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Creative Arts and Media => Artistic Stuff => Topic started by: Random User on September 16, 2010, 02:09:01 AM

Title: Constructive Criticism?
Post by: Random User on September 16, 2010, 02:09:01 AM

Yeah, it's been a long time since I've drawn anything really, and this is probably the first anthro I've actually ever drawn that isn't Yoshi, so I want some constructive criticism on how I drew my fursona, please.

(http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3647/jayhyenasketch.png)

Title: Re: Constructive Criticism?
Post by: Takarah Luna on September 16, 2010, 02:51:19 AM

It looks good... The feet look funny to me... But feet are REALLY HARD to draw   >w<;;

Title: Re: Constructive Criticism?
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 16, 2010, 12:41:41 PM

It's not bad, but try to get some proportions going on. look at the proportions of a human and draw a basic shape that has the right proportions,  before going into a full on drawing.

Title: Re: Constructive Criticism?
Post by: ___ on September 17, 2010, 02:01:30 AM

Yea, the proportions are a bit off on the piece; the body should be like 6 1/2 - 7 heads tall, and the whole character dosn't look like he's facing one way because of the pant's crotch. Ummm... The tail should flow more, like a bunch of fur... That's all I can think of. Its good overall for your first time though. :D