cell.

Appearance: Tall and physically powerful, his fur is indigo with white vine-like tattoos that spread across his body like an actual plant. His only apparel is cloth bandages wrapped around his forearms and palms, and a raggedy pair of animal hide leggings.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 06, 2011, 01:59:16 PM
Wow... that was quick!   :P

Everflame 3  ^_^     I will post character sheets soon. Can't wait Asia  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on August 07, 2011, 01:43:14 AM
Name: Entaru W. Korin
Age: 27
Species: Artic Fox

Location: Attending the celebration with Aman Mongoste.
Occupation: Priest of the Shard

Weaponry: 7 ft staff with a replica of the shard at its top and a curved dagger.

Biography: His family had lived in the Town of the Shard almost as long as it had existed.  His ancestors were some of the first converts to join the followers of the Shard.  Having been born to such status, Entaru was given the title 'Priest of the Shard' at a very young age.  Through merit and much determination he has made his way to the top of the Town's hierarchy second only to his lord, Aman.

Appearance: The alabastor robes on his thin and gangly frame, it is hard to tell where he begins and the clothes end.  He too has a black diamond embroidered to his chest, indicating his faith in the Shard.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 07, 2011, 03:07:20 AM
sooounds very interesting.


Name: Aria Loray
Age: 18
Species: snow leopard

Location: Tina City (there for celebration)
Occupation: archeologist's assistant

Weaponry: two stone daggers. one is particularly special, an heirloom gift, not quiet sure what stone (not obsidian)

Biography: Aria was born into a family of Shard, she was born sickly and nearly died. but the sickness ruined her vocal chords to the point where she is now a mute. she can hear very well do to her no speech. she communicates well with facial expressions, mouthing words and uses a form of basic signs with her hands to communicate. she moved to Tina City, working odd jobs to get by before she landed on working as an archeologist assistant. she longs to back at Shard, closer to the fields and forests she had explored as a little girl. she trained herself to have good flexibility and can climb things very well. she can read very well but her writing skills are basic. as her beliefs in the Seeker, she hardly pays attention, she has the mode of survive and thrive on her mind, though she never insults the religion.

Appearance: off shoulder gypsy top with laced vest, belted, belted soft leather, form fitting pants with leather, knee high sturdy boots. Aria is lovely but not drop dead stunning. extremely short black hair (Pixie cut to be exact), brilliant green eyes. an air of mystery about her, 5'8 and slender.




Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 07, 2011, 05:53:53 AM
Name: Leo Cyrule
Age: 27
Species: Serval

Location:  Middle of a field many many miles away from the city or towns. The closest town is the Town of the Shard. Found with General Andreya Caisen

Weaponry: Currently poorly conditioned Plasma pistol (20 round clip/capable of recharge) and a damaged flashlight

Biology: A very laid back and sometimes sarcastic cat, who mostly manages to squeeze by death it's self time and time again. He is the Scientist responsible for General Caisen and himself to be propelled through time and space it's self to the current date. After crash landing into Mygen at an unknown force, he was knocked unconscious along with the general.


Appearance: Currently dressed in a space suit, however unlike Caisen's his was slightly more better fitting, and held metal plates to protect vital areas. Underneath the suit is a Tall gray and ebony Serval. He has messy white hair and emerald eyes. His tail only falls to his knees of his animalistic legs. He wears a dark green, thin, sleeveless hooded vest. A white long sleeve male blouse, and a pair of black jeans.
His clothing holds the occasional blood droplets of his past struggles.

I edited his appearance slightly, I like this better.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 07, 2011, 06:10:01 PM
Chronin: I was very iffy about putting the chosen in at all, since by definition they are overpowered. There are restrictions to their power. They cannot outright kill a healthy person, nor can they raise a dead person.

As for your character specifically: manic episodes could, I suppose, be a suitable handicap; however it can quite easily end up just being an excuse to tear up the place and unleash an almost insane inner strength that his conscious self is unaware of. He can most certainly be mentally unstable, however considering he's 300 and has spent 60 years tied up in a cage I think old and physically diminished. I'll allow it if he's old and crinkly enough.

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Entaru: Perfec'

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Emrelda: Well I was planning on setting up this whole archeological angle, so i was thinking, maybe you could be an archeologist's assistant. You'd be hauling, cataloging and filing; doing what you're told and not answering back :P Flexibility would be useful to get into hard to reach caverns and cracks.

I'll have to write up an archeologist character quicker than I'd planned, but I think it fits well, especially since you'd be spending most of your time in the older areas of the subterranean city, very much away from forests and fields. Tell me if you agree to this so I can write up this archeologist character... oh I'll do it anyway, he'll be an interesting character.

And yes, they do have reading and writing (a remnant of their history), but it's mostly done on sheets of wood tied with wood strings. The writing is done with natural paints. A lot of the earlier stuff was done in mineral based paints, and new writing is made with plants. Most people don't have much of a written vocabulary, but some who require the written word (highly placed peoples) can be rather erudite.

Also... how does a young, not particularly well off girl like that get 3 obsidian daggers? That's not the easiest thing to get hold of. Perhaps tone it down to some lesser kind of sharpened stone, or perhaps only one dagger acquired in some special way, like a gift.


Here's the archeologist character:
Name: Dim Lane
Age: 35
Species: Raven

Location: Tina City Surface (there for celebration, hobnobbing with other archeologists.)
Occupation: Archeologist

Weaponry: stone dagger and chisel

Biography: Dim has always heard the religious stories and the tales of the ancient families and was rapt by its mystery. He wanted to know the answers of how they became what they are today. He's heard the theories and the folk tales but he wants more. He wants to feel it with his hands and in some small way bring those stories to life; to be a part of them. He loves stories and jokes and tales and is often seen to be a light hearted dreamer though he is deadly serious about his work. He has most recently been very intrigued by tales of old gods, beasts and demons though there are only the slightest of hints around. Nothing to say that these old beings are even remotely real. Some people even suspect Seeker as being a falsehood. He keeps the idea at the back of his mind, but it doesn't plague his thoughts.

Appearance: A bright red cloak kept around him, a brown robe down his front and cloth bindings around the legs. A necklace with a green gem carved into a spaceship.



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TangleTail: Brill'

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Right is everyone okay with the changes suggested?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 07, 2011, 06:57:28 PM
Name:   Imshi Teresa Hlásova
Age:  20
Species:  A very unusual Fox/Eagle Hybrid

Location:  In her family’s reed-boat travelling to the celebrations in Tina city. The entire Teresa clan are travelling together on their fishing boats down the river to the city.

Occupation:  All of the Teresa clan are fisherwomen, with the men acting as servants and rowers of the long reed-barges that the clan uses on ‘Seeker Lake’, hunting the large carp-like fish that swim in its shimmering depths.


Weaponry/Clothing:  A long barbed fishing spear (as carried by all of the Teresa clan women) that is tied to the wrist by a long piece of thin rope.
She wears the traditional dress of the clan, consisting of an intricately woven and very wide belt-like piece that is worn just below her midriff. She also wears a similarly wide piece that is worn around the neck and chest like a collar. Both have a thick line of wooden beads woven into them.


Biography: The Teresa clan have the long-standing tradition of always naming their girls by the name of Teresa and using their first ‘conjoined’ name to differentiate between them. Such an ancient tradition holds the clan in high respect with other nearby villages.

Imshi was always a lonely child, spending most of her days with a boy two years her younger by the name of Yenchi. This solitude was primarily caused by her unusual parentage, much to the delight of the old village healer who proclaimed her at birth to have been blessed by seeker himself. Whether this is true, or this is simply what happens with every avian hybrid, Imshi-Teresa has the appearances of her vulpine mother and the wings of her eagle father.

On this day before the celebration of seeker, she announced her sworn-servant to be Yenchi Lantto – her closest and only childhood friend, much to the outrage of her family and friends.


Appearance: Imshi takes most after her mother, being a full-figured vulpine, curvy with generous hips and thighs. She wears the extra weight timidly, not having the same self-confidence of her mother, despite women like her being perceived as the more beautiful in the surrounding villages. Her short fur is a light russet-colour, with her muzzle and chest being white as well as the tip to her tail which is short and sleek.

She has bright amber eyes and chestnut hair, drawn back into a long plaited ponytail with a few loose strands of braided hair at her fringe.

Her most distinctive feature however is the wings that sprout from her shoulder blades, a seamless transition from silky fur to dark feathers. The wings reach down to just below her waist when drawn back and fan out to double her arm span when fully outstretched. The feathers are the same colour as her hair, dark chestnut.



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Name:   Yenchi  Lantto
Age:  18
Species:  Wildcat

Location:  On the same reed-boat as Imshi.

Occupation:  Now the sworn-servant to Imshi-Teresa


Weaponry/Clothing:  Two curved knives carved from animal horn, one hilt has a tooth set into it curving in the opposite direction to the blade of the knife while the other is inset with a sharpened flint.  

His usual clan attire is that of rough hunting leathers, but now as a sworn-servant he must wear the clothing of the Teresa fishing-clan.


Biography:  Yenchi Lantto has been close friends with Imshi as long as he can remember. Despite the unusualness of this both families allowed the friendship to stay, seeing that both children were equally detached from the other children of their age and thought it would do them good, especially Imshi.

Neither family however expected Yenchi to accept the position of sworn-servant to a woman of another clan, causing something of an outrage in both families that has been the talk around many a village fire.


Appearance: A young wildcat with a rather small frame for his age, even for his species. He is lean and rather thin with fur of a soft ashen-grey and dappled white, with white fur spreading down his muzzle to his stomach as well as white paws and feet.

Yanchi’s eyes are light blue and his hair a slightly darker grey than his fur, cut back except for two short braids of hair that hang down to just above his shoulders. All in all he is an unusually feminine and quiet looking male in a society where most are strong and large. In some way this is rather why Imshi asked of him as a sworn-servant, despite the outrage it has caused.



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Name: Vin
Species: Feral 'Harker Bird' (looks similar to an Earth Kingfisher)
Appearance:

Harker Birds are small, around the size of a clenched fist and electric blue. They have four sets of wings, the second smaller set just behind a pair of turquoise claws. Has small turquoise eyes that look far more intelligent than a normal bird. The Harker birds are amazing fishers, able to pluck fish twice their size out of rivers and are well known for their intelligence and inquisitiveness.

Bio: Vin has been Imshi's only childhood friend other than Yenchi, having been caught and given to the girl by an aunt at a young age. The bird, whose lifespan is almost as long, if not longer than Imshi's herself, follows the vixen wherever she goes.





Okay Asia. Just say if anything there needs changing    :3   (Oh, and sorry for the rather large wall of text. I just like to be very discriptive with character sheets  :3  )
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 07, 2011, 07:13:23 PM
alright, Archaeologist assitant!!! good thing i love Archaeology.


Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 07, 2011, 09:15:33 PM
I assume brill' means brilliant. So.. thank you?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 07, 2011, 11:05:08 PM
Kitt that sounds great

Emrelda, Excellent

and TangleTail, you're welcome.

I'll be writing the first post now.

If latecomers want to join, they're more than welcome to.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 07, 2011, 11:12:47 PM
How long do chosen 'normally' live for?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 07, 2011, 11:17:44 PM
Depends on their connection with the energies of existence, but most dont live past 200. The high priestess has lasted this long because she has the lesser priestesses supporting her.
Your character is remarkably old.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 07, 2011, 11:18:48 PM
Damn, I'll have to cut back those years then... and likely change the biography :P

Edit: I just finished editing the age.

Seriously, I thought Chosen aged like 1 year every ten or fifteen...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 07, 2011, 11:50:09 PM
eesh, well I'm still unsure about how powerful he is, but then it is just physical strength and chosen magic. It should be okay. I'll allow it, but try not to turn into a superhero :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 07, 2011, 11:52:45 PM
Chronin was as close as I could get...

I miss him again  :'(


Post Merge: August 07, 2011, 11:57:20 PM
In all honesty, I only considered "What if Talin couldn't be a male due to the matriarchal society?"
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 08, 2011, 12:29:45 AM
Sorry about the restrictions, but considering how story focused this is, and how low tech it is, I can't get peril if you're super strong. it's the superman problem.

But hopefully you can enjoy this just as much as the last.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 12:48:30 AM
wait...is there a posting order??? time limit?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 08, 2011, 01:02:48 AM
Not particularly. If you're within the same scene as somebody else then you should wait for others to post. There will be no formal order because that would need to be constantly changed. Just use common sense really.

There can be a wait between posts. After a 5 or so days i might ask where the missing poster is. If they dont reply after a week or so then we'll just move on. If they do come back then they'll have their character sort of do their own thing based on where they last left off so that they're not suddenly popping in on someone else's scene.

in my things people tend to have plot threads that split away and interweave with others so there often wont be big scenes with lots of players involved. And if there are, I'll make sure everyone gets time to talk.

i micro-manage quite a bit so things normally work out pretty well in an organic way
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 01:08:24 AM
oh alright, so shall we wait for you to post, to get the setting?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 01:14:21 AM
I hope this is not asking for too much. but I think it would give my character more feeling if at first, others pity and treat Aria differently because she is mute, some think she is like...idk stupid?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 08, 2011, 01:20:43 AM
I'm actually getting the setting and everything down right now.

And yes that idea sounds very good, though her master is aware of her abilities since he's worked with her.


Post Merge: August 08, 2011, 01:23:45 AM
And it's done, the RP is OPEN!
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 08, 2011, 02:16:11 AM
I don't know if this can be considered a running gag since Everflame 2 was a millenia ago... but I wanted to explain why Chronin had little to no experience with dating even though the military is co-ed :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 02:21:46 AM
I don't know if this can be considered a running gag since Everflame 2 was a millenia ago... but I wanted to explain why Chronin had little to no experience with dating even though the military is co-ed :P

oookaaaaay.....  o.O   
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 08, 2011, 02:27:17 AM
I forget. Was Leo and the general dragged off? And if so where?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 02:28:18 AM
I dont think anyone would want to date Aria...being mute and all
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 08, 2011, 02:30:19 AM
oookaaaaay.....  o.O  

I felt like it had to be addressed, and now you're portraying me as crazy?  T_T


Aria should learn that actions speak louder than words :3
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 02:32:22 AM
oookaaaaay.....  o.O   

I felt like it had to be addressed, and now you're portraying me as crazy?  T_T


Aria should learn that actions speak louder than words :3

hey hey... i know.

but Chrono, you already knew that you were???
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 08, 2011, 02:40:16 AM
I'm eccentric, crazy is using rat blood to scrawl grotesque images because some voice in your head said that the pain will go away when the message is finished.



Asia, can a Chosen cause structural damage with their power?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 08, 2011, 02:57:14 AM
I would date Aria <___< I didn't take sign language for nothing.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 02:58:57 AM
ah.. in real life ??? or on the RP?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 08, 2011, 03:04:15 AM
That would be both. But... <_< I tend to lean more so over to male.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 08, 2011, 03:37:16 AM
thats fine really lol
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 08, 2011, 04:44:34 PM
I forget. Was Leo and the general dragged off? And if so where?
They are currently held in the lizard's mouth. The lizard is heading through the field toward the coastal caves

I dont think anyone would want to date Aria...being mute and all
There's a few characters I could think of that might, but who knows.

Asia, can a Chosen cause structural damage with their power?
Nope, it's purely spiritual
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: serpington on August 08, 2011, 09:40:48 PM
(hope I'm not to late.....again...)
Name: max s shadow
Age: 17
Species: lace monitor

Location: deep in the forests
Occupation: hunter/warrior

Weaponry: whatever he can find that he can use to defend himself or kill his target, normally Carry's a large bow, arrows, a spear and a knife

Biography: growing up in an isolated area max never really had much to do other than hunt and explore with his siblings errica and Joseph. that was before the other races started to invade the forests. his family now lives within a hunting tribe locked in a small war against the other races trying to over take the jungle for there own needs

Appearance: black scales with dark yellow underbelly and spots on back, usually any clothes he can find for ventures into the enemy city's (basically big armored camps at the moment.) but his kind usually wears nothing but a loin cloth despite the lack of external organs to hide.


Name: errica shadow
Age: 16
Species: lace monitor

Location: deep in the forests
Occupation: hunter/warrior

Weaponry: anything she can get hold of that she can find a way to kill with normally Carry's a large bow and what looks like an improvised sword

Biography: errica grew up with her brothers as a dominant female, she was to take over their clan until the outsiders came and basically waged war on the reptilian tribes. She now leads her two brothers as a hunting party that protect the borders of their new clans lands.

Appearance: dark purple scales with creamy yellow underbelly and a long loin cloth

Name: Joseph shadow
Age: 14
Species: lace monitor

Location: deep in the forests
Occupation: hunter/warrior

Weaponry: mainly an improvised bow but like his older siblings he normally resorts to whatever he can find.

Biography: Joseph's berth was seen as a bad omen to the tribe, to him this was confermed on his thirteenth birthday when the outsiders came and started killing of any natives they found, he now lives an almost silent life, only talking to his siblings and to people he feels a connection to.

Appearance: dark gray scales with mildly dark yellow underbelly and spots on back and a ankle long loin cloth.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 09, 2011, 01:41:09 AM
Unless something 'epic' occours or someone visits Talin, I would expect to be left behind at least a post or two  :/
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 09, 2011, 02:45:56 AM
Unless something 'epic' occours or someone visits Talin, I would expect to be left behind at least a post or two  :/

If Asia allows it, I can meet you, because its the same thing with me, or if you want to.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 09, 2011, 04:08:53 AM
Well, I don't Talin is that easy to find if only the most important entities in Tina City are even remotely aware of its location.

Then again, archaeology tends to unearth things that are normally impossible to find using any other method...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 09, 2011, 04:12:48 AM
its up to you, I just want to get more action.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 09, 2011, 04:16:42 AM
its up to you, I just want to get more action.
I. am. perfectly. fine. with. you. finding. me.

Oooookaaaay?  :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 09, 2011, 04:17:04 AM
OOOKAY! lol
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 09, 2011, 01:57:00 PM
Serpington:
Okay, you're not too late at all, we only just started. However, I would like to ask a few questions about your tribe and your characters.
What is the origin of your tribe since almost everyone got killed by a deadly plants of apocalyptic proportion ten thousand years ago. All the towns and the main city originate from a bunker designed to survive it.  I'm not saying this tribe couldn't have survived, just that i want to know how.

Secondly, who's invading you? It's a pretty big part of the Queen of the main people that she is focused on not expanding. They're deliberately not invading anyone, at least not intentionally. Maybe They've invaded somewhere without realising that the land had been claimed by someone else, though even then that wouldn't have happened just a year ago. There's no been any significant expansion for twenty years or so.


Chrono and Emrelda:
It's your own fault for putting yourselves in places nobody else would go :P
I was actually struggling to figure out a way to get you guys doing stuff, so this works quite well, thanks for sorting it out for me. :D
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 09, 2011, 07:34:47 PM
Then we make a bigger fuss when we both walk out of the prison >:3
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 09, 2011, 07:48:00 PM
Still open right D:

Name: Siyan Bonconavitch
Age: 17
Species: Vampire Bat

Location: Attending the celebration for the first time.
Occupation: Farmer

Weaponry: Scythe (farmer style B) )

Biography: Straight from the womb Siyan was reared with the know how to work on the farm. Not one for most social things Siyan struggled with anything that dealt with large groups. He much preferred to be alone with the crop or cattle. Siyan's father died after pushing him self to hard on the farm- his mother followed soon after. Siyan spent two years alone, isolated. Only talking to people on trips to sell hi crop/ cattle. On one of those dreaded trips he found a small female fox. Her eyes an emerald green and her body a snow white. The child was maybe two or three at the most, it baffled Siyan that someone would leave the child unattended. The bat spent the next two days looking for the foxes parents but it was in vain. In the end Siyan deiced that he would look after the young fox.

Appearance: Blue overalls with a eggshell colored shirt underneath with no shoes with the occasional straw hat. Body apperenacnce see ref (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5973024)


Name: Meredith Stannard
Age: 8
Species: Arctic Fox

Location: Attending the celebration with Siyan.
Occupation: student

Weaponry: small knife Siyan forces her to carry

Biography: Meredith's whole life revolves around Siyan. She has no recollection of anything prior to- nor does she have any desire to recall. Though teased by the other children Meredith has a positive out look on life. When she isn't at school Meredith is found helping Siyan with the farm- whether it is taking care of the cattle or pulling weeds she loves to be around nature and Siyan. One day after hearing a couple of other school kids talk about the celebration the young foxed begged Siyan to take her. Though reluctant at first, Siyan eventually caved- he can never say no to her.

Appearance: A dark green dress with small black shoes, emerald colored eyes and snow white fur. She has a short pony tail the is made up of a slightly darker patch of fur.

I wanted to make her a "chosen one" but didn't know if that would be ok since she has no religious ties. 10 points if you an figure out where I get her name :P.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 09, 2011, 08:56:34 PM
for my character.

letters in Pink- she is thinking

letters in Iltaics= signing and mouthing her own words
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 09, 2011, 09:20:06 PM
Self-Sain: Yes it's still open and yes she can be a chosen. Welcome :D
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 09, 2011, 09:28:47 PM
Yes, I did only just realise that Aria can't shout back to Yenchi from down in the prison cos she is mute *doh! Silly Kitt*

Heh, let's see how it pans out anyway. Definitely an awkward situation knowing someone is trying to help you but you can't let them know your there >.<
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 09, 2011, 09:40:43 PM
Alright :D time to read like two pages of post o.O

One last question, do the chosen ones heal like lets say a white mage and do they have to be taught this?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 09, 2011, 09:50:22 PM
Sain, I believe Meredith is from Dragon Age II's Knight-Commander....

If its a book, then it will be even less likely that anyone will know  >.>



Also, I believe it the teaching of their power only goes as far as harnessing such power, much like Chronin's power during Everflame 2.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 09, 2011, 09:58:26 PM
Yes she is named after the Knight-Commander :P, and she must be learn to harness the power first, alright thanks.

Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 09, 2011, 10:10:19 PM
Aria may be mute but...she is one hell of a spit fire when she needs to be.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 10, 2011, 02:46:11 PM
Yes she is named after the Knight-Commander :P, and she must be learn to harness the power first, alright thanks.

It's a lot like moulding clay, but instead she's moulding Life.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 10, 2011, 08:42:02 PM
How much time is expected to pass between the 'plot posts' that you're making, Asia?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 10, 2011, 09:43:15 PM
Depends on the post. Though that said, time is really bendy. As long as people turn in the right place at the right time without having to wait for other people then time frames are up to you
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 10, 2011, 09:47:02 PM
I just feel like Emrelda and myself are moving too fast...

The guard just left the prison, and we're already jumping across rooftops.

It feels like I just got reply-based hangover...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 10, 2011, 09:50:25 PM
Yeah you two were racing along at quite a pace. If you think you should slow down then do so. Right now it's not affecting any of the other players, but such a pace might cause issues later on.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 11, 2011, 12:05:54 AM
I made sure the post is still quite a ways away, and in such an area that they will be spotted.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: serpington on August 11, 2011, 01:24:39 PM
sorry for the wait but...... first; back when the plants attacked a few of the tribe hid away in the bunker and even fewer survived staying behind to fight for their home. once the plants died out the two groups met up by chance, their numbers dwindling below twenty they started to rebuild and repopulate their tribe, as did other tribes scattered right across the planet.

secondly; the tribe refers to anyone not in the 'family' as outsiders, so these invaders are general travelers, other tribes, soldiers and anyone else who enters their land.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 11, 2011, 03:34:10 PM
sorry for the wait but...... first; back when the plants attacked a few of the tribe hid away in the bunker and even fewer survived staying behind to fight for their home. once the plants died out the two groups met up by chance, their numbers dwindling below twenty they started to rebuild and repopulate their tribe, as did other tribes scattered right across the planet.

secondly; the tribe refers to anyone not in the 'family' as outsiders, so these invaders are general travelers, other tribes, soldiers and anyone else who enters their land.
Hmm, sure I can accept that. Go forth and flourish.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 12, 2011, 06:43:53 PM
I believe Talin was a panther, but I guess a dragon would be slightly more believable.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 12, 2011, 09:48:08 PM
oops sorry, I'll change it. I automatically assumed it would be a dragon.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 13, 2011, 10:03:25 PM
Chrono, Emrelda, be aware of reality. As much as you'd like to be super awesome and escape every situation, you have to think about what's actually going on.
Emrelda, Aria is standing on a rooftop in broad daylight completely surrounded, with some guards even on the roof itself. Where could she possibly hide when everyone can see her. I mean to even get off the rooftop, she would literally have to climb over people.
Chronin, I wont stop you on anything just yet but you're definitely pushing it.

I'm not saying you can't do action hero-y stuff. I've allowed more than I would prefer since after all this RP is about the player's enjoyment, not mine. But there are limits.

Remember two of the rules:
-No over-powered characters or Deus Ex Machina
-Dont be afraid to lose a battle or get arrested or anything like that. A good story needs highs and lows and who knows where those lows will take you.

I'm not saying you should lose this battle, just dont bend everything to breaking point just so you don't lose.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 14, 2011, 02:20:36 AM
Im sorry, I'll change it
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 14, 2011, 02:26:20 AM
though, I may say so personally that you are being a little bit in flexible, sometimes the impossible is mainly an improbable. I'm just saying that's my personal view.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 14, 2011, 03:50:23 AM
Well the thing is, if you can explain how and where she hides without anyone seeing her then I would allow it. But as far as I can see, it's so improbable that it tumbles into the absurd. Your characters become nigh on invincible and there's no jeopardy anymore.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 14, 2011, 06:48:44 PM
I changed it to be more realistic, she wont go without a fight.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 15, 2011, 01:05:04 AM
Talin isn't that keen on harming himself like Chronin is. Especially since he doesn't have the armored clothing that Chronin wore.

Besides, it gives the jackal more 'power' if she floored him without even hitting him.

Do you mind if I give her a name?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 15, 2011, 02:31:23 AM
Is Aria going to die? lol
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 15, 2011, 11:51:21 AM
If Talin can't convince them to let Aria leave... maybe.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 16, 2011, 05:12:46 PM
Now THAT's jeopardy

And chrono, her name is Akela Nakka

Also Self-Sain, you're looking a bit lost in terms of story momentum. Dont worry, I've got a great idea to kickstart your story, which will come a bit later.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 16, 2011, 05:27:42 PM
Yeah, sorry about that Self-sain... I tend to be easily self-sustained (read: easily amused  X3  ) with my own story. Not much really going on. I tried to involve your characters at least a bit.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on August 16, 2011, 08:39:32 PM
I would love to join, since I came back in one peice, but uh, you know my reputation with RP's...I will most certainly put out as much effort as I can if you let me join.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 16, 2011, 09:11:57 PM
yes I am aware of your roleplaying habits, though you never effected anyone else' stories so I'll give you another chance.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 17, 2011, 01:13:36 AM
Been busy with school work/ waiting for something to happen. I don't have a large history background with the ever flame franchise so I don't want to assume,  but I'll post shortly.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 17, 2011, 08:56:00 PM
Chrono, I suggest you follow along the justice system. If things go to plan it'll turn out well for you.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 17, 2011, 11:06:29 PM
I'll play along... since escaping would be more than just borderline superman.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 19, 2011, 01:58:25 PM
Serpington, you also might have to wait a little while before I can propel you into cool story. Things will happen, people will meet your people and conflict will ensue.. it just might take a little while... unless i make something up to speed things along for you. I could but making sure it turns out well wont be easy... so you'll probably have to talk to yourself for a bit longer.


Same with you Kitt, I've no idea what to do with you. You've got a self contained story and you're going through that. I've got a few ideas but they only take effect in the late game.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on August 19, 2011, 06:37:44 PM
Here she is. I really would like to know more about the setting please...whether it's desert, plains, what, are there monsters or just feral beasts in the wilderness, and a recap of what's going on since the RP started. Sorry. : < And if anything is wrong with her I can fix her right up. She's very moldable to any storyline you'd like.
 
Name: Listy
Age: 8
Species: Deer

Location: Right outside Tina City
Occupation: Scavenger

Weaponry: Small, simple axe.

Biography: Listy was born blind and while not mute, she always has had a hard time talking...A child seemingly unable to take care of herself whatsoever. She does not really know what it's like to have a family. Her nomadic parents died from sharing the same mysterious illness with each other when she was three. For some time a merchant man (who was a family friend) watched over her. But one day Listy was left alone out in the clifflands for too long. She was attacked by a feral, lion-like beast....she ran, but ended up not paying attention and went right over the edge of a cliff. She broke many bones that day. All but one, her right fibula, have healed. Due to this, she now walks with a limp. Tradgedy stuck when Listy was unable to find her way back to her merchant caretaker, and she has been wandering since, barely surviving.

Appearance: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5410665/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5410665/)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 19, 2011, 09:17:19 PM
Yo, sorry for taking so long to post n' stuff... Was getting my AS results from my college. Turns out I got good enough grades to continue on to A level   ^_^



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Same with you Kitt, I've no idea what to do with you. You've got a self contained story and you're going through that. I've got a few ideas but they only take effect in the late game.
No problem, I'm cool with just going along my own story for now  :P

Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 19, 2011, 09:36:35 PM
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Yo, sorry for taking so long to post n' stuff... Was getting my AS results from my college. Turns out I got good enough grades to continue on to A level 
Congrats, now work hard next year kitty, or it all would be for naught  ;)


Katie W.: The immediate area is forest, with some plains further out toward the town of the shard. There are no "monsters," mostly just feral beasts and animal/plant hybrids.
As for current events, it's spring and the celebration is in full swing. A person screamed and wailed on stage about someone called Nero and was taken away. That's all that would be of any significance to most people.

And yes your character is just fine.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on August 19, 2011, 09:44:13 PM
Thank you very much. I'll hop to posting.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 20, 2011, 01:11:16 AM
sorry for taking forever, I had to transfer schools and,make a portfolio and all that junk @.@
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 20, 2011, 02:01:35 AM
That's totally okay. You sound busy.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 21, 2011, 09:12:49 PM
Will post whenever I can, but it's the summer holidays and I am off places with family and friends quite a bit. Hopefully tuesday morning seeing as im hiking tomorrow  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 21, 2011, 10:19:22 PM
Cool, thanks for telling me
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 22, 2011, 10:55:29 PM
I was a little shocked at how Little-Hands has such a strong connection to the Seeker  :o
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 22, 2011, 11:26:15 PM
In many ways she's like her adopted daughter.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 22, 2011, 11:35:15 PM
This is probably one heck of a stretch, but could that make Talin the prodigal son? He knows of the past, but is not in tune enough to know what he is doing to her.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 23, 2011, 12:06:33 AM
Not really, he doesn't have any real connection to Seeker. He may have a connection to the past but only to Chronin's life, nobody elses. You can play around with memory and feeling, but not really connect to Seeker that much.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 23, 2011, 12:08:22 AM
Huh... Talin connects to Chronin, Little hands to Seeker... and Entaru to Nero.

Now we just need Vuranin and Howl, since Beast is essentially the dimension of light.


By the way, exactly what relationship do Entaru and Aman have for Entaru to have such thoughts?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on August 23, 2011, 12:49:41 AM
*falls over laughing*  XD  It was the first thought that crossed my mind when Asia posted it.  I read it wrong and the way he got that close to Entaru just made it worse.  Just a funny little thing I needed to add in for a more dimensional character
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 23, 2011, 12:53:20 AM
For some reason, I could imagine a fanfic of those two... but that would mean that this story is being posted on more places than just TFF.

*glances at Asia* <.<
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 23, 2011, 02:01:33 AM
YAY!~ Leo has absolutely no significant connections to any past chars. Unless you want to make him Dr. Who with amnesia.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 23, 2011, 01:15:39 PM
*falls over laughing*  XD  It was the first thought that crossed my mind when Asia posted it.  I read it wrong and the way he got that close to Entaru just made it worse.  Just a funny little thing I needed to add in for a more dimensional character
That was honestly the best thing you could have done. It really added a ton of character to both of them and I am so glad you did it. I was thinking of adding something gay to the shard people anyway since it played on the "Lesbian Man Hater" stereotype of the real world.

For some reason, I could imagine a fanfic of those two... but that would mean that this story is being posted on more places than just TFF.

*glances at Asia* <.<
Give me time and I would write it myself.

YAY!~ Leo has absolutely no significant connections to any past chars. Unless you want to make him Dr. Who with amnesia.
Lets just call him John Smith. :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 23, 2011, 03:58:51 PM

For some reason, I could imagine a fanfic of those two... but that would mean that this story is being posted on more places than just TFF.

*glances at Asia* <.<
Give me time and I would write it myself.

No, don't do it! :o
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 23, 2011, 06:28:23 PM
aww but it could be so good! :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 23, 2011, 09:49:11 PM
AH yes! John Smith! My favorite doc.


*falls over laughing*  XD  It was the first thought that crossed my mind when Asia posted it.  I read it wrong and the way he got that close to Entaru just made it worse.  Just a funny little thing I needed to add in for a more dimensional character
That was honestly the best thing you could have done. It really added a ton of character to both of them and I am so glad you did it. I was thinking of adding something gay to the shard people anyway since it played on the "Lesbian Man Hater" stereotype of the real world.


Doooo IIiiit!
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Self-sain on August 24, 2011, 12:20:28 AM
SOrry I'll trying posting soon, but I have a lot going on right now
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 24, 2011, 12:23:08 AM
Your posts aren't too far apart so it's not too bad.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on August 24, 2011, 06:00:04 AM
For some reason, I could imagine a fanfic of those two... but that would mean that this story is being posted on more places than just TFF.

*glances at Asia* <.<
Give me time and I would write it myself.

I'd actually like to see that...I can think of a few people who would probably LOVE it.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 24, 2011, 10:32:57 AM
K, was gone a little longer than I thought. Weather finally turned good so haven't been in the house much. Will get back to some posting  :)





Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 24, 2011, 03:03:34 PM
For some reason, I could imagine a fanfic of those two... but that would mean that this story is being posted on more places than just TFF.

*glances at Asia* <.<
Give me time and I would write it myself.

I'd actually like to see that...I can think of a few people who would probably LOVE it.
So it shall be done :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on August 26, 2011, 02:33:53 AM
Asia, I'm just assuming they didn't heal her blindness. If they did, I can edit.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 26, 2011, 02:50:32 AM
We'll keep her blind.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on August 26, 2011, 03:01:36 AM
Okie dokie smokie. :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 29, 2011, 09:16:39 PM
I'm ill, and there's celebrations tomorrow, so I wont be on for a couple of days probably.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 02, 2011, 10:20:12 PM
Sorry I havent been on/posted in a while... Holidays are coming to an end and I am all over the place with stuff I gotta do  :/
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 06, 2011, 04:42:14 PM
K, back at school starting the second part of my A level courses... I can post again in the afternoons now  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 06, 2011, 04:55:18 PM
And I'll be posting again pretty soon as well
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 07, 2011, 05:08:31 PM
Oh terribly sorry Tangletail, i did miss you out there didn't I. Sorry
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on September 07, 2011, 09:36:56 PM
It's totally fine :P


How are you feeling now?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 07, 2011, 10:50:41 PM
Still feel a bit odd, but much much better. I wont post today since it's late. I'll post tomorrow.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on September 07, 2011, 11:54:32 PM
You missed me as well Asia....though I can wait.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on September 08, 2011, 01:09:05 AM
Jeeze, Asia, get it in gear. > : C

(lol jkjk)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 08, 2011, 03:52:31 PM
Right done, nobody's been missed out... i hope :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on September 08, 2011, 09:57:17 PM
I will post later.  I am not feeling to well... >.< I think I caught your sick Asia.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 08, 2011, 11:42:49 PM
Oh no, I'm spreading it through the interwebs
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 18, 2011, 11:53:21 PM
Sorry for the delay everyone. My cousin came round and stuff was going on. ANYWAY


will be posting tomorrow with hope and love :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 20, 2011, 10:35:07 PM
Will do ze whole posting thing tomorrow... Until then, sleep and a day full'a schoolwork  0:)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on October 23, 2011, 02:20:53 AM
I imagine that we're hitting the 'moving too far ahead' point, so I'lll wait on Asia :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on October 25, 2011, 08:21:07 PM
Pfft, like i treat you guys any better. I'll post tomorrow... i probably promise :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on October 28, 2011, 02:41:03 AM
you have not posted yet...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on October 29, 2011, 01:34:28 AM
Yes I am aware of that. I'm writing it up right now, and i do apologise.
I've got a routine down though so I should be more regular and reliable from now on.


Post Merge: October 29, 2011, 02:00:54 AM
Yes I am aware of that. I'm writing it up right now, and i do apologise.
I've got a routine down though so I should be more regular and reliable from now on.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Black-Horse on November 05, 2011, 09:08:14 PM
Is this rp still open? And can one be from somewhere else..
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 05, 2011, 11:42:30 PM
Yes, the RP is still going. And, I have no idea what "From somewhere else" means. Just post your application, and wait for Asia to reply.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Black-Horse on November 06, 2011, 12:03:15 AM
say like.. from another land across the sea
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 06, 2011, 05:52:49 AM
Asia's Say, go ahead and create your app.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 06, 2011, 05:15:22 PM
hmm well, we're about to hit the midway point. Beyond that point, i don't think I can take on any new people. But as long as you dont have a long story to plow through, it should be fine to join.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Black-Horse on November 06, 2011, 05:19:17 PM
a long story?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 06, 2011, 09:22:58 PM
I believe Asia means a long story sequence sequence to get you in. As in, a story as long as the Odyssey of you just traveling to the main event.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 06, 2011, 11:48:04 PM
I believe Asia means a long story sequence sequence to get you in. As in, a story as long as the Odyssey of you just traveling to the main event.
Even i don't know what you just said.

but no, that's not what i meant.

Normally characters have a story they want to get through between when they start the rp, to when the rp finishes. People want their character to have gone through an arc and have grown as a person as a result, during the events of the main story.

if this arc is likely to be long and complex then it wont work considering the time left in the main story.

To give an example, kitt has the arc of the two outcast clan members struggling through their own feelings and the loyalty to the clan and clan tradition. In the end they will most likely end up abandoning the clan for the sake of love, but this will happen slowly over the course of the game.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 07, 2011, 03:23:00 AM
You know how the Odyssey had Oedipus just trying to get home after a war ... and how long and anti-climatic that book was at certain points? And the main real portion of the story was when he got home to find out that the town's men had pretty much mooched off his "death", and that was pretty much the actual climax after he killed them all with a bow. But 'fraid not.

Also, this happens to be one of those times where my brain suddenly moves to fast, that it hangs and skips a few cycles. Example being the weird random repeating of words.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Black-Horse on November 07, 2011, 04:49:01 AM
ahh i get it.. hmm dun worry ill start off as I reach shores and begin to make way to your area, which not long travel.. yes? and if background story, itle be told through his voice if any character asks

Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 07, 2011, 01:54:27 PM
anyway, post character sheet
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Black-Horse on November 07, 2011, 03:58:43 PM
Name: Rylo
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Species: Black Unicorn anthro
Description: Black with yellow eyes, Unicorn Horned, Blue Royal Navy Privateer Uniform. Black Pirate Clothing under.
Bio: Former Privateer in a Royal Navy across the sea, still in discovery on new lands. Rylo was excused from his Pirate actions and was was saw to be skilled in Ship and ground. Once was a Pirate, but lost his ship and crew, but never went down with it.
Other:
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on November 16, 2011, 10:29:58 PM
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee's baaaaaaaaaaaack!  >:3 >:3 >:3 >:3 >:3
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 16, 2011, 10:47:33 PM
\o. And incoming a new sub-plot.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 22, 2011, 06:13:33 PM
'kay horsey boy, you're in.

and i really need to keep my eye on this before it runs away. Expect a post today or tomorrow.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 24, 2011, 05:11:55 AM
And THIS is why I procrastinate so much with this thing. That's 1264 (approx.) words with jumping viewpoints and plot threads to consider; and i haven't managed to do any proper work today (which ironically involved 1000-1500 words being added to my novel.) But that's more just my own laziness and procrastination on that. (motivation is like walking through sludge made of bricks)

Whatever I'm just complaining.
Enjoy your slush at 5am :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 24, 2011, 05:51:18 AM
You have no right to complain O.o you have the right to brag and procrastinate.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on November 25, 2011, 02:36:14 AM
Do you have room for one more?
 
Name: Feuilly Burnside
Age: 14
Species: Crow-cat (basically a cat with big black feathery wings)
Location: Talonjay
Occupation: fan-maker

Weaponry: Returning dagger (I MUST PUT IT IN), sabre, seemingly endless supply of throwing knives.

Biography: Orphaned at a young age, Feuilly taught himself to read and write, and has secretly been training himself in the warrior arts. He's loyal, and does not fear death.
 
Oh, and he DESPISES the year 1772. It just really ticks him off, for some reason.
 
(I'll give a hug to whoever can figure out which real-life book character I based this guy on partly.)

Appearance:(Check my profile, subtract the metal scar.)

( :o Um... Black Unicorn.... that crew's not, like... uh... The Sea horse's, is it?)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on November 25, 2011, 03:03:31 AM
Well, I am sure that he won't know what happened in year 1772 X3 try several milion years ahead.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on November 25, 2011, 04:30:49 AM
I was kidding!  That was just a hint as to who my character is partially based on.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 28, 2011, 02:31:47 AM
Yeah you're in, but whether or not you can seemlessly weave it into it... well we'll see. And unknown-ness is all the fun of the fair in an Rp.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on December 06, 2011, 02:14:32 AM
I will be posting as soon as I'm through corresponding with Asia about steps that Nero will take.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 06, 2011, 02:40:27 AM
Dear god Entaru, that Robotnik picture is just awesome. XD
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on December 06, 2011, 04:36:22 AM
lol, thank you...and thank deviantart for holding it ^.^
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 07, 2011, 01:38:26 AM
Will post after Entaru... give or take a couple of days.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 07, 2011, 01:31:26 PM
I'll see if I can't post later tonight...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 07, 2011, 02:37:24 PM
Cifero, it's nice of you to post but I think you need to figure out where you are or at least tell us.
Nero is in a room many metres down in a large crater upon which the centre of government for the village has been built. He is alone with Aman. You can't possibly be there and see him.

Don't just latch onto the nearest cool thing that's happening, figure out where you are and what you're doing in the world.



oh yeah and I'll be posting as soon as i get some food in me.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 07, 2011, 10:23:50 PM
Sorry. I didn't have a lot of time to post when I posted that.
 
Well, where are you guys? Perhaps I could be traveling to another location, but when I stop somewhere, I get caught up in you guys' cause?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 08, 2011, 01:28:46 AM
Okay, it's clear you're flying blind here Cifero

First if you haven't already, I would appreciate it if you read the first post of this OOC thread.
Second, don't just drop yourself into someone else's story when you've no idea what's going on.
Third, if you haven't already, then when you want to put yourself in someone's backstory I suggest you read that backstory first.

Now to explain what's going on.
Kitt's characters are hidden in a hole under a building in Tina City.
Chronin and Grace E.'s characters are in a tree by the town of the Shard, which is where Nero is.
Tangletail's character is in the dome of government above the crater that Nero is in.
Self Sain and Katie's characters are in the Temple of the Chosen which is in Tina City's UnderCity (it's underground.)

As for a 'cause', well the Queen wants to know what's going on in the Shard town,
Little Hands, Saviour and Seeker want to stop and hopefully destroy Nero.
Kitt's characters want to get away from their clan so they can be safe
Katie's character wants to meet Nero
The Chosen are going to teach Meredith (Self Sain's character) how to be a Chosen.
I'm not really too sure about Chronin or Grace E.'s characters. They have rather mysterious, or at least mulitple end goals, which i quite like.
And Leo (Tangletail's character) has pretty much lost all hope of life and is currently Suicidal.


Now as for you?
I suggest you make your own tale. You're just jumping in and trying to make things happen where things are already happening. If you want to be a character, then have your own story as well as contributing to the overall arc. Have a backstory that informs what you will be doing in such a world. Don't just exist for the sake of existing.

I dont mean to tell you off or anything.
It's just to help you out here.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 08, 2011, 01:47:38 AM

I'm not really too sure about Chronin or Grace E.'s characters. They have rather mysterious, or at least mulitple end goals, which i quite like.


Me Gusta ..... XDDDD
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 08, 2011, 01:48:33 AM
He is not entirely suicidal. He just currently has no survival instincts anymore... or very little sanity left. :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 08, 2011, 01:49:51 AM
I have no idea what Chrono has in store for Talin, Aria is just over all mysterious
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 08, 2011, 03:28:13 AM
I had Talin's path planned out, but the idea of it is like throwing in puzzle pieces that have a good chance of not fitting.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 08, 2011, 04:12:51 AM
So far... I am flipping a coin as I play. Two ideas laid out, only one can be used. Only the magic penny could decide.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on December 08, 2011, 08:01:03 AM
He is not entirely suicidal. He just currently has no survival instincts anymore... or very little sanity left. :P
Yeah, being around Nero will do that to a person  XD
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 08, 2011, 12:41:42 PM
No Chronin, no Seeker, no Vurian, welp... that leaves Leo Vs DemiGod Almighty o.o;

Meh, I can come up with something....
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 08, 2011, 03:41:30 PM
Hmm... I'm going to need to think, but I'll see if I can't post tonight.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 08, 2011, 05:48:05 PM
I had Talin's path planned out, but the idea of it is like throwing in puzzle pieces that have a good chance of not fitting.
Imagine how I feel, trying to plan stories and events for every single one of you :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on December 08, 2011, 09:48:48 PM
Quote
Imagine how I feel, trying to plan stories and events for every single one of you


God knows how you manage it without going absolutely insane  :P    Voodoo magics I say  >.>
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 08, 2011, 10:23:26 PM
I believe the only way you can keep us on a path, is to limit what we can do...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 09, 2011, 01:11:33 AM
I do limit what you can do to some extent but that's only really limiting super powers and deus ex machina,  to make sure that drama and tension are possible. how that drama and tension appears is very... organic.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 10, 2011, 11:45:27 PM
Cifero... I get the feeling you're doing the exact same thing you did before.
You're jumping into people's sidestories without any reason, and certainly without any story of your own.
I think the main issue is that you want to be immediately part of the action and you think you have to force that yourself. But if you look at the start of most of the other stories, they often have stories that are separate from all of the other players.
Talin was in jail,
Imshi and Yenchi were with their clan,
Aria was in the crowd
Entaru was with Aman
Leo was unconscious miles and miles away from any semblance of civilization
They were all separate and through my guidance and their own character and story they eventually found characters that fit together to make a subplot. They didn't just start off in a big group together.

Dont just throw yourself into the middle of the path hoping that someone will crash into you. Settle your own character down a bit first and you have to trust in me to get you into something cool, whether it be involved in someone else's plot line, or blazing your own. I always promise to keep everyone occupied and entertained as best I can and not just force people to make their own fun.

Also you really should trust in the ability of your own character to be interesting even if they are on their own for a little bit. If a character can't exist without other people there then you need think about why and fix that. I mean what would your character be doing normally when he's not hurling himself into other people's storylines?

Again, i'm not trying to stop you playing, i'm not putting you down and i definitely do want as many people playing as possible, but jumping into a storyline that's already in progress pretty much grinds that storyline to a halt and throws all the pacing off. It forces a massive reset and requires a lot of work to get things back on track to being dramatic again. It's much much more effective if you go slow and ease yourself into a storyline that fits you.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 11, 2011, 12:51:04 AM
hey...Cifero, you can't find my  tree house because its high in the tree and covered by leaves....you would have to be up there in order to see it.....
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 11, 2011, 12:56:14 AM
Or hear it possibly, unless Grace's character's voice angelic voice, or Talin's voice is like a very deep baritone and he is yelling like Samuel Jackson.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 11, 2011, 12:58:39 AM
yeah, we are trying to be quiet.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 11, 2011, 01:36:23 AM
or if Talin's voice is like a very deep baritone and he is yelling like Samuel Jackson.
Yelling like Samuel Jackson...

I think we're onto something here.

Everflame: The Shard (The Parody)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 11, 2011, 01:40:39 AM
or if Talin's voice is like a very deep baritone and he is yelling like Samuel Jackson.
Yelling like Samuel Jackson...

I think we're onto something here.

Everflame: The Shard (The Parody)


*ailed held back laugh* who knew that the shapeshifter dragon had a sense of humor
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 12, 2011, 02:40:19 AM
Asia, if you still do not wish for Cifero to barge into another's story like so, then this thought could always work. A tree house wouldn't exactly be uncommon if there a lot of nomads within this time frame? In other words, he stumbled into an NPCs home then where Talin and, I keep forgetting Grace's Character's name, home.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 12, 2011, 02:46:35 AM
Well... my character has pretty good hearing, being part crow and all... and he got launched nearby it due to a misunderstanding and a big catapult.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on December 12, 2011, 12:15:34 PM
A crow has good hearing? o.o?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 12, 2011, 02:39:38 PM
I don't see how having only an ear canal and no form of sound funnel, can count as having enhanced hearing.

Plus his character made no mention of how he survived being launched out of a catapult, or why they would launch him out of the castle just because he had wings.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 12, 2011, 08:26:58 PM
From what i know of crows (not much) their hearing is relatively good for a bird like that. In the grand scheme of animalia though, it's nothing special and I'm almost certain that a cat's hearing would be much better.

Anyway, we'll disregard the catapult since it was clearly used to throw Feuilley to Talin and Aria so he could join in on their story.

As it stands, I think you have two choices, Cifero. You can either meet NPCs in that treehouse or you can etch out your own personality and semblance of story so that I can weave it into the main narrative as I have done with everyone else.

Also I would appreciate it if you refrain from posting in the main thread until we've cleaned up this issue.

------------------------------

I'll do my own post in an hour or so, hopefully.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 13, 2011, 12:34:16 AM
Crow hearing plus cat hearing.
Hmm... I can weave it in, actually. I was just kinda strapped for ideas...
 
I've got it. I'll leave the treehouse and its startled occupants and start running like heck from there, and then go into a flashback which explains some things but not all, and then I suppose at some point I'm gonna run into one of the other characters on their own accord, since considering my current position, it would be a bad idea if I ran into one of them myself. Will this work? Hope so. I'll just wait for your reply.
 
By the way, they threw him out of the castle for asking the wrong questions. What questions? That'll be revealed later.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 13, 2011, 12:54:47 AM
Is a cat-bird-person hybrid even allowed? :?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on December 13, 2011, 12:56:54 AM
I was wondering that too....>.>
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 13, 2011, 01:04:23 AM
Hmm... well, I still exist, so I suppose it's allowed.
 
Did I mention that I recently found out that I had wings?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 13, 2011, 01:12:31 AM
Okay, I admit I messed up there...

Is everyone being excluded from the questions, or is Asia getting them all so he can make the appropriate responses in future posts?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 13, 2011, 01:28:46 AM
Is everyone being excluded from the questions, or is Asia getting them all so he can make the appropriate responses in future posts?
Neither, I'm just slow. If anyone has a question I will answer it when i find it.

Cat Birds are totally acceptable (there are quite a few hybrids in the world, including Kitt's female character and the Queen herself if you look at her description.) and I dont see how a cat bird would present any sort of real imbalance from a gameplay standpoint so I've no reason to object to it.
Also mixing a crow and a bird does not give you cat hearing + crow hearing. Looking at it from the most basic and relatively ignorant standpoint one would expect a catbird's hearing to be somewhere between the abilities of the two animals.


Suddenly finding out that you have wings is certainly a story to be explored so that's good.


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By the way, they threw him out of the castle for asking the wrong questions. What questions? That'll be revealed later. 
If you have any plans for story that involves deep secrets with any element controlled by me I would just ask that you run them by me first for a few reasons.
I need to know if it fits within the world and continuity,
I need to be able to mould the story with such things in mind.


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I've got it. I'll leave the treehouse and its startled occupants and start running like heck from there, and then go into a flashback which explains some things but not all, and then I suppose at some point I'm gonna run into one of the other characters on their own accord, since considering my current position, it would be a bad idea if I ran into one of them myself. Will this work? Hope so. I'll just wait for your reply.
that sounds just fine and Chronin and Grace don't really need to put any reactions to that since all it really is is resetting Feuilly's story so we can get a good start on him. Ignoring it will help in keeping the scene smooth and more natural so it gets a better feel to it.

As for running into other characters, dont plan to, don't expect to. Just play with the story, see where it takes you. Most likely I will direct you to interact with other people, but it's certainly a possibility that you'll not meet any other player for a while. I'm not saying it's likely, but i'm not saying that it's not likely either so just go with the flow, okay?
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 13, 2011, 01:41:44 AM
I need to know if it fits within the world and continuity,
I need to be able to mould the story with such things in mind.
I believe that is the idea of what I meant when I said "make the appropriate repsonses in future posts."

I should probably have said "so he can have his characters make the appropriate actions/reactions in future posts."
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 13, 2011, 02:36:25 PM
Yes ma'am! (I mean that in all seriousness.)
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 13, 2011, 09:01:35 PM
ma'am? Who's the ma'am?
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Post by: Entaru on December 13, 2011, 09:05:58 PM
lol, I think he means the you Asia, our hot pink rabbit GM  XD
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 13, 2011, 09:20:40 PM
lol, I think he means the you Asia, our hot pink rabbit GM  XD
No...

Our hot pink, and self-appointed GORGEOUS GM.
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 13, 2011, 10:11:54 PM
lol, I think he means the you Asia, our hot pink rabbit GM  XD
lol, I think he means the you Asia, our hot pink rabbit GM  XD
No...

Our hot pink, and self-appointed GORGEOUS GM.
Well... all buttkissery aside, yes, I mean you Asia.
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Post by: tangletail on December 13, 2011, 10:46:30 PM
Entaru, Leo is actually on Savior the lizard's back. As far as where he is... I have no clue.
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on December 13, 2011, 10:53:56 PM
So could I start now?
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Post by: Entaru on December 14, 2011, 08:15:58 AM
Well shoot...will edit accordingly.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 15, 2011, 12:24:24 AM
lol, I think he means the you Asia, our hot pink rabbit GM  XD
No...

Our hot pink, and self-appointed GORGEOUS GM.
Damn right I'm gorgeous.


So could I start now?
Yes you can. I think most of the main problems are sorted out, it's just a few details to deal with now.
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Post by: tangletail on December 15, 2011, 02:56:13 AM
My responce time in the near future may die down a bit. My laptop just died suddenly on a memory upgrade :/.


I gave tech support a call, and they wanted to charge me for 35 trouble shooting help because it has no warrenty, so I said screw that. Talked to their repair guys, and they gave me an estimate that was three times the actual price I bought it for. I asked them to just tell me what's wrong with it so I can fix it myself, and the answers were either I don't quite know, or it's a hardware issue, or it's just Toshiba's Infamous Design Flaw. Where you plug in a new ram module, and suddenly your video card shorts out, or becomes loose >.<. Can't confirm it because the screws on the back of this thing are just on there TIGHT. It's like trying to pull two phone books apart.

Short Explanation of whats wrong with it... the screen doesn't turn on. But the laptop will, but it's certainly not going anywhere because there is no hard drive activity.
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 15, 2011, 03:31:59 AM
Tangletail, I thought the point here was to NOT let Nero keep killing!
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Post by: tangletail on December 15, 2011, 03:59:40 AM
He didn't kill anything yet.
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on December 15, 2011, 04:02:47 AM
He didn't kill anything yet.
He might kill Aman with the way you're taunting him...
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Post by: tangletail on December 15, 2011, 04:11:02 AM
Oh no! :3
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Post by: Entaru on December 15, 2011, 07:15:21 AM
Actually...with that taunt, you just lost the match.  Aman sickens Nero and he has plans for him...just like he has plans for several others...
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Post by: tangletail on December 21, 2011, 04:24:05 PM
Well that's good! How is everyone's holiday so far?
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on December 21, 2011, 09:14:33 PM
will post asap, probably tomorrow
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on January 01, 2012, 06:27:55 PM
Sorry for not posting, but then you know how the holidays go.

Anyway due to my inaction both here and for my novel, i will be focusing on my work for the next month. As such, my posts will be even slower than they already are for the next month because I need to focus on getting myself sorted.
That's not to say that i wont post at all, but i will post less.

Happy new year :P
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Post by: Grace.E on January 04, 2012, 04:18:04 AM
Pooost sooooon!!!! I starting to Miss it!!
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on January 04, 2012, 04:20:09 AM
Okay, so where do I start?
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on January 10, 2012, 10:50:09 PM
I shall do my best to post tomorrow. I can't promise anything, since I am a horrendous procrastinator and the little work i do do is focused on my novel, but that's the way things are. I just have to shove in more work hours is all. Easy Peasy
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Post by: x on January 13, 2012, 07:00:11 PM
 
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"My friends....thank you." His voice was almost a whisper, but every citizen in the city heard him as clear as day. "Your efforts, your sacrifice...have not been in vain. While the rest of this land toils for a being that does nothing for them, you stood by and served something tangible." His voice raised into a powerful boom as he continued. "And now...your efforts and hard work have finally come to fruition! Now....you stand here on the precipice of divinity! In the presence of a true god! Behold and tremble in fear of your god! I...your lord Nero...have RISEN!!" His last word slammed through the crowd in a shockwave, stretching outside of the city for miles as he spread his arms to the crowd.




Looks like someone's enjoying the moment.... >.>
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on January 13, 2012, 07:09:10 PM
Talin, traveling to the Town of the Shard in an attempt to at least cripple Nero, possibly in front of a crowd of his followers.

Nero just gave a grandiose speech about his return...

I'm not sure if its fitting, but I keep thinking of Assassin's creed when I try to imagine my next post.
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Post by: tangletail on January 13, 2012, 11:05:44 PM
Huh... quite a large building. I will post later.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on January 14, 2012, 02:03:11 AM
oh yeah and cifero just post, as long as you dont just drop into events already in progress.
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Post by: Entaru on January 14, 2012, 05:18:36 AM
ooooh yes....Nero is definently enjoying himself.  >:3
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Post by: tangletail on January 14, 2012, 05:34:53 AM
Eh... for now. He may finally get to kill Leo, but in the end. He will have the last laugh in some way!
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on January 15, 2012, 01:16:28 AM
oh yeah and cifero just post, as long as you dont just drop into events already in progress.
Alright. Right on it.
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Post by: tangletail on January 15, 2012, 05:17:52 AM
I have no respect for doors. In fact, when I get a house of my own the only actual door I will have is to my water boiler and the entrance

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Post by: Cifero Windtail on January 15, 2012, 05:49:05 AM
Well that's a paradox.
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Post by: tangletail on February 02, 2012, 11:39:14 AM
*grabs some defibrillators :/*
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 02, 2012, 01:19:30 PM
well hey now, why'd you do a thing like that? i told you there would be far less posts in january. i've only got about 3000-4000 words left of my novel... but if you think this does need some more content, I shall oblige

Oh yes and Cifero (now longshield) if you wanna comment on things in the rp, i would appreciate it if you could just keep it in the OOC. okay? :D
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Post by: tangletail on February 02, 2012, 10:50:26 PM
I'm just grabbing them now because this is February XD *zap*
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Post by: Grace.E on February 03, 2012, 12:49:25 AM
wait... your writing a novel at the same time? dude...
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Post by: Entaru on February 03, 2012, 03:16:03 AM
Here's what my little soldiers look like, for those of you who aren't Asia   >:3
 
Oh...and Aman's new form is in the last attachment.  Just imagine furry versions of these guys.  MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *coughs*

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Post by: Grace.E on February 03, 2012, 03:18:52 AM
wow...nasty.... XDDD
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 03, 2012, 05:39:23 AM
I don't know whether Talin will be crestfallen for having known that they used to not be monsters, or excited that he can really let loose now that he doesn't have to worry about killing the 'innocent'.
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Post by: tangletail on February 03, 2012, 12:04:20 PM
Flying demon zombies, and crawlers. It's pretty mundane to me :|. Kinda reminds me of amnesia a little. Reading the way you walked in Everflame 2 was scarier though.


 No if you really want to freak someone out, you must turn them inside out so you see their bones around the meat. Have their skin be torn off and used as clothing. Their own spines as some kind of weapon. And make them breath fire. Give them the ability to SPRINT at their prey in the most awkward manner and you will have people's pants getting wetter than water.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 03, 2012, 05:16:58 PM
now now, disparaging someone's writing especially when it's utterly improvised without any real chance to rewrite doesn't really help much.

Also it's my personal opinion that gory visuals does not equal horror. It's like Dead Space. It's all loud and shouty with blood and guts and splashy squishiness and things running around with their arms in the air going "BE AFRAID! BE AFRAAAAAAIIID!" accompanied by wiggly fingered spooky jazz hands; simply because it doesn't know how to scare people, so it shoves it all in your face

An old man smiling at you from across a park can be scarier... if it's done right.

Fear is a feeling after all, so you gotta make it feel right, not look right or sound right, but FEEL right.

So in my opinion both you and Entaru are doing it wrong :P but then as with all opinions, it's all absurdly subjective and nobody's got the right answer.
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Post by: tangletail on February 03, 2012, 06:13:23 PM
Well, I am no master of fear, but I have seen things that had made a lot of disgusting, and horrifying things mundane XD.

Deadspace wasn't scary though... it had things popping out of vents that were only 2 feet deep in the light, down a hallway.

Amnesia, System Shock, Eternal Darkness, Penumdrum, Nero walking in a corpse in Everflame 2, and ocelots frighten me.
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 03, 2012, 06:22:14 PM
I'd rather have the old man scary than Dead Space scary. :3
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Post by: Entaru on February 04, 2012, 09:29:37 PM
Well, you have to realize that this isn't the adult thread and I can't get away with as much before a mod clubs me over the head.  I'm not going too much for the horror aspect this time as I am for a demon lord of sorrow.  This is a creature who normally does everything himself and has been weakened severely.  He's still a force to be reckoned with but he needs to keep a wall of creatures around him until he can grow to full strength again.  He needs to flaunt what little power he has to scare away anything that threatens him until then.
 
Think of this as a cocoon state for the old Nero you know.
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Post by: tangletail on February 04, 2012, 09:54:04 PM
Well, it can still be a horror for Leo. All he has now is a 10 pound metal flashlight.
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Post by: tangletail on February 10, 2012, 10:04:53 PM
Huh... for some reason my post never went through for the last round-a-bout. I will be posting soon then.
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Post by: kivabunny on February 15, 2012, 01:37:23 PM
can i join?
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 15, 2012, 06:40:11 PM
as long as you understand the situation and have good ideas in mind, then sure. :)
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Post by: kivabunny on February 15, 2012, 07:38:40 PM
how is this?
 
Name:aeron

Age:unknown

Species:50% arctic wolf  50% shrrg(the giant wolves from the eragon series)

Location: on the side of the road
Occupation: unknown

Weaponry: 2 large 35 pound granite war hammers (can i teleport? its kinda one of my thing in RPG's)

Biography: aeron has been in a horrible accident where he was ambushed and almost killed by a band of thieves he is robbed of everything but his two war hammers, his pack containing his extra robe, and he has also lost his memory, he is found unconsious and barely clinging to life on one of the roads, robes shreaded and armor stolen.

Appearance: wears a black hooded robe with leather armor underneath(usually)
if you approve i will start a little bit after you find me
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Post by: x on February 15, 2012, 09:01:17 PM
Sorry I hath failed. Will post this weekend.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 15, 2012, 10:42:05 PM
Okay Whitewolf, i just need a few things clarified before i let you in. This isn't to put a downer on your ideas, just wanna figure out its internal logic. I like things to make sense, so then we can all understand and play with them.
Firstly, sorry but you can't teleport.

Secondly, why didn't the thieves take his weapons and his pack?
it seems like all they took was (i'm assuming) money, and his armour... that was underneath his clothes. Why would they take the time to strip him and steal his armour, but not a rather easily accessible pack, nor his weapons that i'm assuming were also easily accessible in comparison to taking off his armour. Is there anything special about this armour?

Also if there's any arc you're going to play through while the main story is going on, pm any important notes to me so that I can prepare, okay?

 :)
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Post by: tangletail on February 15, 2012, 11:04:29 PM
Isn't it obvious? They had far better weapons and armor. And the weight per value made it worthless! :D Skyrim for the win!


Also, graphite is a very soft material. I am sure if the man missed and hit the ground or something the war-hammers would require repair pretty quickly other wise they would break. But I could be wrong.
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 15, 2012, 11:31:01 PM
Also, graphite is a very soft material. I am sure if the man missed and hit the ground or something the war-hammers would require repair pretty quickly other wise they would break. But I could be wrong.
The warhammers are granite, which is effectively swinging a cornerstone at people.

But yea, the more likely situation is that they would either leave you with either the armor, or just an empty pack.
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on February 15, 2012, 11:56:43 PM
Hm... gotta come up with a good backstory for the Army of the Abased...
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Post by: tangletail on February 16, 2012, 01:46:41 AM
Ah I some how misread that. It's been a long day. But I am sure a theif desperate enough would take the time to neatly remove his victims clothing for the armor. Or something else but I rather not go that way. It's kinda funny how this appears in my head. The augur normally doesn't bode to well in the end for the guy.
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Post by: kivabunny on February 16, 2012, 01:28:51 PM
i wasnt wearing the armor at the moment because i was traveling light, so they stole it without having to remove my robes, second the hammers were too heavy for the theives to travel with them and they were not very valuable either, and lastly all that particular pack contains is 2 extra sets of robes so they searched it but left it behind because they saw no value in it compared to the gold i was carrying. i was a weapons master in my old villiage and am widely known as  one of the best weapons masters, although i have forgotten all of that i still retain my skills, and as such can weild any weapon extremely
Proficiently, in my hands war hammers are not slow, they are just as fast as any other weapon, save for a speeding arrow.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 16, 2012, 11:19:54 PM
Okay, i guess that makes sense. You can post.

As for your backstory... there's nothing inherently wrong with it but anyone who paints their character as super awesome always gains my suspicion. I've had problems in every previous roleplay where some people will everything they can so that their character never gets into a bad situation because they'll feel like their "losing" or they think their character is too good to end up in any real danger.

I'm not expecting you to act like that, I'm just saying don't be afraid to get into a bad situation that properly affects your character. We're looking for good stories is all.

So post away and be creative.
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Post by: kivabunny on February 17, 2012, 03:15:31 AM
ofc every good story character has his challenges
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on February 17, 2012, 10:34:35 PM
Be creative, huh? My specialty...
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 22, 2012, 04:59:21 PM
will post asap
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Post by: x on February 22, 2012, 05:11:03 PM
Don't know why that didn't get posted till now, could have sworn I'd posted...
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Post by: kivabunny on February 22, 2012, 05:55:42 PM
will start as soon as someone stumbles across my unconsious, beaten body.
 
y'know just waitin'
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on February 23, 2012, 05:17:07 PM
Want me to come across you?
 
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 24, 2012, 03:26:00 AM
viola, whitewolf, you two mess around and i'll guide you to cool stuff once i find an opportune moment to tumble in. (though that does require you to be vigilant of my posts since i already tried to do stuff with fieully, which went utterly ignored :P )
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 24, 2012, 04:39:55 AM
In case it wasn't brought forward ahead of time, Entaru and I had already spoken on what would take place, and I'm partially sure that a simple blade through the heart is not going to stop Nero :P
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on February 24, 2012, 03:06:25 PM
Whitewolf, I've given you an entrance.

You're welcome. ;)
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Post by: kivabunny on February 24, 2012, 04:31:15 PM
thank you, i will try my best to keep up, though i won't be on alot during weekends.
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Post by: Cifero Windtail on February 24, 2012, 06:06:52 PM
viola, whitewolf, you two mess around and i'll guide you to cool stuff once i find an opportune moment to tumble in. (though that does require you to be vigilant of my posts since i already tried to do stuff with fieully, which went utterly ignored :P )
FEUILLY. And I noticed the tremors.

Just give me a second...
And okay, Whitewolf...
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 27, 2012, 01:41:17 AM
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FEUILLY.
YOUR NAME IS SO HAAARD! @.@
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Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 27, 2012, 01:51:52 AM
No... Oompapamowmow is worse... followed by Yggsaddon...
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Post by: tangletail on February 27, 2012, 01:57:46 AM
Try saying it. It's harder to pronounce than Luposlipaphobia
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 27, 2012, 07:10:07 PM
No... Oompapamowmow is worse... followed by Yggsaddon...

I actually find those much easier. Oompapamowmow has very strong simple syllables that are easy to remember and have a nice rhythm to it. And Yggsaddon has somewhat the  same thing but to a lesser extent. mostly it helps to know about Yggdrasil in order to remember it.
The problem with feuilly is that it's mostly one syllable comprised of a mash of vowels that don't fully make sense in that configuration. One expects it to be pronounced feul-ly but there's an I in there and according to such a pronounciation, that would mean the I is at the beginning, and yet it's not. It feels awkward.


Try saying it. It's harder to pronounce than Luposlipaphobia
And latin phobias are often hard to say, so it's a good thing they're rarely used as people's names.
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Post by: KittKat chunky~ on February 27, 2012, 08:07:10 PM
Try Zmrzlina... means ice cream in Slovak. There's one I find tends to stump English-speakers  :P 
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Post by: x on February 28, 2012, 08:24:23 PM
Postingz tomorrow.
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Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on February 29, 2012, 01:27:54 AM
Try Zmrzlina... means ice cream in Slovak. There's one I find tends to stump English-speakers  :P
It's like welsh where it seems to use as few vowels as possible.
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Post by: tangletail on February 29, 2012, 01:54:11 AM
Actually... that's not to bad to pronounce. Try this one...



Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis
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Post by: kivabunny on February 29, 2012, 02:54:50 AM
That ones easy, just rather daunting in appearance.
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Post by: tangletail on February 29, 2012, 03:41:09 AM
Mk... say it three times fast. Remember, it's just 45 letters in english.
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Post by: x on February 29, 2012, 08:27:26 PM
Try out the chemical name for enaptin, not really an english word so much as a chemical compound. It goes on and on for a few more paragraphs. In fact, it goes on so much I can't post it here because it exceeds the character limit. Anyway, trying to post right now, we'll see if I get it up. ;.;

 
Methionylalanylthreonylserylarginylglycylalanylserylarginylcysteinylproly-
larginylaspartylisoleucylalanylasparaginylvalylmethionylglutaminylarginyl-
leucylglutaminylaspartylglutamylglutaminylglutamylisoleucylvalylglutaminy-
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Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 29, 2012, 08:31:11 PM
I have a feeling you'll need to follow a rhythm for that... else you'll mess up half-way, then forget where you left off.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on February 29, 2012, 08:36:05 PM
I have a feeling I wouldn't try it at all haha. But if I were to a rhythm would be the best way.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on February 29, 2012, 08:58:25 PM
I know a longer organic chemical name.

There is a very good reason why people developed a shorten nomenclature for chemical names. Because it will become physically impossible to say it on one breath and remember where you are after breathing. Or create names for them.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on February 29, 2012, 08:59:37 PM
I have a feeling I wouldn't try it at all haha. But if I were to a rhythm would be the best way.

I vote that the rhythm should be like this: Animaniacs - Nations Of The World (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDtdQ8bTvRc#)


we are now officially off topic, and I shall attempt to steer it back...

Vuranin's influence was completely unintentional, considering the only memories he had were ones that Chronin had experienced.

I believe that Nero's intervention on Talin's inner "harmony" caused Vuranin's abilities to finally become active.

But the GM has final say on the silly-seriousness of the situation.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on February 29, 2012, 09:44:36 PM
I know a longer organic chemical name.

How many letters long? It is likely that they are one and the same, though of course there's the possibility that there are many long chemical names.

Supposedly the longest is at 64,000 something letters, which is what I posted, but they could be wrong.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 05, 2012, 03:13:59 PM
will post probably today
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 05, 2012, 04:01:11 PM
Any natural Organic Chemical. You can chain them nearly forever. Longest chain is predicted to go half way to the sun.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 06, 2012, 12:33:44 AM
I have no idea what on earth i'm doing. the plan is soooo loose right now. I dont know what's gonna happen.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 06, 2012, 03:17:20 AM
well, three different players could be qualified for Dim Lane's assumption, but since it is implied that someone is moving towards him, I could believe it was Talin, since the other two that are in a forest setting, are going to sleep...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 06, 2012, 11:54:42 AM
Well Asia, that is the magic of a Dungeon game. Your option of Murphy's Law is possible (I've seen it get to the point of four helicopters crashing near the same location, then the only working one crashing six times in an RP), or the ability of a golden moment.



Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on March 06, 2012, 01:17:25 PM
im waiting for viola to be un-muted so i sent this message
 
"what did you do to get muted? im waiting for you in the rp until you get un-muted, so do you know when you will be able to post again? if it will be awhile can one of us fill in for you until you can post again? PM me with your response if you can.
thanks,
           aeron"
i was wondering if she says it is ok, can one of you fill in for her?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 07, 2012, 02:02:07 AM
well, three different players could be qualified for Dim Lane's assumption, but since it is implied that someone is moving towards him, I could believe it was Talin, since the other two that are in a forest setting, are going to sleep...

Don't worry, I've got characters ready for that.



Well Asia, that is the magic of a Dungeon game. Your option of Murphy's Law is possible (I've seen it get to the point of four helicopters crashing near the same location, then the only working one crashing six times in an RP), or the ability of a golden moment.
as true as that is (I've seen some great things in the past) this rp in particular is far looser than the previous 2 everflame rps. I've got ideas for an end game but nothing solid.




im waiting for viola to be un-muted so i sent this message
 
"what did you do to get muted? im waiting for you in the rp until you get un-muted, so do you know when you will be able to post again? if it will be awhile can one of us fill in for you until you can post again? PM me with your response if you can.
thanks,
           aeron"
i was wondering if she says it is ok, can one of you fill in for her?
I'll take the characters over if she so wishes.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 07, 2012, 02:12:28 AM
Huh... then I guess I really don't have much to post in terms of physical progress....
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 07, 2012, 02:53:03 AM
Entaru, you need to find some kind of orchestra for your moment of... glory with un-dead skinless mutants.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 07, 2012, 03:09:51 AM
Entaru, you need to find some kind of orchestra for your moment of... glory with un-dead skinless mutants.
You mean his chorus of 'angels'?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 07, 2012, 03:34:25 AM
Uhm... sure if you want I guess... but to me if you are going to call a group your angels, it would typically register as this to me.



(http://ia.media-imdb.com/images/M/MV5BMTY2NTY1MTg0NV5BMl5BanBnXkFtZTYwMTk4Njk5._V1._SY317_CR6,0,214,317_.jpg)

Instead it's like Voldemort completely trampled the definition by stomping a rhino in the unmentionables, and burning all since of logic and metaphysics.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 07, 2012, 03:39:25 AM
Uhm... sure if you want I guess... but to me if you are going to call a group your angels, it would typically register as this to me.



(http://ia.media-imdb.com/images/M/MV5BMTY2NTY1MTg0NV5BMl5BanBnXkFtZTYwMTk4Njk5._V1._SY317_CR6,0,214,317_.jpg)

Instead it's like Voldemort completely trampled the definition by stomping a rhino in the unmentionables, and burning all since of logic and metaphysics.

Followed by the screams of those Nero turns his hordes upon, and the pre-conflict chaos that would ensue if everything were to be leaked...

Of course, that is assuming Nero is actually going to march right towards Tina City, rather than just build his forces and let the city tear itself apart in panic...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 07, 2012, 04:00:20 AM

Can't no one stop this monster!Technically... you have a chance to fight him :P I am just a mortal going crazy.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 07, 2012, 04:40:46 AM

Can't no one stop this monster!Technically... you have a chance to fight him :P I am just a mortal going crazy.
Well, you're driving yourself insane, Talin is seeing things and experiencing events that happened long before Tina City existed.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 07, 2012, 04:47:56 AM
In the terms of GLaDOS "I am... still alive." Went through time and space while conscious for a few seconds, and landed in the past that is the future. It's bound to happen :e Oh and met all the immortals of this world except seeker and a spider.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on March 07, 2012, 10:39:35 PM
Personally....I think Dancing Mad by the Black Mages is the perfect song for Nero and his army.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 07, 2012, 10:46:55 PM
You're either to old, or you have excellent memory to remember the name of that song. And it's game.


Frankly, I fall within those lines ;-;.

I figured if you were going to go FF, you would have chosen Chaos Shrine.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on March 08, 2012, 02:24:32 AM
Nope...only 20.  I'm just into old games and video game music.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on March 08, 2012, 03:07:54 AM
Ah... I only have good memory.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on March 16, 2012, 09:36:11 PM
whitewolf, Cifero, can you wait for Asia to return, in case he has something in the plot for the two of you...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 16, 2012, 10:50:29 PM
yeah, sorry for being slow.

You have some room to play around (especially since i haven't involved you in anything yet), but just dont go too far is all.
I'll be posting now by the way



Post Merge: March 17, 2012, 04:17:28 AM
Okay, I WAS going to post until i found that i had to spend 5 or something hours fixing my computer. It's 4am now so i'll post tomorrow.


Post Merge: March 17, 2012, 04:26:21 PM
That post was way more trouble for me than it ever should have been :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on March 17, 2012, 11:10:57 PM
Sorry, haven't really been on here that often and I only just realized I hadn't posted in a while...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 18, 2012, 06:03:34 PM
thats totally fine.
my computer broke down into a husk of its former self, so i'll probably be on more often due to lack of work until its fixed
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on March 18, 2012, 11:08:50 PM
I apologize as well. It's the end of the quarter for me, a lot of stuff to do and stress, if you know what I mean.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 19, 2012, 06:45:01 PM
totally okay
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on March 29, 2012, 11:58:00 PM
woo computer fixedded and will post sometime maybe soon who knows, probably tomorrow, if not, then monday since i'm going to see friends Sat/Sun
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on April 04, 2012, 01:39:33 AM
A supremely powerful Chosen one?

*Talin stands triumphantly on top of a stone, with his chest puffed out*

*Queen Tizzarath trips him off the stone with her tail, followed by Nero rushing over and kicking him in the ribs while he's down, then quickly running off*
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on April 04, 2012, 11:41:24 AM
Leo: Yeeeeaaaaaaaaaah.... I have a feeling that your hero is a dork, and the world is screwed.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on April 08, 2012, 01:27:21 PM
Sorry for the long post Asia, I dont get a chance to post often due to work. All of my RP'ing gets bottled up until I get Ill and have nothing better to do than write a lengthy post  X3
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 08, 2012, 01:48:31 PM
hell, i do the same thing.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on April 10, 2012, 04:22:40 PM
I'm not seriously behind in the story AT ALL. T>T

Feel free to time skip to catch our characters up if you'd like Asia, unless I totally missed something and they're somewhere else than where I thought they were.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 11, 2012, 05:21:37 PM
well you're pretty seperate from everyone else so it's not a problem just yet. your lack of responses might be a problem when you do get involved with other people but i will try to mitigate it and make sure it doesn't go too badly in that direction.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: x on April 11, 2012, 05:29:41 PM
Okay, thanks. I'm deffers going to try and post more often, I honestly don't like falling behind even though I obviously do it.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on April 12, 2012, 03:06:53 PM
i just got a laptop
 
now if i could just find my hard drive.
 
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 15, 2012, 02:26:27 AM
okay, i went to a wedding today, but tomorrow i will most definitely try to post
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on April 26, 2012, 10:44:48 PM
Sorry if my post if hectic/unstructured, I typed it at midnight tonight after having done schoolwork... I've been putting off posting for a coupla days now because of how much work I have to do, and finally decided I would at least post something  :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on April 27, 2012, 09:57:58 PM
Posting some time today

Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 27, 2012, 10:07:42 PM
oh me too, me too... tomorrow hopefully.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on April 28, 2012, 04:02:18 AM
Asia, do you have a set idea for how the Chosen and soldiers are trained for combat, or is that still under consideration?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on April 28, 2012, 05:11:46 PM
I have only one thing to say to you Mista Immortal. There is a zombie on your lawn D:
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on April 28, 2012, 05:30:06 PM
I have only one thing to say to you Mista Immortal. There is a zombie on your lawn D:
Fact 1: Talin is not immortal, just longer-lived.
Chronin was effectively an immortal from the moment he reuinited with his mother, all the way to the end of the Everflame II rp.

Fact 2: The zombie you speak of has already been decapitated and mangled by my automated lawn-mower defenses.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on April 29, 2012, 12:55:09 AM
Not you, entaru.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on April 29, 2012, 05:55:49 PM
anyone seen windtail?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on April 29, 2012, 06:40:21 PM
Oh, me?

Sorry... I've had to make some changes, just... let's just forget EVERYTHING I've said about the Army of the Abased. I have a different story for them that will actually fit into RP guidelines.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on April 29, 2012, 07:58:08 PM
ok then
 
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 29, 2012, 08:36:51 PM
Asia, do you have a set idea for how the Chosen and soldiers are trained for combat, or is that still under consideration?

I've nothing solid, but the basics are the use of natural energy. It's kinda like life force but not so tied down. For example chosen take life force from the world in order the strengthen the Queendom by extending the life of key individuals as well as themselves. They also use it to increase their physical abilities, or the presence of the living things around them (making trees grow, disease multiply, whatever.)

All they need is physical contact  or spiritual link (which is hard to attain.)

How you use that is up to you, but dont go crazy.


Post Merge: April 29, 2012, 10:59:37 PM
Will post tomorrow if i am not simply dead from exhaustion. I do try, but should try harder.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on April 30, 2012, 03:26:34 AM
I've nothing solid, but the basics are the use of natural energy. It's kinda like life force but not so tied down. For example chosen take life force from the world in order the strengthen the Queendom by extending the life of key individuals as well as themselves. They also use it to increase their physical abilities, or the presence of the living things around them (making trees grow, disease multiply, whatever.)
In all honesty, I was just asking if Tina City was based on Medieval weaponry and combat, or if hand-to-hand martial arts was the basic training.

You sir, have just enlightened me to the can of worms that I was previously ignorant of.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 30, 2012, 04:16:18 PM
In all honesty, I was just asking if Tina City was based on Medieval weaponry and combat, or if hand-to-hand martial arts was the basic training.

You sir, have just enlightened me to the can of worms that I was previously ignorant of.
Well as i said, don't go crazy with it.

Actual physical combat training is your standard medieval lord of the rings, whatever the flip.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on April 30, 2012, 04:25:08 PM
Asia, do you have a set idea for how the Chosen and soldiers are trained for combat, or is that still under consideration?

I've nothing solid, but the basics are the use of natural energy. It's kinda like life force but not so tied down. For example chosen take life force from the world in order the strengthen the Queendom by extending the life of key individuals as well as themselves. They also use it to increase their physical abilities, or the presence of the living things around them (making trees grow, disease multiply, whatever.)

All they need is physical contact  or spiritual link (which is hard to attain.)

How you use that is up to you, but dont go crazy.

 

Post Merge: April 29, 2012, 10:59:37 PM

Will post tomorrow if i am not simply dead from exhaustion. I do try, but should try harder.

will everyone have acess to these powers?
 
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on April 30, 2012, 07:35:20 PM
 @.@
Okay, I'm totally lost... Wait... nope, I've got it... sort of... yeah.

So to restate Whitewolf's question, will everyone have access to these powers?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on April 30, 2012, 09:47:10 PM
nope, only the chosen. Read the original post if you want to know about that.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on April 30, 2012, 10:10:57 PM
From Everflame two, it does note that Leo has some security training after the risk of Space Pirates suddenly became to high for him to fully place his life on the security team. But that is mostly limited to  basic close quarters, and basic gun training.


Soooo.... oh so screwed... screwed screwed screwed XD.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on April 30, 2012, 10:32:21 PM
With my set-up, I can go on a killing spree in Tina City for about 2 or 3 posts, but by the 4th post, I'm facing several Chosen as well as 30+ guards. I would have to run for my life to keep playing my character, because doing the same strategy against guards and their elite counter-parts would get my character killed after the second post.

But I can't even start a killing spree because it is not only tasteless, but it is horribly out of character...


Post Merge: April 30, 2012, 11:04:36 PM
I believe I am having too much fun with the back-story between Talin and Queen Tizzarath.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 02, 2012, 10:13:57 AM
Quote
Swinging his gnarled claw to point outside the city he let out an insane cackle. "My angels!  Forward MARCH!!"


Red Alert 2 Hell March, anyone?   :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 02, 2012, 03:39:02 PM
Quote
Swinging his gnarled claw to point outside the city he let out an insane cackle. "My angels!  Forward MARCH!!"


Red Alert 2 Hell March, anyone?   :P
Don't mind if I do (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9WqwFhX6Cqg#)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on May 02, 2012, 10:47:26 PM
^comedy hour again, huh? Sweet.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on May 03, 2012, 04:43:34 AM
AWWWW HELL YEAH!!!   >:3  Perfection....
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on May 03, 2012, 09:43:27 PM
Who needs a killing spree, when you can get killtastic? Or make the announcer guy say "Holy ****!"
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 09, 2012, 10:16:17 PM
Will post up tomorrow   :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on May 10, 2012, 01:10:35 PM
so when do we actualy start traveling? no offense but ive been in this rp for a bit and have yet to see any action....
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on May 10, 2012, 02:59:04 PM
so when do we actualy start traveling? no offense but ive been in this rp for a bit and have yet to see any action....
You start traveling when your character's get off their butts and start moving, it's really just that simple.

Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 10, 2012, 05:48:05 PM
Also, you guys (whitewolf and cifero) tend to make ridiculously short posts of sometimes only one sentence of speach... I don know about everyone else and Asia, but I tend to expect semi-decent posts in a serious RP that tell a story without a constant back and forth of one-liner posts  :/
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on May 10, 2012, 06:31:24 PM
Well, I sometimes have to cut down to about 2 lines when fighting occurs, since there is only so much you can describe in one action.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on May 10, 2012, 07:34:52 PM
ok i'll try to do better in the future.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 13, 2012, 05:55:26 PM
cifero, if wanna say what a tremor serpent looks like (i'm guessing the monsters from the film Tremors.) You could just tell him straight up. Also, keep OOC requests in the OOC thread. that's what it's there for.

And yes while i dont mind smaller posts in more intensive scenes, what's happening right now could be dealt with in about 3/4 larger posts. This isn't an irc roleplay, so treat it like you're writing a story. This isn't a command though, most just a suggestion that may help the whole framework.

As for the request for more action, i could totally bring it to you guys, but cifero seems to have things in mind, what with these tremor serpents.

as for me, i shall post soon. probably tomorrow.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on May 13, 2012, 06:58:19 PM
cifero, if wanna say what a tremor serpent looks like (i'm guessing the monsters from the film Tremors.) You could just tell him straight up. Also, keep OOC requests in the OOC thread. that's what it's there for.

And yes while i dont mind smaller posts in more intensive scenes, what's happening right now could be dealt with in about 3/4 larger posts. This isn't an irc roleplay, so treat it like you're writing a story. This isn't a command though, most just a suggestion that may help the whole framework.

As for the request for more action, i could totally bring it to you guys, but cifero seems to have things in mind, what with these tremor serpents.

as for me, i shall post soon. probably tomorrow.

The tremor serpent came from the Everflame 2 story, where Tabitha and Chronin were staying off the ground to avoid giant worm-like things.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 14, 2012, 02:26:44 AM
Oh yes, that was on the same planet, wasn't it.

Good memory.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on May 14, 2012, 02:47:39 AM
Actually, I had no idea this was the same planet.

That might change a few things, though the earliest Chronin could arrive, would be entirely dependent on the life-span of the fearsome triffids.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on May 14, 2012, 11:30:44 AM
I'll be posting today
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 26, 2012, 09:58:38 PM
will post in the coming days.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 27, 2012, 10:18:56 AM
will hopefully find the time to post today  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on May 29, 2012, 05:59:05 PM
okay, will post today or tomorrow because i won't be able to post until like... wednesday.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on June 19, 2012, 12:13:01 AM
yiiikes my last post was may 30th? i'm so terribly sorry everyone. i'll post in the next few days
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on June 24, 2012, 01:52:14 AM
Whitewolf, i know this is really slow and late of me, but could you please keep any OOC stuff in the OOC thread, such as these lines:

Quote
he didn't really feel that way about viola(he does not yet)
Quote
as strong as i am, that is impossible for any normal mortal" (not saying i am immortal just that i'm not a NORMAL mortal)
If you want to confirm things with Cifero than do it in this thread, or in a PM

thankyou
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on June 26, 2012, 01:57:13 AM
Sorry about that... I thought since it was just a short side-note
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 06, 2012, 08:26:42 PM
No worries :) as long as you learn :3
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on July 06, 2012, 08:29:18 PM
Whitewolf, reply.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 06, 2012, 08:32:35 PM
Okay since Katie's gone from the forums, Entaru, how you wanna deal with this?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on July 06, 2012, 08:37:57 PM
O.o Katie's gone from the forums?


Anyhow, I'm going to be gone for the week down to cornwall with friends from college... Posting with be limited to occasionally checking via internet on my phone  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on July 07, 2012, 10:25:30 AM
*sighs* I have no idea.....lemme talk to her and you'll know by tomorrow if I remember.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on July 07, 2012, 03:13:46 PM
sorry about the delay, i been sick, and all kinds of stuff.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on July 08, 2012, 11:19:14 PM
Katie's gone? Aw..
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 14, 2012, 04:00:20 AM
aaaaand she's back. But just for this rp
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on July 14, 2012, 06:02:13 PM
Your new Avatar creeps me out Asia...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 14, 2012, 06:39:54 PM
That giant face is also on my Desktop Background, staring at me always.

She's my favourite character from a new webseries, Barbie Life in the Dreamhouse, which is surprisingly awesome.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on July 14, 2012, 06:47:11 PM
I'm back from the coast and have my laptop again for posting  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on July 20, 2012, 03:08:56 AM
I will be absent this Friday and coming weekend, as I will be visiting relatives and all that.
 
 Carry on if I do not post in time...
 
Which would be amazing if this RP actually went that fast in a matter of 3 days.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 22, 2012, 11:55:39 PM
Hehe yes, it would be as a lightning in comparison to the turtle that it has been.

But it continues... slowly... with people leaving. Like Katie. She's gone now properly. Which means, Entaru, plan of action?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on July 23, 2012, 11:23:19 AM
I'm still here, i'm just waiting for whitewolf.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on July 23, 2012, 12:02:54 PM
Well, I am going to be gone from tomorrow until the 8th of August while I am in Slovakia staying with family and friends... As always when I go on holiday there, internet will be very limited to the occasional opportunity on my cousins computer at his flat  :)
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 23, 2012, 08:02:16 PM
Okay, sorry this is so late, but i'm only just really reading the posts now.

Chrono, please refrain from making my characters do things without my permission just to make your character look good.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on July 23, 2012, 10:45:38 PM
I have no idea what to do Asia....we can move along as if her part didn't happen if you want but I honestly don't know
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on July 24, 2012, 03:24:21 AM
Chrono, please refrain from making my characters do things without my permission just to make your character look good.
Yes, bad habit I picked up and currently in the process of breaking...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on July 24, 2012, 07:24:02 PM
Okay, sorry this is so late, but i'm only just really reading the posts now.

Chrono, please refrain from making my characters do things without my permission just to make your character look good.
I believe the term id "power-playing" or "god-modding," if that helps.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on July 24, 2012, 07:33:08 PM
Okay, sorry this is so late, but i'm only just really reading the posts now.

Chrono, please refrain from making my characters do things without my permission just to make your character look good.
I believe the term id "power-playing" or "god-modding," if that helps.

I think 'playing puppeteer' is a more appropriate example of what he was against...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on July 26, 2012, 09:05:20 PM
I'm still here, i'm just waiting for whitewolf.
waiting for what? i thought i was waiting for you? :?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on July 27, 2012, 07:09:13 PM
I have no idea what to do Asia....we can move along as if her part didn't happen if you want but I honestly don't know

Well i can certainly use the character as a kind of holy acolyte, twisted in a similar fashion to Aria, but a kind of... dark Aria.


Okay, sorry this is so late, but i'm only just really reading the posts now.

Chrono, please refrain from making my characters do things without my permission just to make your character look good.
I believe the term id "power-playing" or "god-modding," if that helps.

I think 'playing puppeteer' is a more appropriate example of what he was against...
precisely. I'm against god-modding too (which i've certainly had trouble with in the past.) but yeah, this isn't god-modding, just puppeteering other people's puppets.



I'm still here, i'm just waiting for whitewolf.
waiting for what? i thought i was waiting for you? :?
The amount of times I've had that conversation
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 05, 2012, 05:58:53 PM
I had no idea what I was doing....

so I came up with that.

hope it works
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Entaru on August 05, 2012, 08:02:33 PM
I have no idea what to do Asia....we can move along as if her part didn't happen if you want but I honestly don't know

Well i can certainly use the character as a kind of holy acolyte, twisted in a similar fashion to Aria, but a kind of... dark Aria.

That sounds good to me.  I'm gonna wait to post until I get a response from my new little servant....oh, and feel free to set off my traps any time now.  PM me if you can't remember what I mean.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 05, 2012, 08:19:10 PM

Well i can certainly use the character as a kind of holy acolyte, twisted in a similar fashion to Aria, but a kind of... dark Aria.




(http://alltheragefaces.com/img/faces/png/surprised-gasp.png)

WHAT!
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Chrono Blackwyng on August 05, 2012, 09:18:51 PM

Well i can certainly use the character as a kind of holy acolyte, twisted in a similar fashion to Aria, but a kind of... dark Aria.




(http://alltheragefaces.com/img/faces/png/surprised-gasp.png)

WHAT!
Agreed, since when was Aria ever an acolyte of the Seeker?

Because I've missed that memo ~15 pages ago...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Grace.E on August 05, 2012, 09:56:11 PM
can you show that to me?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: tangletail on August 06, 2012, 07:04:53 PM
If you'd like to take over Leo's on going sanity drop, feel free to.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on August 07, 2012, 04:15:45 PM

Well i can certainly use the character as a kind of holy acolyte, twisted in a similar fashion to Aria, but a kind of... dark Aria.




(http://alltheragefaces.com/img/faces/png/surprised-gasp.png)

WHAT!

Okay, bad choice of words, and certainly nothing definitely pinned down. Just one idea of many that i have for Aria. As with any roleplay, nothing at all is decided yet.





If you'd like to take over Leo's on going sanity drop, feel free to.
He's your character. I can't do that.



I'll post today or tomorrow. Most likely tomorrow.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on August 20, 2012, 01:47:21 PM
Did whitewolf post yet?
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: kivabunny on August 21, 2012, 12:10:42 AM
Yes, july 7th, near the bottom of page 32
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 30, 2012, 10:32:25 PM
I will hopefully post sometime tomorrow... Sorry for taking so long, found out not that long ago that I got into Uni, so things are pretty hectic  :P
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 07, 2012, 02:59:28 PM
I really should post but there's so much going on  x_x I'm really sorry people,  I will post this week... i'll try to.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (New people most definitely welcome)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on October 30, 2012, 04:50:30 PM
OKAY!

This was kinda inevitable.
I do not have the time/effort/inclination to continue this, nor stay on TFF at all, so this is sadly the end of it. Hope you enjoyed it while it lasted.
Particularly people who were there from the first one. Kinda awesome that you kept coming back.

Anyway, see ya. I'll get the main thread locked.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on October 31, 2012, 12:12:03 AM
Awww.... :(


Well.... It was fun while it lasted.

WAIT!!!


Could Whitewolf and I continue? We're not really even part of the story...
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: Entaru on November 05, 2012, 10:02:07 AM
So Nero wins and everyone dies! YAAAAAAYYYY!!  XD
 
Its too bad it had to end like this...cest la vie.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on November 06, 2012, 07:27:57 PM
Awww.... :(


Well.... It was fun while it lasted.

WAIT!!!


Could Whitewolf and I continue? We're not really even part of the story...
Do that in private messages, i suppose.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: Cifero Windtail on November 11, 2012, 08:46:29 PM
 :'( sigh....

ok... thanks.
Title: Re: Everflame: The Shard OOC (Dead)
Post by: kivabunny on January 12, 2013, 07:13:25 PM
i'm still here
blarg
it's dead