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Creative Arts and Media => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 02:01:02 AM

Title: darkness takes over
Post by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 02:01:02 AM

the feeble words of one who is evil takes a sword and smites thee with the verble power to kill one's good beliefs.
*sits in a chair tail penetrating the back* let me start a story of heroism and truth, murder, and adventure

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 02:51:11 AM

You got me hooked.

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:02:24 AM

lol ok...i just don't know what comes next  :P

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:03:35 AM

Hmm, well who's point of view are you telling it from? Or is it a mixed POV story?

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:04:42 AM

mixed kindy i made it so it be mixified

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:08:45 AM

Alright, so what kind of time period are we talking about? It sounds like medieval ages, so two warring clans, both view the other as evil, and themselves as good, when they both are only middleground? Sound plausible? I don't know, I'm just here to help.

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:12:47 AM

lol yer medieval, things like that yer. when im not tired i'll think better   :)

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Kindran Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:14:39 AM

haha you ish a funny tigah! I am tired too but I have insomnia. Hmmmm, let us think............

Title: Re: darkness takes over
Post by: Niala Ornitier on December 17, 2009, 03:16:34 AM

5 more months plz...*starts snoring*  -.-