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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: WolfCubLorent on April 01, 2010, 01:04:03 PM
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-Gone With Love-
12/14/09 ‘Now I’ll Soon (Eternally) Die’
By: Lorent K. Cub
Now watch as my emotions run wildly through the air, without concern and compiled by abysmal despair.
Now watch as my soul burns silently into the sky, without passion or love it’ll surely die.
I’ll take what’s ever left of me and drowned it into the darkest sea.
I’ll throw away your memory and make it an eternal enemy.
Soon you will feel the tortures pain that was sown into my soul, through my skin.
Soon you will believe that these scars reflect who I decieve, me and myself with this heart-ache as my sin.
Forever will you create immortal chaos and afflict suffering as you emboss me with thoughts of you.
Forever do I incinerate my fragmented heart till an empty body lay with ashes that tears our love apart.
Now watch as my emotions run wildly through the air still lost and compiled by abysmal despair.
Now watch as my soul burns silently into the sky still screaming for love and pleading to die.
Die I must for life has lost its lust, but with strife I still toss the final flip of fate to help me decide.
Die I will for your touch turns cold this heart that I now scold as I exert my torture inside.
This is what I feel and now…soon after my soul will seal and fall down to the ground with a sound that chimes a heavenly chime for me to rest through out all eternity in time.
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It's convoluted, it's confusing and I don't think I'll ever be in the mindset to decipher it. I know it's meant to be obscure and obtuse so maybe that's a success on your part.
There's lots of abstraction, not much concrete imagery. Some find that to be a good thing, but there's nothing to grab hold of.
It's just... a blur to me. I understand what you're saying but it's just kind of amorphous.