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Title: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 03, 2014, 04:55:59 PM
here is just some of a book i am writing


Saphira heard a noise outside the the warehouse he had to go to it was the third time in the last 3 months since he had turned into a dragon 3 months since he had become a thing in the media 3 months since the police and scientists had tried to capture and study him 3 months since he had lost his whole world. Saphira looked outside darn the media was here how did they know where he was he though to himself might it be that tag they had shot at him?.


i am not going to reveal more at this time because i want to go over a few more things with some people


i just noticed the title as well its meant to be saphiras fight
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 06:23:18 PM
I like a book that involves a misunderstood being. Makes way for drama, action, possibly a little bit of romance and maybe some humor. In other words, this book of yours sounds like it would be interesting to read. In my opinion.
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Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 06:26:47 PM
why thanks
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Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 06:28:20 PM
You're welcome.


Also, what really compelled me to reply this is the amount of relation it has to a story I've made up in my mind a few months back.
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Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 06:31:26 PM
yep this is just based of  what i have gone through
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Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 06:36:56 PM
Really? That's a sad thing to hear from someone writing a book like this.


 Good luck in life.
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Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 06:42:15 PM
its fine its just what i started doing one night on my pc and now its not gotten far because of life
its motly based around my time at school and that and it was thanks to someone here on the forums that would love to see the what would you do if you woke up one day as ur fursona thing
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 06:56:34 PM
Well, my story is mostly based off of my school life too now that I gave it some thought because mines involve a raptor being transferred to a different laboratory (Me moving from Kansas to Virgina) In this lab, things are different as the scientist there treated him as if he was expected to do things right or be punished with excruciating pain and treat him as if he was lower than them all. (Teachers in my school were just plain mean and not the nicest people. Also, I was bullied.)


And basically, there is more to it, but I want to keep it vague.
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 06:57:57 PM
mines about the same altho i am trying to  evide ppl when i do some more u will find out
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Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 06:59:13 PM
Alright then, I'll be sure to read it if it ever gets published somewhere.
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 07:00:30 PM
ok thanks thats if i even get more done
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Post by: Magical Machine on July 07, 2014, 07:04:01 PM
Just to let you know, I have confidence, in you, that you'll be able to do at least a chapter.
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Post by: saph the sergal on July 07, 2014, 07:04:37 PM
yep i know i hope i can do a chapter fully soon
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 14, 2014, 03:50:47 AM
more of my book hehehe




Saphira had tried to remove it before but it hurt to much he had thought of burning it but that would also burn himself. what could he do to remove it he couldn't return home because he knew that there would be people in his street that would call the police again and this time they knew that they would have to knock him out to preform tests on the dragon to see if they could take the dna and use it in humans for combat reasons or take some scales to test the ability of making a exoskeleton that’s immune to fire and other numerous dangers that one can face for the time now Saphira had to get out of the warehouse he was in trouble was the only door leading out was blocked by the media "i have to get out now" Saphira told himself "i might have to wait this out" but he knew that the police would be on the way.


more to be reviled soon

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Post by: Zephyr on July 14, 2014, 04:08:12 PM
This is pretty good  ^_^
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Post by: saph the sergal on July 14, 2014, 04:45:51 PM
thanks zephyr
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 23, 2014, 08:52:30 AM
more story for yall


Saphira spotted a window that he could break and use to escape "better then nothing i guess" he said to himself. As Saphira got ready to leap out the window he heard the door get knocked in and the police called out 'we know you are here don't try anything' DARN Saphira leaped out the window and flew off before the police knew it 'that was a close one' he thought to himself now to get rid of this tracker. Saphira sometimes wondered if there were others like him in the world that could help him but for now saphira had to find somewhere to sleep he had to find food and water because he had to leave his last catch in the warehouse that he called home for a few weeks it seemed that they left him alone for a month and then they tried to catch him.
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 29, 2014, 09:11:05 PM
i need to get back to doing this i need ideas tell me what you can think of


 Saphira could fly for days without any thing but it had been 2 days since he had last seen any water 2 weeks since it had last rained saphira knew he could not go on without water. saphira thought about the beach but he knew that would come at a major risk of being found and captured he also knew that if he tried any of the taps at a house that there would be a risk but saphira was in need he decided to take a risk and try the school he went to because he knew after a huge amount of rain the rain water tanks would be full and saphira also knew that there would be less of a risk if he tried the ones near the back.
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Post by: Lacrymosa on July 29, 2014, 11:04:53 PM
Where did you get the name Saphira? It reminds me of the eragon books.
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Post by: aperson1 on July 30, 2014, 01:32:07 AM
Where did you get the name Saphira? It reminds me of the eragon books.

That's where it's from. XD
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: Lacrymosa on July 30, 2014, 08:32:40 AM
But in this story Saphira is used as a male name.
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 30, 2014, 08:34:39 AM
yea so what and if you are wondering where i go the idea its right here in this thread


http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=19759.0 (http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=19759.0)
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: Lacrymosa on July 30, 2014, 11:47:48 AM
Yeah, I posted in that thread too! And I was just wondering if that might lead to confusion because Saphira sounds like a feminine name to most people. But as long has "he" and "him" are used as prepostitions like you are doing it would bother nobody!
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on July 30, 2014, 12:42:04 PM
well the idea behind my book came from someone on that thread that i have to find the name of
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on August 11, 2014, 02:28:57 AM
heres the last of chapter 1 i am thinking of where to set the second one feel free to drop any ideas


Saphira started his way to the school hoping that he could have a drink there and knowing that there would be no one there he knew his luck might be good. When Saphira landed at the rain water tanks they were full 'thank god' he thought to himself at last the first drink he had in the last 2 days. As saphira was drinking he heard a noise in the bush 'just a snake or a bird' he thought but it was really a human trying to capture him saphira soon got the secnt and took flight before the human had a chance to take aim but he was to late he felt something stick in his side "oh great" he said to himself as he looked for somewhere to hide and not be moved easly as saphira looked around he started feeling sleepy it was a tranquliser dart that had hit him. Saphira soon spotted a deep part of a forest that was heavly densed and knew it would take anyone days to get to him and by then he hoped the tranquliser had worn off.
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on August 11, 2014, 11:00:02 PM
as saphira was taken back to his holding place he saw a blue fox being held in the same block as him 




am i spoiling someone on the forums joining the book i might be or i might not you all have to wait to find out MUHAHAHAHA

EDIT: I will now be sending out zip folders to those wanting it
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on September 23, 2014, 05:41:43 PM
heres chapter 2 so far




Saphira woke up in a wihte room 'where am i' he asked himself as he looked around he found it was big engouh for him to move around and there was water and some food left for  him and there was a locked door "i might aswell go back to sleep" he said to himself and as he started to fall asleep he heard a howling outside and when he got up to look he saw a blue fox being taken down the hallway and put into a room just like his "oh no they got me" saphira said to himsef but who were they he would soon find out that he had been found and taken to a testing place somewhere in england and the tracker was really making him need to do stuff untill he was tired and fell asleep so they could move him and fly him to be tested on when saphira woke up he heard his door opening and got ready to hurt who ever it was coming through the door it turned out to be someone bringing him more food 'just as i was starting to need food' so he didnt hurt they guy but he made sure to growl at the guard to show that he wasnt happy about any of this the guard just smiled and left 'silly person i will get out of here soon and burn the place to the ground' but as he said that to himself he felt a heavy wheight around his body and he found his wings tied to him with heavy chains 'hmm i need to get this off' and as he thought that they came in to take him from his room "come on lets go" the guard said. As saphira was taken to be tested on he happened to look into the blue foxs room and he saw the fox shaking and half his fur missing as part of a experiment a guard hit saphira 'move on' he said and saphira did as he was told the gaurds led him to a room and tied him down and they left. As saphira looked around a person walked in and started to poke him with mutiple needles taking blood and injecting him with random chemicals that made him feel sick and drosy at the same time. When the person was done the guards walked in and started to untie saphira 'now i hit back' he thought and saphira hit one of the guards kncoking him to the ground the other guard fired something into saphiras neck and he fell down' darn dragon' is the last thing saphira  heard before he fell asleep. WHen saphria woke up in his cell he felt like he couldnt move it was like he had been tied down to the floor but acutly what they had been injecting was mucsle relaxents so he couldnt move and they had untied his wings aswell 'they could have atleast made me be able to get to my food' he grumbled and as he saphria said that the guards threw the blue fox he had seen in the hall into saphiras cell saphiras heart went out to the poor fox and he pulled over and started to curl around the fox but the fox jumped away so saphira said 'come on i wont hurt you i will protect you' 'ok' said the blue fox and layed down in the small gap that saphira hade made 'whats your name mine is saphira' the blue fox replyed with 'm-my name is zephyr' nice to met you zephyr said saphria asked 'do you know where we are' asked saphira zephyr responded with' a testing lab somewhere in england ' oh god i am so far from home said saphira 'wahts wrong' asked zephyr "well i was in australia but they must have knocked me out and brought me here to be tested on" oh said zephyr
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Post by: Dakotah Bill on December 09, 2014, 04:28:36 AM
Its good, I have been working on a story about myself as a dragon as well but, well, it sucks.
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Post by: saph the sergal on January 10, 2015, 03:38:42 PM
if anyone wants to know whey i havent updated this till now i cant find my book edits folder i just had to do a windows reinstall and added a 1tb hard drive and i might be getting a nas soon so that will add time to finding it and have more files to look for and search so just wait please
Title: Re: Sapiras fight
Post by: saph the sergal on May 21, 2015, 03:07:37 PM
im amazed i left this so long :$


will get back to writing it some day
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Post by: Karric on June 10, 2015, 11:38:05 AM
i also like it
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Post by: saph the sergal on January 05, 2016, 01:43:24 PM
jesus this is still pulling people i forgot all about it because not long after my last post of the story i lost all the files to a stupid mistake of mine (backups are important to do) and life got in the way so if anyone wants me to continue this ill see about writing some more when possible
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Post by: JFox on July 29, 2016, 01:01:10 PM
 :P I agree ^_^ looking great so far!
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Post by: Shoon on July 29, 2016, 01:24:55 PM
its looking good.