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Creative Arts and Media => Serious RP => Roleplay => Serious RP Companion Board => Topic started by: Asia Kali Yusufzai on January 13, 2010, 03:23:41 PM
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Right then, i've participated in quite a few RPs, but this is my first one to instigate and control, hopefully I'll do a cracking job of it.
Everflame is a sci-fi RP in the same kind of thread as Firefly and things like that. The galaxy is under the rule of a single government of allied planets, with the headquarters situated on the Capital Sphere, a mega-ship housing millions in a utopian atmosphere. Even the space around the ship is filled with happiness. Any planet it is near finds increased public well-being, increased production and an explosion of creative endeavour, often kickstarting cultural and technological advancement. Many believe this is due to the impressive nature of the sphere and its people. They are a people to follow and listen to, because they have created such a beautiful society. There's almost a mythic quality surrounding it. Most planets find it hard to live up to that example, and the border worlds dont even try, existing as hives of slums and criminality.
There is a reason for the "too good to be true" nature of the capital sphere, and that is a small enigma known as the everflame. It is a ball of energy encased in glass imbued with a unique element referred to as Evdhemonite. Anyone within its proximity is filled with happiness, so the government placed under heavy protection within the capital sphere, using technology to spread its signal further to encompass the sphere with some less intense effects on nearby planets and craft, all in order to create this utopian society.
However, the Everflame isn't there anymore. It's been stolen by one of the guards and this has thrown the galaxy into chaos. The drop from a life of wonder to a life of reality was too sudden and too great. The spherites are freaking out causing skyrocketing suicide, theft, rape, murder and a climate of intense aggression has replaced the calm. They want to know what's going on, the government are blaming a contaminant purpotrated by the guard, so they are trawling the galaxy destroying everything to find him. Anyone in their way is killed without a second thought, under the force of their righteous fury.
The reason the government keep the everflame secret is so that the other worlds dont feel cheated by the sphere keeping it for themselves and so that there's no major effort from organisations or nations to steal it.
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So that's the tale that has been told and you may create wherever in the universe you wish. I will do whatever I can to fill the world around you and give you interesting things to see and do no matter where you are or what you're doing.
The rules are the usual
-No God-modding
-Wait for others
-No tiny posts
-insta-kills are allowed but are extremely rare, need to be cleared by me first and must never cut someone out of the rp. The one dying needs to consent as well. (For the sake of an engaging tale, dont be afraid to lose a character or two)
-Follow the nature of the society you're in
-Dont be afraid to lose a battle or get arrested or anything like that. A good story needs highs and lows and who knows where those lows will take you.
You can be a citizen of the capital sphere but you must demonstrate the effect you have suffered from the loss of the Everflame.
Oh and you can give the main guy who stole the everflame absolute hell, but no matter what happens, he will be at the end of story and he will have the Everflame with him. That is the only thing that is certain in this tale.
So, character profiles go thusly:
Name:
Age:
Species:
Location: (Refers to location at the start of your entrance into the RP)
Occupation: (Should make sense according to the location, but doesnt have to.)
Weaponry: (Don't go crazy, make it realistic to the location, you're a lot less likely to be armed on the more developed worlds, and a lot less likely to have anything expensive on the border worlds. Capital sphere citizens have been allowed weapons for many years since the Everflame really demonstrated its power, but now that the everflame is gone, people are using the weapons on eachother and there is a major effort by the police force to remove and/or destroy them. The most powerful carryable weapons are all registered under a system that can disable them at any time. However due to lax security, it is surprisingly easy to acquire modified versions that bypass the database. These weapons are also biologically coded so only the owner may use it. Anyone else who tries gets an electric shock, though this can also be bypassed.
As for weapon types, Energy and Ballistic are perfectly acceptable though the likelihood of having these types of weapons depends on the location, e.g. Border Worlds mostly have basic ballistic weaponry.)
Biography: (Should make sense according to location, but doesnt have to.)
Appearance: (Should make sense according location but doesnt have to.)
Oh and remember people, this is a huge spread of planets with different cultures and different styles. Use your imagination.
Oh yeah and if you want, you can take over any character that I create (except the main guy)
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Name: Asia Kali
Age: 30
Species: Lapine
Location: Border World H7XV, aka. Skeeva
Occupation: (Ex.) Guard of the Everflame
Weaponry: A15 E Assault, Miralan 350 E Blaster, Torren E Pistol A (E means these are Energy weapons, all of them are guard issue and have been modified to bypass the database)
Biography: His parents were scientists who travelled the galaxy. They travelled across the galaxy, mostly around the border worlds though their main home was back on the capital sphere. Asia never liked moving constantly so took a job in the Sphere Police Force. He quickly raised through the ranks, reaching the post of Guard of the Everflame. The difference between the Capital Sphere and the border worlds always irked him though the effect of the Everflame pushed it to the back of his mind. Recently however, his parents were killed on one of their expeditions by a local gang. This dragged those ideas of injustice in the galaxy right to the forefront of his mind, hatching a plan to steal the everflame. He was pleased with his plan, and the happiness effect merely boosted this confidence.
Appearance: White fur, long upward pointing ears, Civilian clothes, shirt, jeans, a brimmed hat, thick boots and a leather duster.
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Name: Korius Lambent
Age: 25
Species: Black Wolf
Location: Outer Slums
Occupation: Contract Mercenary
Weaponry: Mainly carries and uses a katana vibro-blade. Carries an ancient, but restored and modified S&W M500 Magnum Revolver (Mod is that it's 8 shots instead of 5)
(http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t64/posko6993/077828237001.jpg)
(http://img.redwolfairsoft.com/upload/product/img/TK-M500ARMS-L.jpg)
Biography: Was born without parents and always lived off the street. Committed his first crime at age 5 and arrested at age 10. Was raised by a mercenary since age 11. Always goes by the warrior code and a fan of classic weapons, hence the sword and millenium old pistol. A very solemn guy and somewhat short-tempered. Always wanted to make his way to the Sphere to get a happy life, but this dream is only second to his dream of more money, though he's already the most expensive mercenary in that side of the system. His honor is his life.
(http://japaneseshodo.com/images/codeth.jpg)
Appearance: Dresses in dark clothes like this:
(http://popularsymbolism.files.wordpress.com/2009/07/re5-albert-wesker2.jpg)
Usually carrying the katana in left hand. Black fur (Obviously), neon-green feline eyes, scars on both eyes, showing that his originals had been cut off (no fur grows on the scars), and black hair with a long, thin pony tail that goes all the way down to his hip.
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Name: Kitt Szarda
Age: 18
Species: Feline
Location: Allied Planet-Tx2 quadrant- 'Coloran'
Occupation: Triffid Guard Enforcer
Weaponry:
Single barreled, large stock magazine fed, multiple ammo, 'Cleaver' class shotgun: designed to be used against triffids, the cleaver has several different ammo types including shrapnell and incendiery, but can also extend to such rarities as EMP shells and acid rounds.
Shock Baton: Again designed for triffid control the shock baton sends a large voltage charge into the target through the metal end of this metre long baton, such a large voltage output requires the baton to recharge for several seconds.
E-Magnum: the forever handy sidearm that never runs out of ammo, weak, innacurate, but with a power cell that recharges using an elctrostatic charge core, the last ditch backup weapon of the millenia.
Biography: Coloran was the planet where a brilliant discovery was made, a discovery that changed the surrounding system, the triffids.
Large plants around two metres high when fully grown, with a fast and lethal sting that can reach several metres, triffids are predatorial, and reproduce at an alarming rate. they are also, Coloran's saviours, and bringers of doom.
Coloran was suffering from lack of fossil fuels, almost all reserves of oil had been used and new supplies from neighbouring planets couldnt be afforded, a native plant species was discovered in the heart of Coloran's rainforest, that, after killing the whole team of scientists, was found to be a perfect source of Bio-fuel... The triffid was taken into captivity and bred asexually to produce generations of the plants, these where then kept in captivity and sapped of oils to be made into fuel...
hurrah! Coloran was saved, all thanks to the new company 'Trif-oil'... they produced bio-fuels for centuries to come, from a source hidden to the public, triffid enforcers where trained if ever there was to be a small outbreak, and the people of Coloran where forever thankfull, if suspiscious....
The came the day, that would change Coloran forever, the day the Everflame was stolen....
With the everflame gone a reporter sneaked into a triffid compound, past the triffid enforcers, to get the scoop of his lifetime.. for with the scource of the galaxy's happiness gone, the public where starting to question, to want to know... where did the fuel come from? he would find out....
That reporter died as soon as he opened the door to the 'breeding area'.... within hours the triffids where out, killing the unsuspecting scientists and triffid guards... the compound had been breached, and most of the guards ran that very moment, with the everflame gone they felt only dispair as they watched the triffids kill their comrades..... Soon the same was happening all over the planet, compunds where breached, either by reporters or angry mobs, only to find they had unleashed a horror of horrors....
Coloran is now overun with the plants, they reproduce so fast that by the time any counter offensive was launched they already outnumbered the Triffid guards by hundreds to one.... The government of the galaxy has issued a planet wide cordon, evacuation is not an option.... it so, that the Triffid guard enforcers now fight a guerilla war, seeking to protect the last remaining civilians, every day a fight for survival in what is quickly becoming a planet sized jungle, where the plants are always hungry....
Kitt is one such Triffid Guard, the last hope of the civilians of Coloran, every day is a struggle, to keep the last civilians and comrades alive...
Appearance: Brown striped fur, short and stocky stature, dark camouflaged kevlar body armour and visor, Triffids almost always aim for the eyes with their sting, so face masks or visors are a nececity....
(http://thestoryofswimwear.files.wordpress.com/2009/04/salwowski_wyndham_thedayofthetriffidshr1.jpg)
triffid
((hows this Asia? ))
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Shinzuu, I love it, also the thing about his eyes is brilliant, start whenever.
Kitt... So you watched Day of the Triffids and loved it so much you applied it here? I love the idea of triffids and all that and I have some ideas of what I could throw at you. My only small problem is that you have nothing to do with the main story in any way, but that's only a small problem and can be circumnavigated, and so the triffids and your people can be a part of the bigger universe.
Start whenever.
I should say that I am looking for people to join with Asia, or atleast have some presence in Skeeva perhaps.
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So you watched Day of the Triffids and loved it so much you applied it here?
hehe >.>
My only small problem is that you have nothing to do with the main story in any way,
i realised this, and that was the only problem i saw with my story, when you say we can circumnavigate it do you mean i wont be having anything to do with your character and will be doing a 'sidestory' ?
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well pretty much anything that happens on your planet will be sidestory, until either you or the triffids or maybe both get off the planet. We'll see how it goes.
You could get another character who isnt on that planet if you want, so you would have 2 stories
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maybe both get off the planet
<.< >.> mwahaha
i dunno about 2 characters though.... i'm not so great at doing multiple characters unfortunately...
anyway.... time to get posting :3
oh, forgot to say, i probably cant post today due to revising for exams tomorrow... and i cant post tomorrow in the morning..... so i'l either post today if i find time... or tomorrow evening...
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As long as you post then all is good
Post Merge: January 13, 2010, 06:58:49 PM
Just making sure that people know that most people dont know of the everflame's existence. Though it makes sense for Shinzuu to know, most people wont.
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Name: Howl
Age: 34
Species: Wolf
Fur color: A mixture of unique colors that form into a grayish tone
Location: Inner City
Occupation: Business Man
Weapons: Combat Knife and Modified Colt 1911a1 (The bullets do much more damage then the regular version, and the amount it holds is increased, all of which is possible by the works of futuristic technology)
Items: Cigs, lighter
Biography: Before the ever-flame was stolen, Howl had been a war veteran with plenty of combat experience, his rank being 1st Lieutenant, and he served as a business man for many companies. He still has his gun at home and keeps it locked up at all times. But after the ever-flame was stolen (He doesn't know of it's existence, but the effects of it is what I'm speaking off), things changed. He had to get his gun modified; kept it on personal lock and carries it for self-protection when he's not at work, when he is, he'll keep it in a secret compartment under his desk.
Appearance: A black suit with a white undershirt and red tie. Black pants and shoes.
(Just a little question, is the weapons ID thing from Metal Gear solid 4? Because I love that game. :3 )
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yea, that is a good game, and no, it's not like the one from MGS 4. those just won't work, period if you're not id'd as the owner. The ones we have in this (as asia explained it anyways) it'll work, but it can be shut down at any time. I only chose the M500 cuz i figured it'd be an old ballistics gun from ancient times, considering the time-frame she's giving, and it's my fav gun next to the 98 berretta.
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Ah....I see. Sounds like a good plan to me.
Hehe, well I love the Beretta, so that's why I chose it. I guess you could say that this M9 is improved with some special bullets so that way it isn't too weak compared to other side-arms that they have in this time period.
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m9 is so 90's though, man. it's like a plastic dart shooter compared to the 98, and a wet firecracker compared to the m500 tanaka.
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Howly, nice character, glad to see it really embedded in the story.
considering the time-frame she's giving
*Looks down jeans*
:o ... NOOOOOOooOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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xD Thanks Asia. :P
Well, I'm not a big fan of having to create new weapons and explaining the whole god-forsaken function of them, it's far too tedious.
But considering that I need to pack some more power, I guess the Colt 1911a1 would be a good choice. Plus, I'm a civilian now, so I can't get the really good pistols.
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point taken, now someone post!
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Right then, i've participated in quite a few RPs, but this is my first one to instigate and control, hopefully I'll do a cracking job of it.
Everflame is a sci-fi RP in the same kind of thread as Firefly and things like that. The galaxy is under the rule of a single government of allied planets, with the headquarters situated on the Capital Sphere, a mega-ship housing millions in a utopian atmosphere. Even the space around the ship is filled with happiness. Any planet it is near finds increased public well-being, increased production and an explosion of creative endeavour, often kickstarting cultural and technological advancement. Many believe this is due to the impressive nature of the sphere and its people. They are a people to follow and listen to, because they have created such a beautiful society. There's almost a mythic quality surrounding it. Most planets find it hard to live up to that example, and the border worlds dont even try, existing as hives of slums and criminality.
There is a reason for the "too good to be true" nature of the capital sphere, and that is a small enigma known as the everflame. It is a ball of energy encased in glass imbued with a unique element referred to as Evdhemonite. Anyone within its proximity is filled with happiness, so the government placed under heavy protection within the capital sphere, using technology to spread its signal further to encompass the sphere with some less intense effects on nearby planets and craft, all in order to create this utopian society.
However, the Everflame isn't there anymore. It's been stolen by one of the guards and this has thrown the galaxy into chaos. The drop from a life of wonder to a life of reality was too sudden and too great. The spherites are freaking out causing skyrocketing suicide, theft, rape, murder and a climate of intense aggression has replaced the calm. They want to know what's going on, the government are blaming a contaminant purpotrated by the guard, so they are trawling the galaxy destroying everything to find him. Anyone in their way is killed without a second thought, under the force of their righteous fury.
The reason the government keep the everflame secret is so that the other worlds dont feel cheated by the sphere keeping it for themselves and so that there's no major effort from organisations or nations to steal it.
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So that's the tale that has been told and you may create wherever in the universe you wish. I will do whatever I can to fill the world around you and give you interesting things to see and do no matter where you are or what you're doing.
The rules are the usual
-No God-modding
-Wait for others
-No tiny posts
-insta-kills are allowed but are extremely rare, need to be cleared by me first and must never cut someone out of the rp. The one dying needs to consent as well. (For the sake of an engaging tale, dont be afraid to lose a character or two)
-Follow the nature of the society you're in
-Dont be afraid to lose a battle or get arrested or anything like that. A good story needs highs and lows and who knows where those lows will take you.
You can be a citizen of the capital sphere but you must demonstrate the effect you have suffered from the loss of the Everflame.
Oh and you can give the main guy who stole the everflame absolute hell, but no matter what happens, he will be at the end of story and he will have the Everflame with him. That is the only thing that is certain in this tale.
So, character profiles go thusly:
Name:
Age:
Species:
Location: (Refers to location at the start of your entrance into the RP)
Occupation: (Should make sense according to the location, but doesnt have to.)
Weaponry: (Don't go crazy, make it realistic to the location, you're a lot less likely to be armed on the more developed worlds, and a lot less likely to have anything expensive on the border worlds. Capital sphere citizens have been allowed weapons for many years since the Everflame really demonstrated its power, but now that the everflame is gone, people are using the weapons on eachother and there is a major effort by the police force to remove and/or destroy them. The most powerful carryable weapons are all registered under a system that can disable them at any time. However due to lax security, it is surprisingly easy to acquire modified versions that bypass the database. These weapons are also biologically coded so only the owner may use it. Anyone else who tries gets an electric shock, though this can also be bypassed.
As for weapon types, Energy and Ballistic are perfectly acceptable though the likelihood of having these types of weapons depends on the location, e.g. Border Worlds mostly have basic ballistic weaponry.)
Biography: (Should make sense according to location, but doesnt have to.)
Appearance: (Should make sense according location but doesnt have to.)
Oh and remember people, this is a huge spread of planets with different cultures and different styles. Use your imagination.
Oh yeah and if you want, you can take over any character that I create (except the main guy)
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Name: Asia Kali
Age: 30
Species: Lapine
Location: Border World H7XV, aka. Skeeva
Occupation: (Ex.) Guard of the Everflame
Weaponry: A15 E Assault, Miralan 350 E Blaster, Torren E Pistol A (E means these are Energy weapons, all of them are guard issue and have been modified to bypass the database)
Biography: His parents were scientists who travelled the galaxy. They travelled across the galaxy, mostly around the border worlds though their main home was back on the capital sphere. Asia never liked moving constantly so took a job in the Sphere Police Force. He quickly raised through the ranks, reaching the post of Guard of the Everflame. The difference between the Capital Sphere and the border worlds always irked him though the effect of the Everflame pushed it to the back of his mind. Recently however, his parents were killed on one of their expeditions by a local gang. This dragged those ideas of injustice in the galaxy right to the forefront of his mind, hatching a plan to steal the everflame. He was pleased with his plan, and the happiness effect merely boosted this confidence.
Appearance: White fur, long upward pointing ears, Civilian clothes, shirt, jeans, a brimmed hat, thick boots and a leather duster.
uhhmmm I never watched Firefly, so how's this work with being close to your character
an associate, hunter?
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idk, i never seen firefly either, so, watevs.
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Howl, there arent exactly slums on the capital sphere. The most slummy of areas are kinda nice. You're not gonna be finding drug dealers or pimps or gangs or anything like that. Just more agitated people in smaller houses with less amenities. There is still serious crime going on, and more reason to commit these crimes in these worse off areas, but you wont see a massive difference.
uhhmmm I never watched Firefly, so how's this work with being close to your character
an associate, hunter?
The only major thing connected to Firefly is the politics and the atmosphere. People act like people and have realistic lives. Basically, just treat it realistically, just like in the modern world... except in space.
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lolzers. i guess that's a good way to look at this.
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Ok howl, I think you're getting a bit confused in terms of space. I'm guessing your latest post refers to you entering the bar that Asia and Korius are in... if so then well.. basically we're halfway across the galaxy from you on a border world. You're on the capital sphere, which is a spaceship, millions of lightyears away... or atleast I thought you were.
If I'm the one confused then say so.
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may i be an associate of the renegade guardsman?
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you talkin about asia's charat?
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Ofcourse you can. I would never have been able to steal such a thing on my own. :D Plus there had to a be a reason to come to such a backwater planet. There's plans to be enacting.
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Ok howl, I think you're getting a bit confused in terms of space. I'm guessing your latest post refers to you entering the bar that Asia and Korius are in... if so then well.. basically we're halfway across the galaxy from you on a border world. You're on the capital sphere, which is a spaceship, millions of lightyears away... or atleast I thought you were.
If I'm the one confused then say so.
Oh, I thought we were all on the same planet. Woops. xD Well, I think there would be some type of city in that area even if it's under-developed, unless it's REALLY low.
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Well then, enact them. I wanna post some more. :P
Post Merge: January 14, 2010, 02:19:22 AM
Ok howl, I think you're getting a bit confused in terms of space. I'm guessing your latest post refers to you entering the bar that Asia and Korius are in... if so then well.. basically we're halfway across the galaxy from you on a border world. You're on the capital sphere, which is a spaceship, millions of lightyears away... or atleast I thought you were.
If I'm the one confused then say so.
Oh, I thought we were all on the same planet. Woops. xD Well, I think there would be some type of city in that area even if it's under-developed, unless it's REALLY low.
We're in the outer slums, think about it.
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Oh, I thought we were all on the same planet. Woops. xD Well, I think there would be some type of city in that area even if it's under-developed, unless it's REALLY low.
There's the initial settlement that still has the original colony ship that first landed over four centuries ago. It isn't an incredible place, just a hub of trade and a moderate residential area. The moons surrounding the planet often have people travelling to it with wares to sell. Other than that, there's a few small towns and a lot of barren desert.
Well then, enact them. I wanna post some more
howl needs to sort himself out. If he's on Skeeva then he needs to do react to the situation. If he's on the capital sphere then I can say what I was gonna say, and continue his story where he is.
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Oh, I thought we were all on the same planet. Woops. xD Well, I think there would be some type of city in that area even if it's under-developed, unless it's REALLY low.
There's the initial settlement that still has the original colony ship that first landed over four centuries ago. It isn't an incredible place, just a hub of trade and a moderate residential area. The moons surrounding the planet often have people travelling to it with wares to sell. Other than that, there's a few small towns and a lot of barren desert.
Well then, enact them. I wanna post some more
howl needs to sort himself out. If he's on Skeeva then he needs to do react to the situation. If he's on the capital sphere then I can say what I was gonna say, and continue his story where he is.
unfortunately, I've already confirmed his presence with us. we can say that he left the planet and that his previous posts are pretenses.
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Or you could just modify your post depending on Howl's decision. He needn't ever exist in that bar. ;)
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k, but that's up to him.
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Well, I wasn't sure if there was an "outer slums" of where we were on the planet. But either way...I guess I should meet up with you guys later, I'll make it a different place I stop at.
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then post yours and i'll mod mine
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three stories at once, this is cool, complex for me but cool. I still have to remember a bunch of stuff to throw in later on.
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yea, and you have to be the one that posts the most, just so this RP continues.
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well thank you for doing that Asia, i realise how hard it must be for you to keep this Rp going and post in accordance with 3 people...
so yeah, thank ye very much :3
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It's a good thing I absolutely love writing stories, and I love the stories I write. :P
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I love the stories that your write, Asia. Considering that I haven't gone to writers college yet, I won't be posting more stories, but your review on my other one made me realize some main errors. :P
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The only thing an education in writing does is create an environment for you to bounce around in. It can't be taught. You can only learn by constantly writing and constantly having that writing critiqued. Trial and Error, essentially.
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Yes, I can understand that, but I want to be able to acquire specific techniques, and a writer's college should help me do that, or help me self teach them.
Post Merge: January 14, 2010, 09:50:01 PM
Anyway....should our stories merge at one point? I mean, they don't have to right away, but a bit farther into the story, we come together from random occurrences and what not. Of course, it can stay separate for as long as you like, I'm just throwing it in there.
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That's what I'm trying to pull together. It wont happen that quickly but it will happen in the build up and if all goes well, it should be pretty cool.
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HOwl, if you want to write better, expand your vocabulary. That is a major thing. Also, I'm not sure if this applies to everyone, and i'm sure it doesn't even work for those who it applies to, but growing up, I've learned how to mimic multiple personalities. To become someone and see everything in a different way. It's a good way to develop characters and the story as it progresses. No one wants to read a story where all the characters sound the same. A tip, read more and remember what you read. I have never been to writing college and the closest thing i have to a writing class is a creative writing class i took senior year of high school. I've been writing stories since 5th grade. Like Asia said, it's trial and error and a lot of critiquing. Though it'll take longer, always think about how it can be improved. My books, Kin Chronicles, is written in four stages. This might help:
Stage 1: Story overlay (mapping. plot. subplot. characters, etc.)
Stage 2: Rough Draft
Stage 3: Final Draft
Stage 4: Final Print (typed up, all prior stages are and must be hand written.)
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Thanks. Yea, I'm new to writing, so I've got A LOT of work to do, but if my good imagination serves me well, and good writers like you and Asia keep on critiquing me, soon I'll have improved my writing significantly.
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so just keep writing, man. Asia and I will back you up, and help you out.
Post Merge: January 15, 2010, 02:19:29 AM
"Lovely bit of J2O if you dont mind,"
lol. did you mean H2O?
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Stage 1: Story overlay (mapping. plot. subplot. characters, etc.)
Stage 2: Rough Draft
Stage 3: Final Draft
Stage 4: Final Print (typed up, all prior stages are and must be hand written.)
For me, stage 1 and 2 blend, and stage 4 doesnt exist. I barely ever write things on paper. It doesnt feel right, plus they get lost and crumpled and my handwriting is terrible.
"Lovely bit of J2O if you dont mind,"
lol. did you mean H2O?
Wrong thread, and I did mean J2O, as in:
(http://bestuff.com/images/images_of_stuff/210x600/j20-6382.jpg)
It's juice.
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never heard of it, where's it from and who sells it?
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According to wikipedia, Made by Britvic, sold in the UK and Ireland.... huh... I guess you wouldn't have heard of it then :P It's very popular over here.
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indeed. you crazy asian... though i'm not one to speak...........
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well i cant post for the rest of tonightand possibly tomorrow as well as i have a stupidly heavy cold and cant concentrate.... g'night lords n' ladies :/
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Awww man, that sucks. Hope you get better soon.
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get well, soon, my friend
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roger that, puss
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asia, you're going to have to give me more to work with than that. I don't like writing less than 3-4 lines.
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ok then, changed it.
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oh... i thought you might just post another, but i guess that workds,too
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those gloves pretty much spell god-mode in my eyes.
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Yea, that destroys the whole weapon locking system, and that is a major part of it.
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yeah it's not allowed. you've essentially become batman mixed with neo. I mean, I'm barely tolerating Korius' PDA... which will be neutered, sorry Shinzuu, but somehow you're able to sift through every file in the universe and find a footnote of one of them in an instant. You'll be identified, your access will be locked out of absolutely everything.
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Really? because i was thinking about having it shot and completely trashed at the next sortie near my ship. I know it's very powerful, and the reason I thought of it in the first place was to emphasize what kind of life Korius came from. I created it with the full intention of destroying it. don't worry about it. before we're off planet, it'll be gone.
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Well, I don't know what to say about the over powered weapons considering my character isn't exactly carrying the best equipment. Anything about my character that is a bit too strong?
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Really? because i was thinking about having it shot and completely trashed at the next sortie near my ship. I know it's very powerful, and the reason I thought of it in the first place was to emphasize what kind of life Korius came from. I created it with the full intention of destroying it. don't worry about it. before we're off planet, it'll be gone.
The actual PDA doesnt matter. He'd still have the influence and ability to access government secrets. He could get another pda, or access a console. I mean, the kind of life he lives, it would seem strange that losing one PDA means that he's completely locked out. That thing could have been shot at any time. What, so he doesnt have a back-up, he doesnt have any sort of contingency plan. That's one major set back. I dont think it makes sense to the character.
Well, I don't know what to say about the over powered weapons considering my character isn't exactly carrying the best equipment. Anything about my character that is a bit too strong?
pff, nah. If anything I think the mentality of your character is rather weak for a veteran soldier. You got the balance right, no worries.
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Ah, his logical isn't fitting. In what way should I shape it? In the sort of stalwart, toughened and aggressive way? Because I've always found that type of thinking a bit too much of a cliche, considering the over-flow of bad action movies/games where the soldiers are a bunch of meat-heads. Every individual has their way of thinking, but I see where your coming from, I guess I should reflect less on myself and more of a different character. When the dialogue gets laid on even thicker for him, I'll make him talk in a more "Military" prospective. Unless you were thinking his mentality should have been more advanced?
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Think about the life that he's lived, and how he should react and learn from that. He should be so scared about hearing about people dying in the snow, even I wouldnt be phased by that. How does he feel going back into a fight? Scared of the fight itself? Hungry for blood? Jaded and dead inside? Think about his life, how has he grown and how does that make him react now?
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Ah....yea, I get it. Thank you. :P
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Really? because i was thinking about having it shot and completely trashed at the next sortie near my ship. I know it's very powerful, and the reason I thought of it in the first place was to emphasize what kind of life Korius came from. I created it with the full intention of destroying it. don't worry about it. before we're off planet, it'll be gone.
The actual PDA doesnt matter. He'd still have the influence and ability to access government secrets. He could get another pda, or access a console. I mean, the kind of life he lives, it would seem strange that losing one PDA means that he's completely locked out. That thing could have been shot at any time. What, so he doesnt have a back-up, he doesnt have any sort of contingency plan. That's one major set back. I dont think it makes sense to the character.
You'll find out what i'm talking about when you see it. And notice how I still don't know any government secrets, just a police database. What i'm trying to say is, that that PDA's access is all on a particular code given only by the government. but like i said, you'll understand once I post it. It'll only sound like a cliche for someone who doesn't really read it.
Post Merge: January 16, 2010, 06:57:10 AM
Howl, like we told you before, you have to think what's logical, not worrying about cliche's and whatnot. however, don't forget that your character was created by YOU and has a UNIQUE characteristic that puts him apart from normal cliche's. try thinking about that.
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Hmm...I'll certainly have to think about all of this on my next couple of posts, because my character is going to have to talk a lot soon. So it's good to get all this information before I truly develop his personality. Thanks again for the critiquing and advice.
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no prob, i just got a lot of talking done on my last post.
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back guys! :3
i took a load of cold-medicine stuff and im feelin' almost perfect after one night of sleep ^_^
also about being overpowered, all Triffid enforcers wear armour, this armour is light and flexible and designed to stop Triffid attacks (vines, visor to stop the sting etc) but gives little to no defence against bullets or energy shots (they give some protection against the flak shell from the cleaver shotguns but other than that nothing)
The cleaver shotgun again is designed for 'enforcing' Triffids, the solid shells could deal good damage against another target, but the flak and shrapnell and inciendary shells really are only powerfull against Triffids or very 'soft' targets....
And also some of the team members carry short range, short burst, flamethrowers for mass Triffid enforcement (but only a few, they are rare)
(http://74.220.207.149/~organizi/wizards-workshop/catalog/images/pigiron/pi_code_pi2_lr.jpg)
An image i found that could resemble Triffid enforcer armour and shotguns :?
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You'll find out what i'm talking about when you see it. And notice how I still don't know any government secrets, just a police database. What i'm trying to say is, that that PDA's access is all on a particular code given only by the government. but like i said, you'll understand once I post it. It'll only sound like a cliche for someone who doesn't really read it.
you know what.... your post actually makes some good sense. Nice.
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told ya.
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Actually, when I was thinking up Vega 12 I thought that the gloves and hat are purely to protect from the radiation. The plants feed on it, though many die due to atmospheric fluxuations or simply too much or too little of the radiation gathering chemical, that's why they're sporadically placed. This protective wear is used to cover exposed areas during very short-term trips out onto the surface. A full body-suit version is used for longer excursions. They cant just have everyone wear them in fear of exhausting resources, and enforced growth invariably produces an inferior plant which has led to major health issues causing a ban on this sort of farming. The threshold of radiation intake between too little and too much, varies from plant to plant and they have yet to discover what determines that. so they have to rely on nature to find that balance, and so the plants are picked wild. Simply breeding a more durable plant or manipulating the genes to create that plant has led to a series of failures as the plants experience rapid growth and die from the lack of radiation. Finding the key is still a mystery, and the one who figures it out will be rich.
When cut from the main plant, leaves have been known to maintain their radiation aborbing properties for a month, but most shrivel up within a week. There are studies that suggest that the more radiation these leaves recieve, the longer they last.
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It's all probably hideously scientifically ridiculous, but that's what I was thinking with the planet.
but anyway, we'll go with triffid killing Kung Fu pandas. It's a cool idea.
And I'll post tomorrow when I wake up
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lol, i totally didn't catch that. Kung fu pandas. XD
Post Merge: January 18, 2010, 03:01:49 AM
and i thought triffids were plants, too. well, at least according to kitt's pic on the ooc.
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They are plants. I just didnt think to put them on Vega, I had other ideas. Doesnt matter now though.
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I never said there were triffids on Vega 12.
Post Merge: January 18, 2010, 01:56:26 PM
WHAT THE CRAP IS A STAMP IN WHICH YOU MENTION!? IT MAKES NO SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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well... like an indent into the ground. like someone had stamp into the ground, leaving a building looking up out of the indent. I really coulda worded it better... but meh...
Last night, I didnt sleep because of bedbugs, but I did manage to figure out how everything ties together in the big finale. Oh and I may PM some people about important things I want from their character. You'll probably enjoy them quite a bit.
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kewl. Oh, and Howl, please put your personal stuff on here. That's what the OOC is for.
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Right, sorry 'bout that.
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Korius took the armour off of Tabby. "That one's a bit too big for you. Here, try this one. It's an impact armour. The plate's not as thick, but it'll protect you better and you'll move better because the impact gel allows the armour to conform to your body's shape."
awwwwwwwwwwww *pouts* you took away her pretty clothes :P
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:( you make me sound like a pedophile.
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Lets try not to jump onto that subject. xD
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:p But just read what he said on his last OOC post. look at what he said!
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hahaha, I didnt mean it like that :P
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so are you going to post, asia?
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It's tiring and I've had a few... exhausting... days. But I'm all good now and the post is there! :)
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good, and here's mine. i wass kinda surprised you posted faster than me
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wont post for the rest of the day as i will be catching up on sleep.
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nighty night
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sorry, asia, but can you give me something more to work with?
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I've given you the entrance. You can go right down into the main complex describing the chaos surrounding as you do so. We gotta get to a landing pad somewhere, We could land on the roof. It's an action/stealth sequence, go crazy.
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*sigh* Ok, i'll see what i can come up with.
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I thought you'd enjoy stretching your writing wings a bit more
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i will. I'll do that when I get home.
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Arms still bound he attempted to reach for his sidearm holstered on his thigh, but the energy rope held him tighter than a Triffid givin' a bear hug and all he could reach was a stick of mint gum..... not what you would call helpfull in an escape situation, yet decidedly fresh and minty, or so claimed the packaging...
boy, you got style. that sentence is wicked
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that is kinda funny.
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thank ye :3
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for those of you who don't know what a troyka is, it's a mounted, armour piercing, double-barrel gattling gun.
(http://s3.amazonaws.com/readers/2009/03/01/troikaturret_1.jpg)
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By the way, Howl's hostility towards Tabby is because of the stress and sadness coming from the death of Leon. Most soldiers can't really control their feelings when it comes to the death of a friend. I'm pretty sure you already know that, but it adds a bit more drama to it, don't you think?
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i thought it was funny. and tabby's not even my character.
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Oh lol.
After watching all those war movies where the soldiers will yell at one another because one of their buddies dies, I would find it fitting.
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Yep, did you like my charat's reaction? Every war movie's got someone like that, too.
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Yes, it was perfect. :D
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wat's the matter, asia? are you bored with everflame already?
Post Merge: January 26, 2010, 02:04:42 PM
:( methinks asia has abandoned us. and we can't move forward without him. :(
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either that or he's busy shinzuu ;)
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I was being eaten alive by insects. My house looked like a warzone after the exterminator came round. I hadn't slept for 42 hours. Sorry for the wait.
Oh yeah and I will never just drop something halfway if others are waiting on me, and I'm really quite proud of this RP. I love the story.
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same, i love this story too :3
and sorry ta hear ya havnt slept for 42 hours, i been sleep deprived before so i know how nasty it can be... sleep well soon! ;)
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Oh i slept last night, that's how I can post now. I slept for 20 hours :P
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O.O holy crap!
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I'm still sleepy :P
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get some friggin' coffee then.
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dont like coffee, it tastes bad.
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i dont drink coffee because me and caffiene dont mix... ;)
oh also... a pic i found on the interwebs that i think is what the Triffid enforcer Soldiers could look like...
(http://www.miniaturewargaming.com/index.php?ACT=34&fid=7&aid=904_KKEe0nsL8xi7FbU32zf5&board_id=1)
equipped with heavy exo-armour, they are really the only ones who survived the Triffid attack, the rest of the military was unprepared and killed off quickly. Automatic carbines allow for suppression fire with inciendary rounds... also equipped with Shock batons they are trained to fight Triffids like no others....
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two questions for asia.
1) How is Tabby such a good shot using the weapon the first time?
2) How did she shoot at all since she was pinned to me in my jacket, arms around my neck and legs around my stomach?
i was confoosed.
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1) This isnt the first time she's used a sniper rifle, even one of that calibre.
2)... Her arms arent pinned to you, she can move them around, and she can pull her gun out from under your jacket... unless her arms ARE pinned to you, which would be something I missed, and would be something kinda silly. Why have her at all if she cant help out?
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situational circumstances. that's all i'm saying
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it is strange that she managed it, but just think about the fact that she did manage it. She was never meant to be normal
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i couldn't understand this part.
Salvus gripped the door handle, pulling it open as steam hissed off the edges. It wasn't half way a blast burst through, ripping open the door, sending shrapnel flying along with Salvus' body, which thudded into the snow, painting red in the blizzard.
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changed... better?
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sorry for not being on for the past couple of days, lads. i've had to go back home to help my cousin. if i dont post today, i will tomorrow
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sorry for posting in a while... school work and friends have made sure i havnt been able to get on often, and never for very long...
well yeah, im back to regular ish posting :3
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helloooo? anyone there? :?
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I'm waiting for something I can work with.
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well say so then :3
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Howl, you coming back to us? Kitt should be back from Slovakia at the end of the week.
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Oh yes, I'ma coming. Just get the battle started and I will be joining in. But I usually reply a bit later due to school, so don't get too deep into the fight without me.
And Kitt told me he was going to Slovakia for his celebration, I need to see what Eastern European food tastes like.....whatever. :P
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I know, he said he'll be back a week from sunday. The one starting the fight is Asia. I'm just getting my ship.
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hai, i posted from my cousins cimputer... darn slovakian keyboards! >:( ... anyway, chances are i might not be able to post actually on Sunday, i get back late at night, and monday i got school :(
but yeah, havin' an awesome time... and Eastern European food tastes good howl ;)
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Well, mail some food to me through UPS...wait...never mind. I think it wouldn't be good by then. xD I think I'll just stick to my Italian diet. :P
Sorry to hear that your having a hard time with your keyboard man, hope to have you back soon, Kitt. :D
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I love both foods
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conveniently placed chest high walls? What are we playing, Gears of War?
kidding :P
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?? wat? lolz?
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That's exactly what I was thinking when I posted it, but hey, building depress always lands down into chest high walls.
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hey asia, aren't we already on serra draconis?
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no, we're on G7, aka Raven's Nest. Kitt is on Serra Draconis. We are heading there because of the science facilities that have no qualms with the suspicious and possibly illegal.
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ah, kk
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do you lot need more from my post to work with? i like momentum and I wanna make sure we get to Serra Draconis around the time Kitt gets back from his fun
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I am back :o
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lolz, sorry, i didn't see a post.
Don't worry, Kitt, you didn't miss much
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I am back :o
ahhh nuts...
...err... good to have you back, Kitt! :D
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xP
my timing is annoying like that ;)....
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Hehe...well, either way, it's a pleasure to have you back, Kitt! :D
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will post in both sides of the story... tomorrow
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You lazy bum!!!!
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very true! but I shall rectify this. Soon I shall focus my life on my work for the next four weeks. my work includes roleplays, so I won't be so lethargic with my replies.
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no i just think you're lethargic in general.
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Well, let's just be thankful that he took the time to make this RP. It certainly has been a fun one.
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no i just think you're lethargic in general.
very true :P
Well, let's just be thankful that he took the time to make this RP. It certainly has been a fun one.
thankyou very much. It's always great my work is appreciated.
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howl says that as if the rp finally died. or at least like you died, asia
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the past tense is such a dangerous tool. Secretly complex, yet used like water.
Post Merge: February 23, 2010, 11:19:36 PM
i'll wait for howl to post
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I used past tense in my sentence to refer to the Nostalgic moments of Asia's RP. Not saying that it's dead, just looking back on what we've posted.
And this RP will not just simply die out! It will be finished properly, with there actually being some sort of conclusion! Come to think of it, I haven't seen one RP that concluded with THE END or something like that...do they just die out too quickly?
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will post when i get back to my uni home.
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ok... i think Howl should post right now, cus I dont want him left behind.
i havent replied to Kitt just to hold back his storyline so the other one can catch up.
if there is any problem, seriously, tell me immediately, no matter how small.
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actually, I've been waiting for him as well, before I post more
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Sorry for my absence, my school work has been a HUGE pain.
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i was gonna ask since i saw your post on plagued reality.
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THANK THE ALMIGHTY! 0:)
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*mighty hand glomps the asiabunny*
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mighty glomping feels good :P
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*bends over and releases the Mighty Fart*
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Mighty farting feels mighty good.
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waiting for Howl.
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Um...I think I stopped in at the wrong tim- *Starts to cough* God, that smells bad. What did you guys eat, beans and milk with a side of broccoli?!
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I had sushi!! :D
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Thank goodness we have some flow again
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i know
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Asia, could I play Kate as my main character in the rp? I'd keep Kitt as a close second character, but i feel like ive got more to work with Kate and more of a good character... would that be alright with you? :?
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Sure, that's fine. Personally I see you character as being the whole squad, with Kate as its head.
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Neat idea Asia :3
and can i say i am thoroughly enjoying your RP that you've made ^_^
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Thankyou very much, I try my best. Glad to see it's working
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Once again, sorry for not getting online. I said to Asia before that I would be on every other day, but that is not really the case anymore. I will be on and off depending on the availability of my computer.
To address that matter at hand: Shinzuu, you can't just take a leg sweep and still stand up, you would have had to jumped up to dodge it.
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Howl, I can't keep waiting for you. the last time you posted was like 4-5 days ago. If you can't commit i might have to take over your character. I mean there's only three player characters in this roleplay not including me, but it's not fair to make everyone else wait up to a week for you to post.
I mean ofcourse I offer up to everyone's opinion because everyone is involved in this.
so Kitt and Shinzuu, do you think we should keep waiting for Howl?
and Howl, do you think there will be any sort of rise in the frequency of your posts, anytime soon?
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The pace does depend partially on me, so I will try my best to get multiple posts in everyday.
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why didn't you post today?
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If he doesn't post in the next two days, he's out. I'll deal with his character.
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Thank you, Asia.
And Shinzuu, I didn't post because I don't know how you could take a full leg sweep and still stand...but, I'm in no position to argue posts.
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Thank you, Asia.
And Shinzuu, I didn't post because I don't know how you could take a full leg sweep and still stand...but, I'm in no position to argue posts.
a sweep is only as good as the defense against it. Most martial artists stand with their feet and legs angled outward, and partially bent. Sweeping is most effective against someone who's either unprepared, of a style that doesn't incorporate that general stance, a clumsy person, or in mid-fighting, that requires the other person to be not be as attentive (i.e. faster fighting. Multi-person fighting actually heightens one's awareness.)
Don't mean to sound like a douche in any way.
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Alright then, I'm just saying that it usually works in the movies, other then that, my material arts skills don't reach too far.
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Just as long as this RP keeps trundling on, we'll be ok kids
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Alright then, I'm just saying that it usually works in the movies, other then that, my material arts skills don't reach too far.
sorry, I just sometimes get a little personal when it comes to the subject of martial arts. i don't mean to bash on you or anything.
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You didn't bash at all, but thank you for clearing all of this up. :P
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i love you guys. :3
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Thank you! :D
Funny how your title says "Loveable Lion", too. xD
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Shinzuu... the loveable lion :P
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Too ill, can't think, won't post until better... or atleast after my assignment is in... which is friday.
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stop drinking!!
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I've got to go to Naples, Florida for spring break tomorrow. I will be gone until Saturday. If I get on, it'll be for a short time, but I'll try to post while there.
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ok but dont make holidaying to florida a habit :P
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Hehe, don't worry, it's just to visit my grandfather. :P
Though I would like to go there more often. xD
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crazyness in crazy town, will post when i can... probably later tonight or tomorrow.
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Asia lies! I reckon you've been traveling britain, going to the most wildest parties ever! :3
Anyhow, glad your gonna post soon :P
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Asia, just tell us what the wreckage is. I can't do diddly squat until you do.
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Yes, please. We need to be able to move the rp along, or at least keep it up from going dead until your back.
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Unfortunately, I have absolutely nothing to work with, as Asia said he had his own agenda with this wreckage.
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I can't tell you why there is a wreckage, though maybe a few actions and reactions would be nice. I mean when someone stops talking midsentence and starts quivering and his eyes glaze over, somebody should react to that, right?
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Ah, very good reaction, Asia, it was perfect. :P
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Dear god, I hope Tabby doesn't go through my room. XD
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Sweet Jesus, she did! xD
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Oh, good. She only found my tranquilizers. *Phew!
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ok where the heck is Howl? I'm waiting for him
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idk I'm waiting for both of you...
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My internet is REALLY screwed up and I can only get on if it stays on for about a minute, I'll try to fix it soon, but right now, it's impossible to get online before it times out. Sorry guys, but I can't formulate a post before it disconnects.
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ok, howl I can't keep waiting for your seemingly endless issues. I call vote,
Kitt, Shinzuu, should i just commandeer Howl's character until he gets he can properly post regularly?
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yes please.
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yuppers, it would keep the rp rolling :P
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Ok then, Howl is now mine for the foreseeable future... or until Howl fixes his biz.
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just try to stay in character, that's all I ask.
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do you expect any less of me? :P
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Yo Shinzuu! Where you at, dawg?
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what? did you post?
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i posted like three times, keep up man. :P
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i posted like three times, keep up man. :P
it didn't show up in my unread list.
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waiting on you, shinzuu
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you give me nothing to work with, Asia.
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very well then, shinzuu
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I wont be on for the next day or so. It's absolute crunch time in terms of my assignments. The deadline is tomorrow, so I'm gonna go to sleep now, wake up at about 12 pm and work for around 24 hours. I'll post once all that has blown over.
Wish me luck and peace be upon you both.
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Shinzuu, allow me to quote you:
Korius jumped down and landed between Tabby and Afgha, separating them
Assuming this is a normal catwalk and is therefore narrow, there's only two ways to go. Towards Asia and the machine, or towards the door.
As far as I see it this was the layout
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Asia... Tabby...............Korius.....................................................Afgha............... ........................................
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You then did this:
He planted his feet at the edge of the catwalk and jumped over Afgha
which would make the layout to be this:
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Asia... Tabby..................Afgha......................Korius....................................
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and therefore he doesn't need to pass you by.
Also I am one to forgive little leaps of impossibility. many times I have let you play superhero, considering that you ripped Afgha's arm off. Assuming Korius is a superassassin (which i still see as rather overpowered), your actions are completely plausible, but only if it's just the arm. You did not take into account the armoured body enhancement suit that Afgha is wearing. You would not only have to have the strength to tear up a super enhanced arm, but also be able to tear off the arm of the body suit itself, whose integrity is not affected by the arm being twisted and broken. You are not the hulk.
I can give plenty other examples.
Don't complain unless you want me to clamp down on all the things you do that defy logic.
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You know what, I should have done this from the very beginning (i guess it's a live and learn mistake from this being my first RP,) Shinzuu, pull your guy's powers back. I won't allow your superhero stuff anymore. Korius cannot be as fast, as strong (at some points stronger), or as agile as a supersuit military bunny.
I will allow Ironman, I will not allow Superman.
change your last post to suit these modifications.
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ah, i was actually thinking that tabby was the one closer to Asia, not Afgha. and your post still says that you got from Tabby to Asia without passing me by.
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wait... what? that doesn't make any sense. Tabby was closer to Asia. She was right next to him. See in the layout? The lines represent the edges of the catwalk. It's a top down view...
I'll draw a side view
(http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/scumlander/Untitled-1-21.jpg)
See Asia's at the laptop on the edge. Then tabby is next to him, then it's Korius, then it's afgha
but then korius jumped over afgha
so then afgha is next to tabby because korius had jumped over to the other side, which meant that afgha didnt have to pass korius to get to tabby.
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the wondrous uses of paint.exe :P
that actually really helped me understand what was going on in those last coupla scenes :D
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XD. Well, I did what I could to change it.
Post Merge: May 06, 2010, 04:38:16 PM
Should I beat Afgha with his own arm, too?
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This RP looks nice, i will need to read up on the story so far though (unless someone wants to summarize? :D) mind if I join in?
Name: Aarek
age: 33
Species: Silver fox
Location: Border world (dont know any names to put here so....)
Occupation: Infamous thief/assassin of many of the border planets.
Weaponry: Katana, two daggers in the slots on his belt, various poisons attached to his belt, and a ballistic assault rifle with red dot scope. all are almost always on his person.
Biography: Orphan at birth, he lived as a street rat, causing trouble, stealing from poor merchants and he was part of one of the local gangs at a early age. He became very popular among the gang and soon reached second in command. He started his job as an assassin at age 23 and was known all around the border worlds as "The Shadow" because of his stealth and speed. He earned a good amount of money by eliminating targets and stealing from rich icons and celebrities of all the worlds. He had always dreamed of having the Everflame, he always thought of how much people would pay to have it back, all the planets would give their treasures to him. Still to him it is just a dream, but he doesn't know what kind of trouble he is going to get himself into this time.
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This RP looks nice, i will need to read up on the story so far though (unless someone wants to summarize? :D) mind if I join in?
Name: Aarek
age: 33
Species: Silver fox
Location: Border world (dont know any names to put here so....)
Occupation: Infamous thief/assassin of many of the border planets.
Weaponry: Katana, two daggers in the slots on his belt, various poisons attached to his belt, and a ballistic assault rifle with red dot scope. all are almost always on his person.
Biography: Orphan at birth, he lived as a street rat, causing trouble, stealing from poor merchants and he was part of one of the local gangs at a early age. He became very popular among the gang and soon reached second in command. He started his job as an assassin at age 23 and was known all around the border worlds as "The Shadow" because of his stealth and speed. He earned a good amount of money by eliminating targets and stealing from rich icons and celebrities of all the worlds. He had always dreamed of having the Everflame, he always thought of how much people would pay to have it back, all the planets would give their treasures to him. Still to him it is just a dream, but he doesn't know what kind of trouble he is going to get himself into this time.
I can tell you that your character won't survive with those primitive weapons.
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as opposed to Korius? with his "ancient" weapons. plus, I like the poisons thing. I'll let you in, Ukko, but there are two problems.
1. you shouldn't know what the everflame is or even that it exists
2. the rp is close to ending. You can join if you can slot your character into one of the other stories that are all happening on and around a remote planet called Serra Draconis, or you can take control of one of the characters that already exist. Your character could have been captured and is being held on the GA Demolition which is where Kitt is, and he's freeing prisoners.
You CAN hold off from doing this rp for now, I'll be doing a follow up RP a little while after this one ends, and you can join then.
it's your choice.
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Korius' one REAL ancient weapon is the Katana, but it's a modern version of a vibroblade. ah and didn't notice the rifle
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I'll be doing a follow up RP a little while after this one ends, and you can join then
:o woot :P
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Mmk... i guess ill join the follow up.
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Shinzuu, waiting on you.
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I'm sorry, did you post?
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Uh, yeah... Asia posted, then i did just after him... he did a joint post i think with half of it for your side of the story :P
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shiiiiinzuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
where aaaaaaaaaare youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?
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kill me, giving you the PDA and the auto tracking to get the stealth streamer.
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you're jumping ship? Dang it. This RP is dismantling itself from the ground up. The only one left is Kitt, and I've half a mind to pronounce this RP dead.
So Kitt, you willing to keep going?
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sorry, but my character's already lost his purpose. I have no problem with jumping back in for the sequel, but at this point, it seems that the story's at a close. so maybe don't kill me, but make it seem like i died, but i'll re-emerge at the sequel RP. Might make it more interesting.
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Well i'd be happy to bring the rp to an end... but only if you are too.... I reckon if you do a sequel to this rp you should get quite a few people interested ;)
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alright then, but my optimism about the sequel has waned.
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That's a shame, cos i hate seeing a good rp start to break apart..... seriously, i reckon if you do a sequel you'l get more people interested.... you make, and maintain good rp's Asia :P
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I do good work at 3am
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And so ends the tale of the Everflame.
Thanks to Howl, Shinzuu, and especially you, Kitt. I couldn't have asked for a better RPer
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:o
That is the first time i've ever finished a RP from start to finish ^_^
And no problem, it was good fun RPin' with ya right up to the end :P