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Title: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Kodachi Devil on September 07, 2010, 08:36:48 PM
Tell me whatcha think! good, bad?
I'd like some comments and critisicm please!

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/250/2/3/ivan_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8nbt.jpg  <--Ivan, drawn for a friend.
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/250/a/3/dante_again_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8niw.jpg <--Dante.
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/250/b/9/ninetails_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8nfi.jpg <--straight outta okami!
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/250/b/9/mao_the_cute_killer_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8n7o.jpg <--mao, my cute neko killer!
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/250/d/b/kyo_with_queens_blade_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8n46.jpg <--Kyo, my first main hero ever made, drawn more better than he was 3 years ago!

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/250/e/6/dante_can_pose_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y8mzz.jpg <--Another Dante
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/248/5/c/dante_original_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y37u2.jpg <--another dante
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/248/3/b/dante_by_himewiththeshotgun-d2y37ak.jpg <--dante with his cool gun!
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: White Wolf Guardian on September 07, 2010, 09:18:43 PM
For the love of anime, make a web comic! All your characters are so adorable D: <3
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on September 08, 2010, 02:02:13 PM
it's not bad at all, some good character designs... but get a scanner :P  but yeah your stuff is prety good, just keep working at it.
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy on September 08, 2010, 05:01:26 PM
yea. aside from getting a scanner and possibly Photoshop, I really don't see anything wrong with your style
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Kodachi Devil on September 12, 2010, 07:48:30 PM
Kee thank you!!!!
Oh oh oh. Uhm. Webcomic. Yeah.
I KINDA TOTALLY FAILED AT MAKING ONE!
So im trying to un-fail. That's hard to do O_o
AND. Scanner-wise.. If I was old enough to get a job, I would already be saving. 3 more months! only threeeeee! Wait two cause it's september.
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 12, 2010, 08:56:53 PM
your drawings are sweet... I personally cant draw anime to save my life  XP

So yeah, just keep posting here... Cos we wanna see more!  :P
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy on September 13, 2010, 01:27:29 PM
Kee thank you!!!!
Oh oh oh. Uhm. Webcomic. Yeah.
I KINDA TOTALLY FAILED AT MAKING ONE!
So im trying to un-fail. That's hard to do O_o
AND. Scanner-wise.. If I was old enough to get a job, I would already be saving. 3 more months! only threeeeee! Wait two cause it's september.

easiest way to start a comic is to just use/draw-in a page with 4-6 frames. I'll show you an example after this weekend when I get back from visiting my family in Chicago. I'm gonna be retrieving most of my portfolios, so I'll show you the transitioning to making your own comic. I've written a couple already, so it's good to see how to progress, and if you put yourself out of practice, how to jump back on your feet.
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Kodachi Devil on September 14, 2010, 08:41:37 PM
oh thank you shinzuu! you're great! *glomps*
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy on September 14, 2010, 11:38:36 PM
sure thing. i'll even scan in some of my other art. (keep in mind, tho, these will be anime-style, all non-furry).

I have plenty for comic making, perspective, medieval, futuristic, mech, magic, almost everything. (INCLUDING COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT!! YAY!!)
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Kodachi Devil on September 15, 2010, 06:18:15 PM
Cool. I do all kinds of stuff too, I was just posting the ones my cousin took pictures of for me. (yes, my cousin used her phone, took pictures, emailed them to me, i then downlaoded them and uploaded them to DA. So much work 0,0)
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: DatFox Coleo on September 15, 2010, 09:04:47 PM
Dante is awesoem o,o
Is he Dante as in Dante's Inferno? (The book)
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy on September 16, 2010, 12:18:11 PM
Cool. I do all kinds of stuff too, I was just posting the ones my cousin took pictures of for me. (yes, my cousin used her phone, took pictures, emailed them to me, i then downlaoded them and uploaded them to DA. So much work 0,0)

yea, I leave for Chicago in a few, so when I get back on Monday, I'll post some.
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Timmy Fox on September 17, 2010, 09:15:02 PM
Not bad, a suggestion could be to use the sketches and artwork u got there and colour them and everything in the computer. I usually do that, but its up to personal preference :3
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy on September 20, 2010, 04:53:13 PM
I just got back, but i won't have any scans in until tomorrow. I'm busy today, so I won't have time for scanning. I'll be sure to post them here first thing.
Title: Re: My characters, some critisicm would be nice.
Post by: Kodachi Devil on September 21, 2010, 08:37:10 PM
cool, cool! Thank you so much :D